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		<title>Template:Did you know nominations/Czech language</title>
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		<updated>2014-11-07T15:28:51Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;184.147.131.89: alt 3, partial review&lt;/p&gt;
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* ... that the '''[[Czech language]]''' contains the rare sound ''[[ř]]'' (a [[raised alveolar non-sonorant trill]]), which sounds like something in between a trilled ''r'' and the ''g'' in ''genre''? (example: {{audio|Cs-řeka.ogg|&amp;quot;řeka&amp;quot; (river)}})&lt;br /&gt;
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:* '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[Czech language]]''' contains seven [[grammatical case]]s for nouns and adjectives, each case signifying a different role in the sentence?&lt;br /&gt;
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Bertha Lamme Feicht|Bertha Lamme Feicht]]&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;small&amp;gt;Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Tezero|Tezero]] ([[User talk:Tezero|talk]]). Self nominated at 03:21, 22 September 2014 (UTC)&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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*'''Alternate hook''': ... that the '''[[Czech language]]''' contains a phoneme that does not occur in any other known language? [[User:Newyorkbrad|Newyorkbrad]] ([[User talk:Newyorkbrad|talk]]) 00:40, 30 September 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
:*I'd accept that, though I think it'd be more interesting to the reader to specify what it sounds like, especially with a sound file. [[User:Tezero|Tezero]] ([[User talk:Tezero|talk]]) 00:48, 30 September 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
:**That works for me; I didn't mean to suggest that had to come out. [[User:Newyorkbrad|Newyorkbrad]] ([[User talk:Newyorkbrad|talk]]) 23:16, 30 September 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Full review still needed. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 01:30, 25 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::* '''ALT 3''' ...that the '''[[Czech language]]''' contains a sound, ''[[ř]]'' (example: {{audio|Cs-řeka.ogg|&amp;quot;řeka&amp;quot; (river)}}), that apparently does not occur in any other known language? [[Special:Contributions/184.147.131.89|184.147.131.89]] ([[User talk:184.147.131.89|talk]]) 15:28, 7 November 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] '''partial review:''' &lt;br /&gt;
:* Timing is fine: the good article listing was made on Sept 20 and the nomination here on Sept 22. The article is more than long enough.&lt;br /&gt;
:* The QPQ was completed. The image is free and fine to use small, but in the article it only appears in the infobox. Suggest an image is not needed here.&lt;br /&gt;
:* The proposed hooks are within length, neutral and interesting. However, in the article, the citation occurs after the description of the phoneme only, while the part about the phoneme being unique to Czech is in a separate, uncited sentence. Unfortunately, the citation is a book so I can't check if it would be ok to use it for both pieces of information. {{ping|Tezero}}, do you have the book? Can you check? &lt;br /&gt;
:* If the hook can be sorted, I am willing to go through and do the paraphrase/copyright check for all the sources I can (there are 108 sources in the article, but most are offline books). [[Special:Contributions/184.147.131.89|184.147.131.89]] ([[User talk:184.147.131.89|talk]]) 15:28, 7 November 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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		<updated>2014-11-03T10:52:06Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;184.147.131.89: ready to go&lt;/p&gt;
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* ... &amp;lt;s&amp;gt;that '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|VIHE]], speaks of three &amp;quot;H's&amp;quot;: develop your head, feel with your heart, and work with your hands for the development of the society?&amp;lt;/s&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Fairy lorikeet]]&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;small&amp;gt;Created by [[User:AmritasyaPutra|AmritasyaPutra]] ([[User talk:AmritasyaPutra|talk]]). Self nominated at 13:16, 28 September 2014 (UTC)&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]'''Things that are good:'''&lt;br /&gt;
:* This article was created Sept 25, nominated Sept 28, which is within the timeframe. It is 1,800 characters, is neutrally written and is cited with properly formatted citations, mostly to newspapers. Two sources are offline and are accepted in good faith. Only concerns re paraphrasing/etc are noted in section below.&lt;br /&gt;
:* The hook meets length requirements, is neutral and not negative (this article is a BLP), and corresponds with the statement in the cited source. Interesting is always subjective; I have proposed some alt hooks below but would not mind if the promoter chooses the original hook.&lt;br /&gt;
:* The nominator reviewed another nomination, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Fairy lorikeet]], as required. There is no image to worry about.&lt;br /&gt;
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]'''Things that need fixing:'''&lt;br /&gt;
:* If the original hook is used, quotation marks should be added around the text &amp;quot;develop your head, feel with your heart, and work with your hands for the development of the society&amp;quot; since this is a direct quote from the source newspaper.&lt;br /&gt;
:* I have put quotes around another couple of phrases, but these I think are close paraphrasing that need to be rewritten:&lt;br /&gt;
::* '''article''': He has exhorted youth to read books of Swami Vivekananda to gain self-confidence and strengthen their character. &lt;br /&gt;
::* '''source''': exhorted youth on Tuesday to read books of Swami Vivekananda to gain self-confidence and strengthen their character.&lt;br /&gt;
:::: Changed to (by AmritasyaPutra): He encourages students to develop self-confidence and build a strong character by reading the books of Swami Vivekananda.&lt;br /&gt;
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::* '''article''': He advocates for the education system to place more emphasis on human and spiritual values &lt;br /&gt;
::* '''source''': wanted the education system to place more emphasis on human and spiritual values&lt;br /&gt;
:::: Changed to (by AmritasyaPutra): According to him human and spiritual values need to be given more importance in the education system.&lt;br /&gt;
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::* '''article''': According to him, of late there is a surge in use of spirituality in management for two reasons: employees need meaningful existence in their personal and professional life, and corporate leadership has to look for better ways of motivating the employees and seeking innovative solutions &lt;br /&gt;
::* '''source''': Of late there is a surge in use of spirituality in management for two reasons: one the employees need meaningful existence in personal and professional life and second-Corporate leadership is looking for better ways of motivating the employees and seeking innovative solutions.&lt;br /&gt;
:::: Changed to (by AmritasyaPutra): According to him, spirituality is finding popularity with management courses because it helps employees in their search for a purpose in their personal and professional life and also because it is a novel way to motivate them into finding creative approach to problem solving.&lt;br /&gt;
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:*  [[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] '''Some ALT hooks'''&lt;br /&gt;
:* I would like to propose some alt hooks because I prefer context in a hook and therefore would like to spell out VIHE (which is an interesting name anyway). I also think it is normal to give Swamis their title when referring to them. I think that the sources in the article support these alt hooks but understand another reviewer should double-check and make a call between all the proposed hooks.&lt;br /&gt;
:* '''ALT 1''' ...that Swami '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of the [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence]], speaks of three &amp;quot;H's&amp;quot;: &amp;quot;develop your head, feel with your heart, and work with your hands for the development of the society&amp;quot;?&lt;br /&gt;
:* '''ALT 2''' ...that Swami '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of the [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence]], teaches a &amp;quot;philosophy of strength and fearlessness&amp;quot;?&lt;br /&gt;
:* &amp;lt;s&amp;gt;'''ALT 3''' ...that Swami '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of the [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence]], gives talks on spirituality in management?&lt;br /&gt;
:* '''ALT 4''' ...that the &amp;quot;three H's&amp;quot; taught by Swami '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of the [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence]], refer to three body parts that can work for the development of society?&amp;lt;/s&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
:* [[Special:Contributions/184.147.131.89|184.147.131.89]] ([[User talk:184.147.131.89|talk]]) 22:47, 2 November 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::: I liked all the Alternates proposed here, I would specifically like Alt 1 or Alt 2. Thank you! --[[User:AmritasyaPutra|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;font-family: Tahoma, Geneva, sans-serif;color: #FF9933&amp;quot;&amp;gt;AmritasyaPutra&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]]&amp;lt;sup&amp;gt;[[User talk:AmritasyaPutra|T]]&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt; 01:57, 3 November 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Very nice job on the rewrites! I have struck the extra hooks. Promoter, please make the call between Alt 1 and Alt 2. Thanks [[Special:Contributions/184.147.131.89|184.147.131.89]] ([[User talk:184.147.131.89|talk]]) 10:52, 3 November 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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		<updated>2014-11-02T22:47:32Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;184.147.131.89: review - mostly very good but some paraphrasing needs fixing; alt hooks proposed&lt;/p&gt;
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* ... that '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|VIHE]], speaks of three &amp;quot;H's&amp;quot;: develop your head, feel with your heart, and work with your hands for the development of the society?&lt;br /&gt;
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]'''Things that are good:'''&lt;br /&gt;
:* This article was created Sept 25, nominated Sept 28, which is within the timeframe. It is 1,800 characters, is neutrally written and is cited with properly formatted citations, mostly to newspapers. Two sources are offline and are accepted in good faith. Only concerns re paraphrasing/etc are noted in section below.&lt;br /&gt;
:* The hook meets length requirements, is neutral and not negative (this article is a BLP), and corresponds with the statement in the cited source. Interesting is always subjective; I have proposed some alt hooks below but would not mind if the promoter chooses the original hook.&lt;br /&gt;
:* The nominator reviewed another nomination, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Fairy lorikeet]], as required. There is no image to worry about.&lt;br /&gt;
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]'''Things that need fixing:'''&lt;br /&gt;
:* If the original hook is used, quotation marks should be added around the text &amp;quot;develop your head, feel with your heart, and work with your hands for the development of the society&amp;quot; since this is a direct quote from the source newspaper.&lt;br /&gt;
:* I have put quotes around another couple of phrases, but these I think are close paraphrasings that need to be rewritten:&lt;br /&gt;
::* '''article''': He has exhorted youth to read books of Swami Vivekananda to gain self-confidence and strengthen their character. &lt;br /&gt;
::* '''source''': exhorted youth on Tuesday to read books of Swami Vivekananda to gain self-confidence and strengthen their character.&lt;br /&gt;
::* '''article''': He advocates for the education system to place more emphasis on human and spiritual values &lt;br /&gt;
::* '''source''': wanted the education system to place more emphasis on human and spiritual values&lt;br /&gt;
::* '''article''': According to him, of late there is a surge in use of spirituality in management for two reasons: employees need meaningful existence in their personal and professional life, and corporate leadership has to look for better ways of motivating the employees and seeking innovative solutions &lt;br /&gt;
::* '''source''': Of late there is a surge in use of spirituality in management for two reasons: one the employees need meaningful existence in personal and professional life and second-Corporate leadership is looking for better ways of motivating the employees and seeking innovative solutions.&lt;br /&gt;
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:*  [[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] '''Some ALT hooks'''&lt;br /&gt;
:* I would like to propose some alt hooks because I prefer context in a hook and therefore would like to spell out VIHE (which is an interesting name anyway). I also think it is normal to give Swamis their title when referring to them. I think that the sources in the article support these alt hooks but understand another reviewer should double-check and make a call between all the proposed hooks.&lt;br /&gt;
:* '''ALT 1''' ...that Swami '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of the [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence]], speaks of three &amp;quot;H's&amp;quot;: &amp;quot;develop your head, feel with your heart, and work with your hands for the development of the society&amp;quot;?&lt;br /&gt;
:* '''ALT 2''' ...that Swami '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of the [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence]], teaches a &amp;quot;philosophy of strength and fearlessness&amp;quot;?&lt;br /&gt;
:* '''ALT 3''' ...that Swami '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of the [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence]], gives talks on spirituality in management?&lt;br /&gt;
:* '''ALT 4''' ...that the &amp;quot;three H's&amp;quot; taught by Swami '''[[Bodhamayananda]]''', director of the [[Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence, Hyderabad|Vivekananda Institute of Human Excellence]], refer to three body parts that can work for the development of society?&lt;br /&gt;
:* [[Special:Contributions/184.147.131.89|184.147.131.89]] ([[User talk:184.147.131.89|talk]]) 22:47, 2 November 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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		<updated>2014-11-02T20:16:35Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;184.147.131.89: signing sorry&lt;/p&gt;
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* ... that journalist '''[[Hanna Stjärne]]''' ''(pictured)'' in September 2014 was announced to be the new CEO of [[Sveriges Television]] and that she would take the post within six months?&lt;br /&gt;
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:*''Reviewed:''Caitlin Doughty&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;small&amp;gt;Created by [[User:BabbaQ|BabbaQ]] ([[User talk:BabbaQ|talk]]). Self nominated at 21:41, 26 September 2014 (UTC)&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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:*''' ALT 1''' ... that '''[[Hanna Stjärne]]''' ''(pictured)'', the youngest-ever CEO of a Swedish national radio channel, has now been named CEO of [[Sveriges Television]]?[[Special:Contributions/184.147.131.89|184.147.131.89]] ([[User talk:184.147.131.89|talk]]) 20:16, 2 November 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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		<updated>2014-11-02T20:16:14Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;184.147.131.89: propose alt hook&lt;/p&gt;
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:*''Reviewed:''Caitlin Doughty&lt;br /&gt;
&amp;lt;small&amp;gt;Created by [[User:BabbaQ|BabbaQ]] ([[User talk:BabbaQ|talk]]). Self nominated at 21:41, 26 September 2014 (UTC)&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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:*''' ALT 1''' ... that '''[[Hanna Stjärne]]''' ''(pictured)'', the youngest-ever CEO of a Swedish national radio channel, has now been named CEO of [[Sveriges Television]]?&lt;br /&gt;
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		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;184.147.131.89: this one is ready, please choose one of the two hooks&lt;/p&gt;
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====Saints Row: Gat out of Hell====&lt;br /&gt;
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* ... that in '''''[[Saints Row: Gat out of Hell]]''''', the [[player-character]] works to fill &amp;quot;Satan's Wrath&amp;quot;?&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;small&amp;gt;Created by [[User:MAinternational|MAinternational]] ([[User talk:MAinternational|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Czar|Czar]] ([[User talk:Czar|talk]]) at 05:53, 8 September 2014 (UTC)&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;.&lt;br /&gt;
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[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Preliminary review. First, things that are ok:&lt;br /&gt;
:* New – Created Aug 29, nominated Sept 8 = 9 days&lt;br /&gt;
:* Long enough – is 2,300 characters&lt;br /&gt;
:* Within policy – I don't see any editorializing. Sources are cited. There is no close paraphrasing or worse from the cited sources. &lt;br /&gt;
:* Hook – is about 100 characters &lt;br /&gt;
:* Hook – is neutral and does not focus on living people&lt;br /&gt;
:* QPQ – not self-nominated&lt;br /&gt;
:* Image - no image&lt;br /&gt;
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Second, things that need fixing.&lt;br /&gt;
:* Within policy – 7/8 sources are cited to bare urls, I understand that this formatting should be changed.&lt;br /&gt;
:* Within policy – I don't know who is copying from what, but the sentence ''&amp;quot;The game's plot sees Johnny Gat and the Saints in search of the leader of the Saints who has been kidnapped by Satan.&amp;quot;'' appears word for word in the imdb page for the game. There are similarly google results for ''&amp;quot;Five islands make up the city: Shantytown, Barrens, Downtown, Forge, and the Den, all surrounding Satan's tower on a middle island.&amp;quot;''&lt;br /&gt;
:* Hook – I think the hook might be interesting, but I'm not sure because the sentence doesn't make sense. (Probably because I don't know anything about video games.) What does it mean to &amp;quot;fill a level&amp;quot;? Is that the same as complete a level? I could see it if this meant &amp;quot;fulfill Satan's Wrath&amp;quot; or &amp;quot;arouse Satan's Wrath&amp;quot; but it seems unclear at the moment.&lt;br /&gt;
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Third, Help?&lt;br /&gt;
:* Within policy – Three citations are to YouTube videos. Is the reviewer expected to watch all these videos to check for plagiarism? It would be a total of nearly 20 minutes.&lt;br /&gt;
:* Hook – the hook is cited to a 12 minute YouTube video. Can you provide the exact time to check it please?[[Special:Contributions/184.147.132.209|184.147.132.209]] ([[User talk:184.147.132.209|talk]]) 17:56, 10 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
::: Thanks for the review. I didn't write the article, so I don't have the answers for some of your questions. The [http://www.imdb.com/title/tt4009734/ IMDB page] uses a portion of that quoted line (added in [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Saints_Row:_Gat_out_of_Hell&amp;amp;diff=623828196&amp;amp;oldid=623369988 this edit]) and nothing else from the article, so it looks to me like IMDB got its line from WP and not vice versa. (You can ask {{ping|MAinternational|p=}}, the editor who added that line, if you insist.) The other results are apparently copying WP, but I think that's self-evident. The hook is a play on words and isn't supposed to tell you exactly what's happening. If you meant its usage in the article, I cleaned that up (level→meter). No, reviewers aren't expected to watch all the videos. I gave them a cursory review when I nominated this and I didn't see copyvio. The hook citation is at 2:46. &amp;lt;span style='font:1.1em&amp;quot;Avenir&amp;quot;;padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909;color:#909'&amp;gt;czar&amp;amp;nbsp;[[User:Czar|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:#909&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;lt;u&amp;gt;♔&amp;lt;/u&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]]&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt; 10:04, 11 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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::::: {{ping|MAinternational|Czar}} - Sorry to have kept you waiting, and thank you for the response. I watched the video at 2:46 and it says &amp;quot;the meter has a 'piss off Satan' level, and the more you fill that up the more you progress in your story.&amp;quot; So the hook does match this source.&lt;br /&gt;
::::: I would like to suggest a tweaked hook, though:&lt;br /&gt;
::::: * '''ALT1''' ... that in '''''[[Saints Row: Gat out of Hell]]''''', the [[player-character]] must increase &amp;quot;Satan's Wrath&amp;quot; to progress in the game?&lt;br /&gt;
::::: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I'm leaving the icon as a question mark for two reasons:&lt;br /&gt;
::::: - the bare urls in the References section still need to be formatted properly&lt;br /&gt;
::::: - I don't know whether a hook sourced to a YouTube video is allowed, since I have seen complaints about hook sources on the Talk page. {{ping|BlueMoonset|Crisco 1492}} or other experts, can you weigh in on this point? If this is ok, fixing the bare urls should make this good to go. Thank you. [[Special:Contributions/184.147.132.209|184.147.132.209]] ([[User talk:184.147.132.209|talk]]) 23:07, 22 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
:::::*It's from IGN's official feed. Should be fine.&amp;amp;nbsp;—&amp;amp;nbsp;[[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 23:09, 22 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
::::::: The video is from a [[Wikipedia:Identifying reliable sources|reliable source]] ([[WP:VG/RS]]), so it should be fine. Also I don't think there's any DYK mandate to use non-bare URLs. They're going to be flushed out of the article eventually anyway, so I would rather not expand them right now. I prefer the main hook as I find it more hooky. Appreciate the review &amp;lt;span style='font:1.1em&amp;quot;Avenir&amp;quot;;padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909;color:#909'&amp;gt;czar&amp;amp;nbsp;[[User:Czar|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:#909&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;lt;u&amp;gt;♔&amp;lt;/u&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]]&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt; 03:55, 23 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::::::*[[User:Czar|Czar]], there is indeed a DYK mandate regarding bare URLs. [[WP:DYKSG#D3]] is quite clear: {{tq|References in the article must not be bare URLs}}. If you want this to qualify, you'll have to do something about them. Maybe the new Reflinks tool can handle this task for you (I haven't yet used it myself): [[User:Zhaofeng Li/Reflinks]]. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 21:27, 26 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
::::::::: Over 100 DYKs and I've never seen that invoked. Anyway, thanks—done now. Highly recommend that new Reflinks, especially as the old tool is broken. I updated the guideline. &amp;lt;span style='font:1.1em&amp;quot;Avenir&amp;quot;;padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909;color:#909'&amp;gt;czar&amp;amp;nbsp;[[User:Czar|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:#909&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;lt;u&amp;gt;♔&amp;lt;/u&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]]&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt; 22:28, 26 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:::::::::::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Ready. Could the promoter please choose between the two proposed hooks?&lt;br /&gt;
:::::::::::Thanks Czar for all the work. I'm sorry for my slow responses but hope there is still time to use this before Halloween, if this was your intention.[[Special:Contributions/184.147.131.89|184.147.131.89]] ([[User talk:184.147.131.89|talk]]) 16:03, 30 October 2014 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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