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{{*mp}}... that the '''[[Geology of North America|North American continent]]''' has one shield but many orogens?&lt;br /&gt;
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:{{*mp}} ''Comment'': Hook not directly sourced, but in context of all the sources used. It is a broad overview article which deserves a broad hook. But I'm open for suggestions :)&lt;br /&gt;
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*The hook is not only &amp;quot;not directly sourced,&amp;quot; it's not included in the article. It is contradicted by a caption, also. &amp;quot;The Canadian Shield can be seen on a map showing only metamorphic rocks. The shield is the large brown area in the northeast of the continent. A similar structure can also be seen with different rock types.&amp;quot; A structure similar to a shield, or a similar structure, meaning another shield? This article has many other problems. However, if the hook is not only &amp;quot;not directly sourced,&amp;quot; but does not appear anywhere in the article, that is a big front-page no no. The paragraph about the Canadian shield is also difficult to follow, and the title headings are confusing in this area. -[[Special:Contributions/68.107.137.178|68.107.137.178]] ([[User talk:68.107.137.178|talk]]) 10:42, 26 April 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
:*Thank you for taking the time to review the article. The caption didn't contradict the hook, but was was a little too much jargon on my behalf. I reworded it. How does the hook &amp;quot;DYK that the Canadian Shield is the largest outcrop of metamorphic rocks on the North American continent&amp;quot; sound? I'm still going to look through the headlines and see if they are coherent. --[[User:Tobias1984|Tobias1984]] ([[User talk:Tobias1984|talk]]) 11:23, 26 April 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
::*I can't find that in the article, can you link to the appropriate section? -[[Special:Contributions/68.107.137.178|68.107.137.178]] ([[User talk:68.107.137.178|talk]]) 23:16, 27 April 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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There is some strange original research in this article; it does not belong on the main page. -[[Special:Contributions/68.107.137.178|68.107.137.178]] ([[User talk:68.107.137.178|talk]]) 04:08, 1 May 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
:If you can't point out the sentences, then it is probably not a valid criticism of this article. --[[User:Tobias1984|Tobias1984]] ([[User talk:Tobias1984|talk]]) 21:11, 1 May 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
::I have pointed out specifics, you just say I didn't instead of addressing them. Another editor just reverts. Article improvement sure isn't wanted, just a score! And I though it was an encyclopedia, not a playground. -[[Special:Contributions/198.228.216.153|198.228.216.153]] ([[User talk:198.228.216.153|talk]]) 07:04, 2 May 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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