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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article length, date, article content, citations, and POV and the QPQ check out. I have two concerns: 1) Is the topic notable? It probably is but can the nominator state briefly here the criterion that the song meets? 2) Is the hook relevant? The hook is mainly about a location, and not a location in the song, merely the location of the music video filmed to promote the song. So I suggest '''ALT1''' ... that Ivy Queen describes her song "'''[[Amor Puro]]'''" as "an honest statement of what love is?" [[User:Woz2|Woz2]] ([[User talk:Woz2|talk]]) 07:59, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article length, date, article content, citations, and POV and the QPQ check out. I have two concerns: 1) Is the topic notable? It probably is but can the nominator state briefly here the criterion that the song meets? 2) Is the hook relevant? The hook is mainly about a location, and not a location in the song, merely the location of the music video filmed to promote the song. So I suggest '''ALT1''' ... that Ivy Queen describes her song "'''[[Amor Puro]]'''" as "an honest statement of what love is?" [[User:Woz2|Woz2]] ([[User talk:Woz2|talk]]) 07:59, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
::*Okay, 1.) The song partly fails [[WP:SONGS]] because it hasn't charted. But, it has enough coverage in reliable third party sources. Seven of the 15 are primarily on the song while at least three others mention the song including a review from Alllmusic. 2.) I've run into this before while reviewing a DYK, but from what I've been told, "it doesn't matter, it just has to be related". EDIT: Also, I submitted a similar hook like your ALT which was approved by reviewers. However, when the hook went through prep 2, it was change dramatically by an administrator who thought that songs about love were too common. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Sentimientos_%28Ivy_Queen_song%29 Here] is the hook and discussion which was approved and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:DivaKnockouts/Archive_1#DYK_for_Sentimientos_.28Ivy_Queen_song.29 here] is the hook that appeared on the main page. — [[User:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size: 10pt"><font color="#0095c5">Diva</font></span>]][[User_Talk:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family:Lucida Calligraphy;font-size: 10pt"><font color="#442288">Knockouts</font></span>]] 23:14, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
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::*Okay, 1.) The song partly fails [[WP:SONGS]] because it hasn't charted. But, it has enough coverage in reliable third party sources. Seven of the 15 are primarily on the song while at least three others mention the song including a review from Alllmusic. 2.) I've run into this before while reviewing a DYK, but from what I've been told, "it doesn't matter, it just has to be related". EDIT: Also, I submitted a similar hook like your ALT which was approved by reviewers. However, when the hook went through prep 2, it was change dramatically by an administrator who thought that songs about love were too common. [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Template:Did_you_know_nominations/Sentimientos_%28Ivy_Queen_song%29 Here] is the hook and discussion which was approved and [http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:DivaKnockouts/Archive_1#DYK_for_Sentimientos_.28Ivy_Queen_song.29 here] is the hook that appeared on the main page. — [[User:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size: 10pt"><span style="color:#0095c5;">Diva</span></span>]][[User_Talk:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family:Lucida Calligraphy;font-size: 10pt"><span style="color:#442288;">Knockouts</span></span>]] 23:14, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
 
:::Okay on notability. As for the hook, it still seems a little strained to me. How about:<br/>
 
:::Okay on notability. As for the hook, it still seems a little strained to me. How about:<br/>
 
:::'''ALT2''': "... that the music video for "'''[[Amor Puro]]'''" was filmed at [[St. Bernard de Clairvaux Church]], originally built in Spain but dismantled and brought to the USA by [[William Randolf Hearst]]?
 
:::'''ALT2''': "... that the music video for "'''[[Amor Puro]]'''" was filmed at [[St. Bernard de Clairvaux Church]], originally built in Spain but dismantled and brought to the USA by [[William Randolf Hearst]]?
 
:::[[User:Woz2|Woz2]] ([[User talk:Woz2|talk]]) 11:25, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
 
:::[[User:Woz2|Woz2]] ([[User talk:Woz2|talk]]) 11:25, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
::::Support ALT2. Looks better now. — [[User:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size: 10pt"><font color="#0095c5">Diva</font></span>]][[User_Talk:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family:Lucida Calligraphy;font-size: 10pt"><font color="#442288">Knockouts</font></span>]] 14:18, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
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::::Support ALT2. Looks better now. — [[User:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size: 10pt"><span style="color:#0095c5;">Diva</span></span>]][[User_Talk:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family:Lucida Calligraphy;font-size: 10pt"><span style="color:#442288;">Knockouts</span></span>]] 14:18, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
{{outdent}} [[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  New reviewer needed for new hook. — [[User:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size: 10pt"><font color="#0095c5">Diva</font></span>]][[User_Talk:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family:Lucida Calligraphy;font-size: 10pt"><font color="#442288">Knockouts</font></span>]] 14:18, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
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{{outdent}} [[File:Symbol redirect vote4.png|16px]]  New reviewer needed for new hook. — [[User:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family: Lucida Handwriting;font-size: 10pt"><span style="color:#0095c5;">Diva</span></span>]][[User_Talk:DivaKnockouts|<span style="font-family:Lucida Calligraphy;font-size: 10pt"><span style="color:#442288;">Knockouts</span></span>]] 14:18, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
  
 
* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Given my hook edits were minor, I feel comfortable saying this is good to go. [[User:Woz2|Woz2]] ([[User talk:Woz2|talk]]) 16:33, 25 March 2013 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
 
* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Given my hook edits were minor, I feel comfortable saying this is good to go. [[User:Woz2|Woz2]] ([[User talk:Woz2|talk]]) 16:33, 25 March 2013 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

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17x17px The following is an archived discussion of Amor Puro's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s (talk) page, the nominated article's (talk) page, or the Did you know12x12px (talk) page. Unless there is consensus to re-open the archived discussion here. No further edits should be made to this page. See the talk page guidelines for (more) information.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 17:28, 27 March 2013 (UTC).

Amor Puro

  • ... that the music video for "Amor Puro" was filmed at the St. Bernard of Clairvaux, a building built in 1133 AD in Spain and dismantled and sent to New York in more than 11,000 crates in 1925?

Moved to mainspace by DivaKnockouts (talk). Self nominated at 05:03, 23 March 2013 (UTC).

  • 16px Article length, date, article content, citations, and POV and the QPQ check out. I have two concerns: 1) Is the topic notable? It probably is but can the nominator state briefly here the criterion that the song meets? 2) Is the hook relevant? The hook is mainly about a location, and not a location in the song, merely the location of the music video filmed to promote the song. So I suggest ALT1 ... that Ivy Queen describes her song "Amor Puro" as "an honest statement of what love is?" Woz2 (talk) 07:59, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
  • Okay, 1.) The song partly fails WP:SONGS because it hasn't charted. But, it has enough coverage in reliable third party sources. Seven of the 15 are primarily on the song while at least three others mention the song including a review from Alllmusic. 2.) I've run into this before while reviewing a DYK, but from what I've been told, "it doesn't matter, it just has to be related". EDIT: Also, I submitted a similar hook like your ALT which was approved by reviewers. However, when the hook went through prep 2, it was change dramatically by an administrator who thought that songs about love were too common. Here is the hook and discussion which was approved and here is the hook that appeared on the main page. — DivaKnockouts 23:14, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
Okay on notability. As for the hook, it still seems a little strained to me. How about:
ALT2: "... that the music video for "Amor Puro" was filmed at St. Bernard de Clairvaux Church, originally built in Spain but dismantled and brought to the USA by William Randolf Hearst?
Woz2 (talk) 11:25, 25 March 2013 (UTC)
Support ALT2. Looks better now. — DivaKnockouts 14:18, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

Template:Outdent 16px New reviewer needed for new hook. — DivaKnockouts 14:18, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

  • 16px Given my hook edits were minor, I feel comfortable saying this is good to go. Woz2 (talk) 16:33, 25 March 2013 (UTC)