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* ... <s>that '''[[Baloke]]''', a small village in [[Punjab, India]], is the birthplace of [[Satnam Singh Bhamara]] - the first Indian to be drafted into the [[NBA]]?</s> <small>Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/</small><small>http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece</small> | * ... <s>that '''[[Baloke]]''', a small village in [[Punjab, India]], is the birthplace of [[Satnam Singh Bhamara]] - the first Indian to be drafted into the [[NBA]]?</s> <small>Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/</small><small>http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece</small> | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Ampulloclitocybe clavipes]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Ampulloclitocybe clavipes]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Fitindia|Fitindia]] ([[User talk:Fitindia|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Fitindia|Fitindia]] ([[User talk:Fitindia|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new, long enough, no copyvio issues. The hook is well-cited and interesting although I would adjust the hook slightly to read like this : | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new, long enough, no copyvio issues. The hook is well-cited and interesting although I would adjust the hook slightly to read like this : | ||
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:::::{{ping|Yoninah}} thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you. [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">''' FITINDIA '''</font>]] 03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | :::::{{ping|Yoninah}} thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you. [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">''' FITINDIA '''</font>]] 03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | ||
::::::{{ping|Fitindia}} thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the [[sex ratio]]s don't make sense. A [[ratio]] is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | ::::::{{ping|Fitindia}} thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the [[sex ratio]]s don't make sense. A [[ratio]] is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC) | ||
| − | }}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | + | :::::::{{ping|Yoninah}} yes the figures are out of 1000. Thank you for pointing that out. I have added it to the article. [[User:Fitindia|<font style="background: orange" face="Courier" color="#FFFFFF">''' FITINDIA '''</font>]] 08:59, 26 October 2017 (UTC) |
| + | ::::::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thanks. Wow, India has so many more males than females? Restoring tick per Jon Kolbert's review. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 09:06, 26 October 2017 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | ||
Latest revision as of 09:07, 26 October 2017
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 09:07, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
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that Baloke, a small village in Punjab, India, is the birthplace of Satnam Singh Bhamara - the first Indian to be drafted into the NBA?Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece
Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 16:58, 17 October 2017 (UTC).
Article is new, long enough, no copyvio issues. The hook is well-cited and interesting although I would adjust the hook slightly to read like this :- ALT1: ... that Baloke, a small village in Punjab, India, is the birthplace of Satnam Singh Bhamara - the first Indian to be drafted into the National Basketball Association?Source:http://indianexpress.com/article/sports/sport-others/draft-winds-sweep-satnam-singh-bhamras-dusty-village-ballo-ke/http://www.thehindu.com/sport/other-sports/satnam-singh-gets-drafted-in-nba/article7359269.ece
- Writing "National Basketball Association" in full is better as not everyone knows what the NBA could be referring to. Jon Kolbert (talk) 14:56, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping yes I think ALT1 is better. Thank you. FITINDIA 15:32, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
Template:Re Perfect. QPQ done, hook is good to go. Jon Kolbert (talk) 15:53, 18 October 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping please address the clarification tag that I added. I edited the page for English grammar; please also check that I didn't add/erase something by mistake. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 20:48, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you. FITINDIA 03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the sex ratios don't make sense. A ratio is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? Yoninah (talk) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping yes the figures are out of 1000. Thank you for pointing that out. I have added it to the article. FITINDIA 08:59, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you. While you quoted the source accurately, the sex ratios don't make sense. A ratio is a figure like 1:1 (one out of one), not a single number like 905. Unless this figure means 905 out of 1000? Perhaps you have a different source for the average sex ratio and child sex ratio? Yoninah (talk) 08:49, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you for the edit, looks much better now. I have added the citation that was required. Thank you. FITINDIA 03:51, 26 October 2017 (UTC)