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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 19:07, 14 February 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
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*<s> ... that the '''[[Black Cross Nurses]]''' associations, ''(pictured)'' trained women of [[African descent]] to be nurses, allowing them to be seen in public leadership roles, in an era when access to both was limited?</s>
 
*<s> ... that the '''[[Black Cross Nurses]]''' associations, ''(pictured)'' trained women of [[African descent]] to be nurses, allowing them to be seen in public leadership roles, in an era when access to both was limited?</s>
  
:* '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[Black Cross Nurses]]''' ''(pictured)'' required all its nurses to be of [[African descent]], no older than 45 years old and able to read and write?
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:* '''ALT1''': <s>... that the '''[[Black Cross Nurses]]''' ''(pictured)'' required all its nurses to be of [[African descent]], no older than 45 years old and able to read and write?</s>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Louise Lincoln Kerr House and Studio]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Louise Lincoln Kerr House and Studio]]
 
:* ''Comment'': For WikiProject Women in Red's [[Wikipedia:Meetup/Women in Red/7|Black Women's History editathon]]
 
:* ''Comment'': For WikiProject Women in Red's [[Wikipedia:Meetup/Women in Red/7|Black Women's History editathon]]
 
<small>Created by [[User:SusunW|SusunW]] ([[User talk:SusunW|talk]]), [[User:Rosiestep|Rosiestep]] ([[User talk:Rosiestep|talk]]), and [[User:Megalibrarygirl|Megalibrarygirl]] ([[User talk:Megalibrarygirl|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:SusunW|SusunW]] ([[User talk:SusunW|talk]]) at 01:40, 1 February 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:SusunW|SusunW]] ([[User talk:SusunW|talk]]), [[User:Rosiestep|Rosiestep]] ([[User talk:Rosiestep|talk]]), and [[User:Megalibrarygirl|Megalibrarygirl]] ([[User talk:Megalibrarygirl|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:SusunW|SusunW]] ([[User talk:SusunW|talk]]) at 01:40, 1 February 2016 (UTC).</small>
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Substantial article on rich sources, thank you, team! Nice licensed image which gives a good idea of the time and style. The hook troubles me, sorry. One concern: where to put ''(pictured)''? Not behind association, - the association is not pictured. Perhaps say it is modeled after the Red Cross, then you can drop "association"? I like the original hook better, but not enough yet. "to both" refers to what? Try harder? Perhaps something completely different? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 19:01, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Substantial article on rich sources, thank you, team! Nice licensed image which gives a good idea of the time and style. The hook troubles me, sorry. One concern: where to put ''(pictured)''? Not behind association, - the association is not pictured. Perhaps say it is modeled after the Red Cross, then you can drop "association"? I like the original hook better, but not enough yet. "to both" refers to what? Try harder? Perhaps something completely different? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 19:01, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
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::::{{u|Gerda Arendt}} I agree it's redundant. 197 chars if we use: [[User:SusunW|SusunW]] ([[User talk:SusunW|talk]]) 23:41, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
 
::::{{u|Gerda Arendt}} I agree it's redundant. 197 chars if we use: [[User:SusunW|SusunW]] ([[User talk:SusunW|talk]]) 23:41, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
 
::::*'''ALT3''': ... that in an era when women of [[African descent]] had little access to education or public role models, the  '''[[Black Cross Nurses]]''' ''(pictured)'' trained them in [[healthcare]], allowing them to be seen in leadership roles?
 
::::*'''ALT3''': ... that in an era when women of [[African descent]] had little access to education or public role models, the  '''[[Black Cross Nurses]]''' ''(pictured)'' trained them in [[healthcare]], allowing them to be seen in leadership roles?
::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Fine! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 23:50, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
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:::::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Fine! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 23:50, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 19:07, 14 February 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Zanhe (talk) 19:07, 14 February 2016 (UTC)

Black Cross Nurses

Black Cross Nurse's parade, 1922, Harlem, Manhattan, New York
Black Cross Nurse's parade, 1922, Harlem, Manhattan, New York
  • ... that the Black Cross Nurses associations, (pictured) trained women of African descent to be nurses, allowing them to be seen in public leadership roles, in an era when access to both was limited?

Created by SusunW (talk), Rosiestep (talk), and Megalibrarygirl (talk). Nominated by SusunW (talk) at 01:40, 1 February 2016 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Substantial article on rich sources, thank you, team! Nice licensed image which gives a good idea of the time and style. The hook troubles me, sorry. One concern: where to put (pictured)? Not behind association, - the association is not pictured. Perhaps say it is modeled after the Red Cross, then you can drop "association"? I like the original hook better, but not enough yet. "to both" refers to what? Try harder? Perhaps something completely different? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:01, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
Thank you Template:U It is a reference to the fact that they were barred from education and public roles. What about: SusunW (talk) 19:19, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that in an era when women of African descent had little access to education or public role models, the Black Cross Nurses (pictured) trained them to be nurses, allowing them to be seen in leadership roles?
Symbol confirmed.svg That works for me, thank you! Perhaps drop "to be nurses", as repetitive? Or rearrange the sentence,to have the two nurses not so close together? Watching for new ideas, but this works. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:29, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
Template:U I agree it's redundant. 197 chars if we use: SusunW (talk) 23:41, 3 February 2016 (UTC)
  • ALT3: ... that in an era when women of African descent had little access to education or public role models, the Black Cross Nurses (pictured) trained them in healthcare, allowing them to be seen in leadership roles?
Symbol confirmed.svg Fine! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:50, 3 February 2016 (UTC)