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:''The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. <span style="color:red">'''Please do not modify it.'''</span>  Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as [[Template talk:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|this nomination's talk page]], [[Talk:{{SUBPAGENAME}}|the article's talk page]] or [[Wikipedia talk:Did you know]]), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page.  No further edits should be made to this page.''
 
:''The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. <span style="color:red">'''Please do not modify it.'''</span>  Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as [[Template talk:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|this nomination's talk page]], [[Talk:{{SUBPAGENAME}}|the article's talk page]] or [[Wikipedia talk:Did you know]]), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page.  No further edits should be made to this page.''
  
The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:PumpkinSky|<font color="darkorange">Pumpkin</font><font color="darkblue">Sky</font>]] [[User talk:PumpkinSky|<font color="darkorange">talk</font>]] 16:56, 8 January 2012 (UTC)<br />}}
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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:PumpkinSky|<span style="color:darkorange;">Pumpkin</span><span style="color:darkblue;">Sky</span>]] [[User talk:PumpkinSky|<span style="color:darkorange;">talk</span>]] 16:56, 8 January 2012 (UTC)<br />}}
 
====Brad Sweet====
 
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Everything checks out - within time limits, just long enough (1518 characters), neutral, sourced, no copyvio. But I would suggest a slight article rewrite to clarify and give it more general interest. The hook fact is in the lede, but unsourced. Later in the article the facts are sourced, but the hook is obscured by jargon. So it isn't obvious to a non-expert. Suggest sourcing lede or rewriting the last para in layman's terms. [[User:Fryede|Fryede]] ([[User talk:Fryede|talk]]) 15:45, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Everything checks out - within time limits, just long enough (1518 characters), neutral, sourced, no copyvio. But I would suggest a slight article rewrite to clarify and give it more general interest. The hook fact is in the lede, but unsourced. Later in the article the facts are sourced, but the hook is obscured by jargon. So it isn't obvious to a non-expert. Suggest sourcing lede or rewriting the last para in layman's terms. [[User:Fryede|Fryede]] ([[User talk:Fryede|talk]]) 15:45, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
::*I've added a bit to the last sentence to clarify - does that help? - [[User:The Bushranger|The Bushranger]] <sub><font color="maroon">[[User talk:The Bushranger|One ping only]]</font></sub> 20:02, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
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::*I've added a bit to the last sentence to clarify - does that help? - [[User:The Bushranger|The Bushranger]] <sub>[[User talk:The Bushranger|<span style="color:maroon;">One ping only</span>]]</sub> 20:02, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] That works. [[User:Fryede|Fryede]] ([[User talk:Fryede|talk]]) 21:57, 6 January 2012 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
 
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] That works. [[User:Fryede|Fryede]] ([[User talk:Fryede|talk]]) 21:57, 6 January 2012 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

Latest revision as of 11:18, 29 January 2019

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 16:56, 8 January 2012 (UTC)

Brad Sweet

Created/expanded by The Bushranger (talk). Self nom at 02:03, 6 January 2012 (UTC)

  • Symbol question.svg Everything checks out - within time limits, just long enough (1518 characters), neutral, sourced, no copyvio. But I would suggest a slight article rewrite to clarify and give it more general interest. The hook fact is in the lede, but unsourced. Later in the article the facts are sourced, but the hook is obscured by jargon. So it isn't obvious to a non-expert. Suggest sourcing lede or rewriting the last para in layman's terms. Fryede (talk) 15:45, 6 January 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg That works. Fryede (talk) 21:57, 6 January 2012 (UTC)