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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Victuallers|Victuallers]] ([[User talk:Victuallers|talk]]) 15:34, 3 March 2014 (UTC)<br />
 
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[[File:Carli Lloyd celebrates.jpg|100x100px|Lloyd (second from left) celebrates with United States women's national soccer teammates Kelley O'Hara, Alex Morgan, and Abby Wambach after scoring a goal during the 2012 Olympic final.]]
 
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* ... that two-time Olympic gold medalist '''[[Carli Lloyd]]''' plays for the [[Western New York Flash]] in the [[National Women's Soccer League]]?
 
* ... that two-time Olympic gold medalist '''[[Carli Lloyd]]''' plays for the [[Western New York Flash]] in the [[National Women's Soccer League]]?
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<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Hmlarson|Hmlarson]] ([[User talk:Hmlarson|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 20:23, 23 February 2014 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Hmlarson|Hmlarson]] ([[User talk:Hmlarson|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 20:23, 23 February 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Recent GA, so I'll skip on quality, but the hook is simply more of a pedestrian statement of fact. It's suggest something incorporating that she was the first Rutgers athlete to be all-conference 4 times, or that she was coached by the Red Baron, or the 2008 player of the year. As in, keep that she is a 2-time medalist, but then instead of the "plays for" do another interesting hook. My personal favorite would be "that two-time Olympic gold medalist '''[[Carli Lloyd]]''' was coached by the Red Baron in high school?" You could even add her photo from the infobox where she is wearing red. For any of these hooks, an inline cite would be needed at the end of the sentence in the article, instead of just at the end of the para. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 17:46, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Recent GA, so I'll skip on quality, but the hook is simply more of a pedestrian statement of fact. It's suggest something incorporating that she was the first Rutgers athlete to be all-conference 4 times, or that she was coached by the Red Baron, or the 2008 player of the year. As in, keep that she is a 2-time medalist, but then instead of the "plays for" do another interesting hook. My personal favorite would be "that two-time Olympic gold medalist '''[[Carli Lloyd]]''' was coached by the Red Baron in high school?" You could even add her photo from the infobox where she is wearing red. For any of these hooks, an inline cite would be needed at the end of the sentence in the article, instead of just at the end of the para. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 17:46, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
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:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] For alt 1 with the modification to consecutive, since that is what the source says. [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] for alt 2. Alt 1 is more interesting.  FYI, ref #66's formatting needs to be fixed. Lastly, image is Commons hosted, so good to go, though not the best one to use since it does not look good at such a small size, and if it is used "(pictured)" needs to be added. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 04:31, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
 
:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] For alt 1 with the modification to consecutive, since that is what the source says. [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] for alt 2. Alt 1 is more interesting.  FYI, ref #66's formatting needs to be fixed. Lastly, image is Commons hosted, so good to go, though not the best one to use since it does not look good at such a small size, and if it is used "(pictured)" needs to be added. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 04:31, 3 March 2014 (UTC)
  
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Latest revision as of 15:34, 3 March 2014

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 15:34, 3 March 2014 (UTC)

Carli Lloyd

Lloyd (second from left) celebrates with United States women's national soccer teammates Kelley O'Hara, Alex Morgan, and Abby Wambach after scoring a goal during the 2012 Olympic final.

Improved to Good Article status by Hmlarson (talk). Self nominated at 20:23, 23 February 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Recent GA, so I'll skip on quality, but the hook is simply more of a pedestrian statement of fact. It's suggest something incorporating that she was the first Rutgers athlete to be all-conference 4 times, or that she was coached by the Red Baron, or the 2008 player of the year. As in, keep that she is a 2-time medalist, but then instead of the "plays for" do another interesting hook. My personal favorite would be "that two-time Olympic gold medalist Carli Lloyd was coached by the Red Baron in high school?" You could even add her photo from the infobox where she is wearing red. For any of these hooks, an inline cite would be needed at the end of the sentence in the article, instead of just at the end of the para. Aboutmovies (talk) 17:46, 28 February 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg For alt 1 with the modification to consecutive, since that is what the source says. Symbol confirmed.svg for alt 2. Alt 1 is more interesting. FYI, ref #66's formatting needs to be fixed. Lastly, image is Commons hosted, so good to go, though not the best one to use since it does not look good at such a small size, and if it is used "(pictured)" needs to be added. Aboutmovies (talk) 04:31, 3 March 2014 (UTC)