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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 00:42, 2 February 2018 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Celia M. Burleigh====
 
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* ... that '''[[Celia M. Burleigh]]''' became the first woman pastor ordained into the [[Unitarian Universalism|Unitarian ministry]]?   
 
* ... that '''[[Celia M. Burleigh]]''' became the first woman pastor ordained into the [[Unitarian Universalism|Unitarian ministry]]?   
 
*Source 1 [https://ctcenterforthebook.org/people/ct-authors/gregg-mangan/ Mangan] 2015, p. 230 - <small> [https://books.google.com/books?id=k-fuBwAAQBAJ&pg=PA230#v=onepage&q&f=false On October 5, 1871, Burleigh became the first woman ever ordained in Connecticut, as well as the first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church.]</small>
 
*Source 1 [https://ctcenterforthebook.org/people/ct-authors/gregg-mangan/ Mangan] 2015, p. 230 - <small> [https://books.google.com/books?id=k-fuBwAAQBAJ&pg=PA230#v=onepage&q&f=false On October 5, 1871, Burleigh became the first woman ever ordained in Connecticut, as well as the first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church.]</small>
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<small>Created by [[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:46, 26 January 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
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:* '''Comment'''. {{yo|Doug Coldwell}}: Both article and hook link to [[Unitarian Church]], which is is a redirect to a long disambiguation page. --[[User:BrownHairedGirl|<span style="color:#663200;">Brown</span>HairedGirl]] <small>[[User talk:BrownHairedGirl|(talk)]] • ([[Special:Contributions/BrownHairedGirl|contribs]])</small> 19:04, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
 
:* '''Comment'''. {{yo|Doug Coldwell}}: Both article and hook link to [[Unitarian Church]], which is is a redirect to a long disambiguation page. --[[User:BrownHairedGirl|<span style="color:#663200;">Brown</span>HairedGirl]] <small>[[User talk:BrownHairedGirl|(talk)]] • ([[Special:Contributions/BrownHairedGirl|contribs]])</small> 19:04, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
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:::*tweaked hook of ministry link to [[Unitarian Universalism]] --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 15:11, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
:::*tweaked hook of ministry link to [[Unitarian Universalism]] --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 15:11, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
*{{ping|Zeete}} I believe I corrected as you suggested. {{ping|Zeete}} Will that work? --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 13:46, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
 
*{{ping|Zeete}} I believe I corrected as you suggested. {{ping|Zeete}} Will that work? --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 13:46, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 00:42, 2 February 2018

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:42, 2 February 2018 (UTC)

Celia M. Burleigh

Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 14:46, 26 January 2018 (UTC).

  • Template:Yo that solves the ambiguity, but it opens up a new problem. Unitarianism says "a Christian theological movement", "Unitarianism does not constitute one single Christian denomination". Unitarianism#United_States says "Unitarian Christian Conference USA is a network of congregations and ministers". So "the Unitarian Church" seems wrong. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:13, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Yes, Template:Yo that's definitely better. Looking at he sources, I see Mangan's wording[1] is "first woman ordained by the Unitarian Church". That is similar to your original hook, in which you used the source accurately, but such inappropriate terminology does make me a little nervous about the reliability of the source. I'll leave it to the reviewer to decide how significant that is. --BrownHairedGirl (talk) • (contribs) 20:58, 26 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg - New review needed. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:22, 28 January 2018 (UTC)
    • Starting new review. Zeete (talk) 12:07, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
  • New, long enough per DYK check, over 3,000 length; cited; neutral; also known as Celia Burleigh; Earwig reports violation unlikely, 1.0%; hook interesting, cited, but...
  • Symbol question.svg The article has "first female pastor appointed into the Unitarian ministry", similar but not exactly the same as the hook wording. Sources use "first woman ordained to the Unitarian ministry" Needs to be consistent. Thanks, Zeete (talk) 12:40, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Changed "female" to "woman" for consistency
  • Do you also want to change "appointed" to "ordained" in the article? Thanks, Zeete (talk) 14:14, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Changed Unitarian ministry link to Unitarian Universalism. Also wikified the red link of Celia Bureigh to Celia M. Burleigh.
  • Do you want to change the ministry link in the hook above? Thanks, Zeete (talk) 14:14, 31 January 2018 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go. Thanks, Zeete (talk) 15:17, 31 January 2018 (UTC)