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:* The hook is 200+ characters. Needs to be less than that as a requirement of DYK. [[User:Proudbolsahye|Proudbolsahye]] ([[User talk:Proudbolsahye|talk]]) 03:19, 15 October 2013 (UTC) | :* The hook is 200+ characters. Needs to be less than that as a requirement of DYK. [[User:Proudbolsahye|Proudbolsahye]] ([[User talk:Proudbolsahye|talk]]) 03:19, 15 October 2013 (UTC) | ||
| − | ::: '''Done''' It did seem a bit long to me. | + | ::: '''Done''' It did seem a bit long to me. '''[[User:STATicVapor|<span style="color:#BA181F;">STATic</span>]] <small>[[User talk:STATicVapor|<font color="#BA181F"><span style="vertical-align:super;">message me!</span></font>]]</small>''' 03:33, 15 October 2013 (UTC) |
'''ALT1''': ... that [[Nipsey Hussle]] released the '''[[Crenshaw (mixtape)|Crenshaw]]''' mixtape for free online with limited edition copies worth $100 that were sold out within 24 hours? | '''ALT1''': ... that [[Nipsey Hussle]] released the '''[[Crenshaw (mixtape)|Crenshaw]]''' mixtape for free online with limited edition copies worth $100 that were sold out within 24 hours? | ||
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Provided ALT1. Tell me what you think. I think its a better hook. Easier to read. Straight to the point. [[User:Proudbolsahye|Proudbolsahye]] ([[User talk:Proudbolsahye|talk]]) 07:47, 15 October 2013 (UTC) | Provided ALT1. Tell me what you think. I think its a better hook. Easier to read. Straight to the point. [[User:Proudbolsahye|Proudbolsahye]] ([[User talk:Proudbolsahye|talk]]) 07:47, 15 October 2013 (UTC) | ||
| − | : Looks okay, but the interesting part was that it was the first album/mixtape sold for $100 dollars each, [[mixtape]]s are usually just released free online and sometimes sold on iTunes or limited edition physical copies for a normal album price or a bit cheaper. I think the $100 dollar thing should be mentioned somewhere, as that is the significant part of it. | + | : Looks okay, but the interesting part was that it was the first album/mixtape sold for $100 dollars each, [[mixtape]]s are usually just released free online and sometimes sold on iTunes or limited edition physical copies for a normal album price or a bit cheaper. I think the $100 dollar thing should be mentioned somewhere, as that is the significant part of it. '''[[User:STATicVapor|<span style="color:#BA181F;">STATic</span>]] <small>[[User talk:STATicVapor|<font color="#BA181F"><span style="vertical-align:super;">message me!</span></font>]]</small>''' 12:55, 15 October 2013 (UTC) |
| − | : I changed it slightly and then adjusted the hook at the top. Since we say he sold out, we should state how many copies there were. It is still under the 200 character limit, thanks for taking the time to help me with this, it is my first DYK afterall. Also since names of albums are italics should we make the subject '''''bolded italics''''', instead of just bolded? | + | : I changed it slightly and then adjusted the hook at the top. Since we say he sold out, we should state how many copies there were. It is still under the 200 character limit, thanks for taking the time to help me with this, it is my first DYK afterall. Also since names of albums are italics should we make the subject '''''bolded italics''''', instead of just bolded? '''[[User:STATicVapor|<span style="color:#BA181F;">STATic</span>]] <font color="#BA181F"><small>[[User talk:STATicVapor|<span style="vertical-align:super;">message me!</span>]]</small></font>''' 21:09, 15 October 2013 (UTC) |
::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] No need for italics. This first DYK attempt is not bad at all. Once you get the hang of it, you'll have many DYK's in the future. I personally have 5+ being nominated as we speak. Anyways, this is article is just ghetto fabulous! ;) Long enough. New enough. Hooks cited in the article with an appropriate RS. I approve the ALT1 hook. Good to go! Congrats on your first DYK. [[User:Proudbolsahye|Proudbolsahye]] ([[User talk:Proudbolsahye|talk]]) 08:23, 16 October 2013 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | ::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] No need for italics. This first DYK attempt is not bad at all. Once you get the hang of it, you'll have many DYK's in the future. I personally have 5+ being nominated as we speak. Anyways, this is article is just ghetto fabulous! ;) Long enough. New enough. Hooks cited in the article with an appropriate RS. I approve the ALT1 hook. Good to go! Congrats on your first DYK. [[User:Proudbolsahye|Proudbolsahye]] ([[User talk:Proudbolsahye|talk]]) 08:23, 16 October 2013 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | ||
Latest revision as of 19:39, 11 February 2019
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 16:36, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
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Crenshaw (mixtape)
- that Nipsey Hussle released the Crenshaw mixtape for free online, along with limited edition 1,000 copies priced at $100 that sold out within 24 hours?
Created by STATicVapor (talk). Self nominated at 16:47, 13 October 2013 (UTC).
- The hook is 200+ characters. Needs to be less than that as a requirement of DYK. Proudbolsahye (talk) 03:19, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- Done It did seem a bit long to me. STATic message me! 03:33, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that Nipsey Hussle released the Crenshaw mixtape for free online with limited edition copies worth $100 that were sold out within 24 hours?
Provided ALT1. Tell me what you think. I think its a better hook. Easier to read. Straight to the point. Proudbolsahye (talk) 07:47, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- Looks okay, but the interesting part was that it was the first album/mixtape sold for $100 dollars each, mixtapes are usually just released free online and sometimes sold on iTunes or limited edition physical copies for a normal album price or a bit cheaper. I think the $100 dollar thing should be mentioned somewhere, as that is the significant part of it. STATic message me! 12:55, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- I changed it slightly and then adjusted the hook at the top. Since we say he sold out, we should state how many copies there were. It is still under the 200 character limit, thanks for taking the time to help me with this, it is my first DYK afterall. Also since names of albums are italics should we make the subject bolded italics, instead of just bolded? STATic message me! 21:09, 15 October 2013 (UTC)
- 16px No need for italics. This first DYK attempt is not bad at all. Once you get the hang of it, you'll have many DYK's in the future. I personally have 5+ being nominated as we speak. Anyways, this is article is just ghetto fabulous! ;) Long enough. New enough. Hooks cited in the article with an appropriate RS. I approve the ALT1 hook. Good to go! Congrats on your first DYK. Proudbolsahye (talk) 08:23, 16 October 2013 (UTC)
