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− | + | :''The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. <span style="color:red">'''Please do not modify this page.'''</span> Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as [[{{TALKPAGENAME}}|this nomination's talk page]], [[Talk:{{SUBPAGENAME}}|the article's talk page]] or [[Wikipedia talk:Did you know]]), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. '''No further edits should be made to this page'''.'' | |
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− | < | + | *<s> ... that '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom''), a one-act opera by [[Ernst Krenek]] called a satirical fairy-tale, was premiered with two other short operas in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]?</s> <small>Source: several, date [http://lagis-hessen.de/de/subjects/browse/current/396/section/3/sn/edb here]</small> |
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Beatrice Alexander|Beatrice Alexander]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Beatrice Alexander|Beatrice Alexander]] | ||
:* ''Comment'': it happened 6 May, - too late for that day, sorry, - the May Festival was called Maiwoche that year, the first festival after World War I, but too difficult to explain in a hook. I see that I will have to update the festival's article. | :* ''Comment'': it happened 6 May, - too late for that day, sorry, - the May Festival was called Maiwoche that year, the first festival after World War I, but too difficult to explain in a hook. I see that I will have to update the festival's article. | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 17:24, 6 May 2017 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 17:24, 6 May 2017 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutral, cited. No copyvios/close paraphrasing detected, but you need to use quotation marks for "satirical fairy-tale" both in the article and the hook if that is a direct quote; it is very specific language. AGF on German sources. This hook is awkwardly worded mostly because there's so much going on here. In particular, the "called a satirical fairy-tale" phrase seems out-of-place and jarring. How do you feel about replacing that whole phrase with "a "satirical fairy-tale" by Ernst Krenek" and then letting the "two other short operas" explain the format of the piece? ~ [[User:BU Rob13|<b>Rob</b><small><sub>13</sub></small>]]<sup style="margin-left:-1.0ex;">[[User talk:BU Rob13|Talk]]</sup> 17:01, 23 May 2017 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutral, cited. No copyvios/close paraphrasing detected, but you need to use quotation marks for "satirical fairy-tale" both in the article and the hook if that is a direct quote; it is very specific language. AGF on German sources. This hook is awkwardly worded mostly because there's so much going on here. In particular, the "called a satirical fairy-tale" phrase seems out-of-place and jarring. How do you feel about replacing that whole phrase with "a "satirical fairy-tale" by Ernst Krenek" and then letting the "two other short operas" explain the format of the piece? ~ [[User:BU Rob13|<b>Rob</b><small><sub>13</sub></small>]]<sup style="margin-left:-1.0ex;">[[User talk:BU Rob13|Talk]]</sup> 17:01, 23 May 2017 (UTC) | ||
::* Thank you for looking! Do you mean "one-act" is redundant to "short"? | ::* Thank you for looking! Do you mean "one-act" is redundant to "short"? | ||
− | ::: '''ALT1''': ... that '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom'') by [[Ernst Krenek]], called a satirical fairy-tale, was premiered with two other short operas in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]? | + | ::: <s>'''ALT1''': ... that '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom'') by [[Ernst Krenek]], called a satirical fairy-tale, was premiered with two other short operas in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]?</s> |
− | ::: '''ALT2''': ... that the short satirical opera '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom'') by [[Ernst Krenek]] was premiered in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]? Need to go. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 17:21, 23 May 2017 (UTC) | + | ::: '''ALT2''': ... that the short satirical opera '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom'') by [[Ernst Krenek]] was premiered in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]? |
+ | :::Need to go. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 17:21, 23 May 2017 (UTC) | ||
::: The "quote": it's only the translation of a quote, - don't know how to clarify in a short hook. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:00, 23 May 2017 (UTC) | ::: The "quote": it's only the translation of a quote, - don't know how to clarify in a short hook. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:00, 23 May 2017 (UTC) | ||
− | + | ::::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]]Ah, yes, that's tricky. Let's use ALT2 to side-step the attribution issue. Good to go. ~ [[User:BU Rob13|<b>Rob</b><small><sub>13</sub></small>]]<sup style="margin-left:-1.0ex;">[[User talk:BU Rob13|Talk]]</sup> 18:51, 23 May 2017 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | |
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:00, 31 May 2017 (UTC)
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Das geheime Königreich
... that Das geheime Königreich (The Secret Kingdom), a one-act opera by Ernst Krenek called a satirical fairy-tale, was premiered with two other short operas in Wiesbaden in May 1928?Source: several, date here
- Reviewed: Beatrice Alexander
- Comment: it happened 6 May, - too late for that day, sorry, - the May Festival was called Maiwoche that year, the first festival after World War I, but too difficult to explain in a hook. I see that I will have to update the festival's article.
Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 17:24, 6 May 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutral, cited. No copyvios/close paraphrasing detected, but you need to use quotation marks for "satirical fairy-tale" both in the article and the hook if that is a direct quote; it is very specific language. AGF on German sources. This hook is awkwardly worded mostly because there's so much going on here. In particular, the "called a satirical fairy-tale" phrase seems out-of-place and jarring. How do you feel about replacing that whole phrase with "a "satirical fairy-tale" by Ernst Krenek" and then letting the "two other short operas" explain the format of the piece? ~ Rob13Talk 17:01, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you for looking! Do you mean "one-act" is redundant to "short"?
ALT1: ... that Das geheime Königreich (The Secret Kingdom) by Ernst Krenek, called a satirical fairy-tale, was premiered with two other short operas in Wiesbaden in May 1928?- ALT2: ... that the short satirical opera Das geheime Königreich (The Secret Kingdom) by Ernst Krenek was premiered in Wiesbaden in May 1928?
- Need to go. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:21, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
- The "quote": it's only the translation of a quote, - don't know how to clarify in a short hook. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:00, 23 May 2017 (UTC)