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The result was: '''promoted''' by ''[[User: Allen3|Allen3]]''&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:Allen3|talk]]</sup> 09:41, 13 December 2011 (UTC)<br />}}
 
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*... that some music critics believed [[Selena]] was noting [[Diana Ross]] and [[Leslie Gore]] in the song "Missing My Baby", which was featured on '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]'''''?
 
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*or <s>'''ALT1''': ... that production of '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]''''' was postponed because [[Selena]]'s father and manager [[Abraham Quintanilla, Jr.]] was threatening to disband [[Selena y Los Dinos]] because Selena liked the [[Chris Pérez|guitarist]] of the group?</s>
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{{*mp}}... that many music critics believed [[Selena]] was noting [[Diana Ross]] and [[Leslie Gore]] in the song "Missing My Baby", which was featured on '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]'''''?
 
*or '''ALT1''': ... that production of '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]''''' was postponed because [[Selena]]'s father and manager [[Abraham Quintanilla Jr.]] was threatening to disband [[Selena y Los Dinos]] because Selena liked the [[Chris Perez|guitarist]] of the group?
 
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<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:AJona1992|AJona1992]] ([[User talk:AJona1992|talk]]). Self nom at 15:59, 20 November 2011 (UTC)</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:AJona1992|AJona1992]] ([[User talk:AJona1992|talk]]). Self nom at 15:59, 20 November 2011 (UTC)</small>
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:*With 2 ''because''s, ALT1 is very difficult to understand. --[[Special:Contributions/69.157.46.38|69.157.46.38]] ([[User talk:69.157.46.38|talk]]) 10:30, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
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::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Length and expansion both meet criteria, and the date also checks out. I agree with the IP user above that ALT1 is too wordy and unclear, so I am reviewing the original hook. Hook referenced offline: AGF. Majority of references are offline or foreign language, but checks on those that I could access reveal no evidence of close paraphrasing. Good to go. '''[[User:Harrias|<font color="#00cc33">Harrias</font>]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Harrias|<font color="#009900">talk</font>]]</sup> 12:46, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Returned to noms page for further review. The word "noting" in the hook doesn't make sense. --[[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 00:21, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
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::Believed to be the equivalent of that performer. Best, [[User:AJona1992|<font color="red">Jona</font>]][[Special:Contributions/AJona1992|yo!]] [[User talk:AJona1992|<font color="maroon"><sup>Selena 4 ever</sup></font>]] 14:03, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
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:::Which specific sources say this? --[[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 15:54, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
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::::FNs 30 and 31, they believed Selena was similar to Diana Ross and Leslie Gore in the song "Missing my Baby" which resembles one of their songs (Diana Ross) or the way they sing (Leslie Gore). Best, [[User:AJona1992|<font color="red">Jona</font>]][[Special:Contributions/AJona1992|yo!]] [[User talk:AJona1992|<font color="maroon"><sup>Selena 4 ever</sup></font>]] 15:59, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
  
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:::::Thanks! I see that the Deseret News referred to the "Leslie Gore baby-voice" in this song, and I see from the article that "the ''[[The Virginian-Pilot]]'' believed that "Missing My Baby" was built on [[hook (music)|hooks]] that recall [[Diana Ross]]' "[[Missing You (Diana Ross song)|Missing You]]" which was a tribute to [[Marvin Gaye]]". Since several DYK reviewers were unable to discern what "noted" means in the hook or the article, both the hook and the article ought to be reworded. I suggest the following new wording for the hook:
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:::::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]]'''ALT3''' ... that some music critics hear echoes of work by [[Diana Ross]] and [[Leslie Gore]] in [[Selena]]{{'}}s song "Missing My Baby", which was featured on '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]'''''? --[[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 17:09, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
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:Sounds good :-) Best, [[User:AJona1992|<font color="red">Jona</font>]][[Special:Contributions/AJona1992|yo!]] [[User talk:AJona1992|<font color="maroon"><sup>Selena 4 ever</sup></font>]] 17:15, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
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*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Let's call it good then. --[[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 05:28, 13 December 2011 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

Latest revision as of 21:51, 5 March 2018

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 09:41, 13 December 2011 (UTC)

Entre a Mi Mundo

Created/expanded by AJona1992 (talk). Self nom at 15:59, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

  • With 2 becauses, ALT1 is very difficult to understand. --69.157.46.38 (talk) 10:30, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Length and expansion both meet criteria, and the date also checks out. I agree with the IP user above that ALT1 is too wordy and unclear, so I am reviewing the original hook. Hook referenced offline: AGF. Majority of references are offline or foreign language, but checks on those that I could access reveal no evidence of close paraphrasing. Good to go. Harrias talk 12:46, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Returned to noms page for further review. The word "noting" in the hook doesn't make sense. --Orlady (talk) 00:21, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
Believed to be the equivalent of that performer. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 14:03, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
Which specific sources say this? --Orlady (talk) 15:54, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
FNs 30 and 31, they believed Selena was similar to Diana Ross and Leslie Gore in the song "Missing my Baby" which resembles one of their songs (Diana Ross) or the way they sing (Leslie Gore). Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 15:59, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
Thanks! I see that the Deseret News referred to the "Leslie Gore baby-voice" in this song, and I see from the article that "the The Virginian-Pilot believed that "Missing My Baby" was built on hooks that recall Diana Ross' "Missing You" which was a tribute to Marvin Gaye". Since several DYK reviewers were unable to discern what "noted" means in the hook or the article, both the hook and the article ought to be reworded. I suggest the following new wording for the hook:
Sounds good :-) Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 17:15, 12 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Let's call it good then. --Orlady (talk) 05:28, 13 December 2011 (UTC)