Difference between revisions of "Template:Did you know nominations/Equus (film)"

From blackwiki
Jump to navigation Jump to search
imported>Ribbet32
(reply)
imported>Cwmhiraeth
(To Prep 1)
 
(One intermediate revision by one other user not shown)
Line 1: Line 1:
{{DYKsubpage
+
<noinclude>[[Category:Passed DYK nominations&nbsp;from October 2016]]<div style="background-color: #F3F9FF; margin: 2em 0 0 0; padding: 0 10px 0 10px; border: 1px solid #AAAAAA;">
|monthyear=October 2016  
+
:''The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. <span style="color:red">'''Please do not modify this page.'''</span> Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as [[{{TALKPAGENAME}}|this nomination's talk page]], [[Talk:{{SUBPAGENAME}}|the article's talk page]] or [[Wikipedia talk:Did you know]]), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. '''No further edits should be made to this page'''.''
|passed=<!--When closing discussion, enter yes or no -->
+
 
|2=
+
The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 06:36, 25 November 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
{{DYK conditions}}
 
{{DYK conditions}}
 
====Equus (film)====
 
====Equus (film)====
 
{{DYK nompage links|nompage=Equus (film)|Equus (film)}}
 
{{DYK nompage links|nompage=Equus (film)|Equus (film)}}
<!--
 
 
                  Please do not edit above this line unless you are a DYK volunteer who is closing the discussion.
 
 
-->
 
 
* ... that a few critics felt a more realistic portrayal of violence and horses in the 1977 film '''''[[Equus (film)|Equus]]''''' lost some of the spirit{{mdashb}}and even the realism{{mdashb}}of [[Equus (play)|the play]]?   
 
* ... that a few critics felt a more realistic portrayal of violence and horses in the 1977 film '''''[[Equus (film)|Equus]]''''' lost some of the spirit{{mdashb}}and even the realism{{mdashb}}of [[Equus (play)|the play]]?   
 
<small>Source: Roger Ebert gave the film two and a half stars, arguing the realism in actual horses and their blinding, "strangely enough, get in the way of the play's own reality' [[Roger Ebert]], "[http://www.rogerebert.com/reviews/equus-1977 Equus]," ''Rogerebert.com'', 9 November 1977, URL accessed 23 October 2016.; Welsh also felt the explicit blinding was "potentially repulsive," and "much of the spirit of the play is lost as a consequence." Thomas L. Erskine and James M. Welsh, Video Versions: Film Adaptations of Plays on Video, Greenwood Press, 2000, p. 112.</small>
 
<small>Source: Roger Ebert gave the film two and a half stars, arguing the realism in actual horses and their blinding, "strangely enough, get in the way of the play's own reality' [[Roger Ebert]], "[http://www.rogerebert.com/reviews/equus-1977 Equus]," ''Rogerebert.com'', 9 November 1977, URL accessed 23 October 2016.; Welsh also felt the explicit blinding was "potentially repulsive," and "much of the spirit of the play is lost as a consequence." Thomas L. Erskine and James M. Welsh, Video Versions: Film Adaptations of Plays on Video, Greenwood Press, 2000, p. 112.</small>
Line 17: Line 12:
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Guapi-Guapiaçu Environmental Protection Area|Guapi-Guapiaçu Environmental Protection Area]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Guapi-Guapiaçu Environmental Protection Area|Guapi-Guapiaçu Environmental Protection Area]]
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Ribbet32|Ribbet32]] ([[User talk:Ribbet32|talk]]). Self-nominated at 22:46, 23 October 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Ribbet32|Ribbet32]] ([[User talk:Ribbet32|talk]]). Self-nominated at 22:46, 23 October 2016 (UTC).</small>
<!--
 
* {{DYKmake|Equus (film)|Ribbet32|subpage=Equus (film)}}
 
-->
 
<!-- Automated review by User:DYKReviewBot -->
 
 
<includeonly><div class="NavFrame collapsed" style="border:none;"><div class="NavHead" style="background:transparent;text-align:left;"></includeonly>
 
<includeonly><div class="NavFrame collapsed" style="border:none;"><div class="NavHead" style="background:transparent;text-align:left;"></includeonly>
 
*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] '''Some issues found.'''<includeonly></div><div class="NavContent" style="background:transparent;text-align:left;"></includeonly>
 
*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] '''Some issues found.'''<includeonly></div><div class="NavContent" style="background:transparent;text-align:left;"></includeonly>
Line 36: Line 27:
 
**<span style="color:green;" alt="Green tick" title="Green tick">&#x2713;</span> [[User:Ribbet32|Ribbet32]] has fewer than 5 DYK credits. No QPQ required. Note a QPQ will be required after 0 more DYKs.
 
**<span style="color:green;" alt="Green tick" title="Green tick">&#x2713;</span> [[User:Ribbet32|Ribbet32]] has fewer than 5 DYK credits. No QPQ required. Note a QPQ will be required after 0 more DYKs.
 
Automatically reviewed by [[User:DYKReviewBot|DYKReviewBot]]. This is '''not''' a substitute for a human review. Please [[User talk:Intelligentsium|report any issues]] with the bot.<includeonly></div></div></includeonly> --[[User:DYKReviewBot|DYKReviewBot]] ([[User talk:Intelligentsium|report bugs]]) 20:30, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
 
Automatically reviewed by [[User:DYKReviewBot|DYKReviewBot]]. This is '''not''' a substitute for a human review. Please [[User talk:Intelligentsium|report any issues]] with the bot.<includeonly></div></div></includeonly> --[[User:DYKReviewBot|DYKReviewBot]] ([[User talk:Intelligentsium|report bugs]]) 20:30, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
<!-- End automated review -->
 
 
:* In ALT0, it should be "the realism", not "the reality". In ALT1, it should be "less realistic", not "less real". [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:23, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
 
:* In ALT0, it should be "the realism", not "the reality". In ALT1, it should be "less realistic", not "less real". [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:23, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
 
::* Fine with those adjustments. [[User:Ribbet32|Ribbet32]] ([[User talk:Ribbet32|talk]]) 19:35, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
 
::* Fine with those adjustments. [[User:Ribbet32|Ribbet32]] ([[User talk:Ribbet32|talk]]) 19:35, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
Line 46: Line 36:
 
but if you really like the other hooks, I prefer ALT1. [[User:Rachel Helps (BYU)|Rachel Helps (BYU)]] ([[User talk:Rachel Helps (BYU)|talk]]) 21:53, 21 November 2016 (UTC)
 
but if you really like the other hooks, I prefer ALT1. [[User:Rachel Helps (BYU)|Rachel Helps (BYU)]] ([[User talk:Rachel Helps (BYU)|talk]]) 21:53, 21 November 2016 (UTC)
 
*:Thank you [[User:Rachel Helps (BYU)|Rachel Helps (BYU)]], is "'''ALT3''':... that several critics felt more realistic depictions of horses and violence in the 1977 film version of  '''''[[Equus (film)|Equus]]''''' detracted from the spirit of [[Equus (play)|the play]]?" a viable compromise? [[User:Ribbet32|Ribbet32]] ([[User talk:Ribbet32|talk]]) 00:14, 22 November 2016 (UTC)
 
*:Thank you [[User:Rachel Helps (BYU)|Rachel Helps (BYU)]], is "'''ALT3''':... that several critics felt more realistic depictions of horses and violence in the 1977 film version of  '''''[[Equus (film)|Equus]]''''' detracted from the spirit of [[Equus (play)|the play]]?" a viable compromise? [[User:Ribbet32|Ribbet32]] ([[User talk:Ribbet32|talk]]) 00:14, 22 November 2016 (UTC)
}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
+
*::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] {{reply to|Ribbet32}} Yes, that sounds good. I still think "realistic depictions of horses" is a little unclear, but "use of live horses and realistic violence" isn't any shorter. [[User:Rachel Helps (BYU)|Rachel Helps (BYU)]] ([[User talk:Rachel Helps (BYU)|talk]]) 16:44, 22 November 2016 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

Latest revision as of 06:36, 25 November 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:36, 25 November 2016 (UTC)

Equus (film)

  • ... that a few critics felt a more realistic portrayal of violence and horses in the 1977 film Equus lost some of the spirit
  1. REDIRECT Template:Zero width joiner em dash zero width non joinerand even the realism
  2. REDIRECT Template:Zero width joiner em dash zero width non joinerof the play?

Source: Roger Ebert gave the film two and a half stars, arguing the realism in actual horses and their blinding, "strangely enough, get in the way of the play's own reality' Roger Ebert, "Equus," Rogerebert.com, 9 November 1977, URL accessed 23 October 2016.; Welsh also felt the explicit blinding was "potentially repulsive," and "much of the spirit of the play is lost as a consequence." Thomas L. Erskine and James M. Welsh, Video Versions: Film Adaptations of Plays on Video, Greenwood Press, 2000, p. 112.

    • ALT1:... that the 1977 film Equus featured real horses rather than the masked men seen in the original play, but Roger Ebert said this was less realistic?

Source: Roger Ebert gave the film two and a half stars, arguing the realism in actual horses and their blinding, "strangely enough, get in the way of the play's own reality' Roger Ebert, "Equus," Rogerebert.com, 9 November 1977, URL accessed 23 October 2016.; In stage productions, the horses are portrayed by human actors, often muscular men wearing tribal-style masks. Richard Harland Smith , "Equus (1977)," Turner Classic Movies, URL accessed 24 October 2016.

5x expanded by Ribbet32 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:46, 23 October 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Some issues found.
    • This article has been expanded from 1132 chars to 6864 chars since 13:15, 03 September 2016 (UTC), a 6.06-fold expansion
    • This article meets the DYK criteria at 6864 characters
    • All paragraphs in this article have at least one citation
    • This article has the following issues:
    • ? A copyright violation is suspected by an automated tool, with 29.1% confidence. (confirm)
      • Note to reviewers: There is low confidence in this automated metric, please manually verify that there is no copyright infringement or close paraphrasing. Note that this number may be inflated due to cited quotes and titles which do not constitute a copyright violation.
  • No overall issues detected
    • The hook ALT0 is an appropriate length at 154 characters
    • The hook ALT1 is an appropriate length at 141 characters
    • Ribbet32 has fewer than 5 DYK credits. No QPQ required. Note a QPQ will be required after 0 more DYKs.

Automatically reviewed by DYKReviewBot. This is not a substitute for a human review. Please report any issues with the bot. --DYKReviewBot (report bugs) 20:30, 30 October 2016 (UTC)

  • In ALT0, it should be "the realism", not "the reality". In ALT1, it should be "less realistic", not "less real". Yoninah (talk) 19:23, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
  • Fine with those adjustments. Ribbet32 (talk) 19:35, 30 October 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Full review needed now that hooks are set. BlueMoonset (talk) 00:44, 10 November 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg New enough/long enough (5x expanded from the bot's calculation). There was one part that seemed kind of like close paraphrasing, and I changed a word to make it less similar to its source. Article appears neutral (I didn't check offline sources), QPQ done, no pictures with the nomination. I don't understand exactly what the EngvarB template is referring to--I didn't see any inconsistent regional spellings. I'm not sure if the "reality of the play" and "the play's realism" are interchangeable; I understand that it sounds "hookier" to use a contradiction, but I prefer something more straightforward. I suggest
  • ALT2:... that the violent horse-blinding scene in Equus detracted from the film’s psychological themes, according to some critics?

but if you really like the other hooks, I prefer ALT1. Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 21:53, 21 November 2016 (UTC)

  • Thank you Rachel Helps (BYU), is "ALT3:... that several critics felt more realistic depictions of horses and violence in the 1977 film version of Equus detracted from the spirit of the play?" a viable compromise? Ribbet32 (talk) 00:14, 22 November 2016 (UTC)
    Symbol confirmed.svg Template:Reply to Yes, that sounds good. I still think "realistic depictions of horses" is a little unclear, but "use of live horses and realistic violence" isn't any shorter. Rachel Helps (BYU) (talk) 16:44, 22 November 2016 (UTC)