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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] This was a good read. Large enough, fully sourced, qpq done. Didn't detect any copyvio. The hook's a bit long, perhaps remove "with the First Army headquarters". --[[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) 22:22, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] This was a good read. Large enough, fully sourced, qpq done. Didn't detect any copyvio. The hook's a bit long, perhaps remove "with the First Army headquarters". --[[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) 22:22, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
::* {{u|Al Ameer son}}Thanks for the review. As suggested here is shortened  '''ALT1''' hook <s>... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' was awarded the [[Distinguished Service Medal (U.S. Army)|Distinguished Service Medal]] for her services during the [[Battle of Saint-Mihiel |St. Mihiel]] and [[Meuse-Argonne Offensive]]s during [[World War I]]?'''</s> [[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 01:38, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
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::* {{u|Al Ameer son}}Thanks for the review. As suggested here is shortened  '''ALT1''' hook <s>... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' was awarded the [[Distinguished Service Medal (U.S. Army)|Distinguished Service Medal]] for her services during the [[Battle of Saint-Mihiel |St. Mihiel]] and [[Meuse-Argonne Offensive]]s during [[World War I]]?</s> '''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 01:38, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Great, thanks for the adjustment. --[[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) 18:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Great, thanks for the adjustment. --[[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) 18:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] It would be far more hooky if you said she worked as a telephone operator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:27, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] It would be far more hooky if you said she worked as a telephone operator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:27, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
:::::* {{u|Yoninah}} Thanks. I suggest the following '''ALt2''' hook <s>... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' served during [[World War I]] as Chief Operator of telephones of the [[American Expeditionary Forces]] (AEF) in the [[U.S. Army Signal Corps]]?'''</s>[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 02:13, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
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:::::* {{u|Yoninah}} Thanks. I suggest the following '''ALt2''' hook <s>... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' served during [[World War I]] as Chief Operator of telephones of the [[American Expeditionary Forces]] (AEF) in the [[U.S. Army Signal Corps]]?</s>'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 02:13, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::::*{{ping|Nvvchar}} How about:
 
::::::*{{ping|Nvvchar}} How about:
 
::::::*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::::*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 15:50, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Grace Banker

Grace Banker
Grace Banker

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 02:03, 16 April 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg This was a good read. Large enough, fully sourced, qpq done. Didn't detect any copyvio. The hook's a bit long, perhaps remove "with the First Army headquarters". --Al Ameer (talk) 22:22, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Great, thanks for the adjustment. --Al Ameer (talk) 18:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg It would be far more hooky if you said she worked as a telephone operator. Yoninah (talk) 23:27, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Actually, I would skip the image for ALT3 to make it more hooky. Yoninah (talk) 22:09, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
  • I agree with ALT3 hook suggestion without img.Nvvchar. 00:51, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Template:OutdentSymbol redirect vote 4.svg New reviewer needed for ALT3. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 09:39, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Symbol confirmed.svg ALT3 with no image is good to go, rest of article re-checked and no issues found. EdChem (talk) 12:34, 1 May 2016 (UTC)