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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 03:35, 22 July 2014 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Grand Slam (PBA)====
 
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* <s>...that the achievement made by [[Philippine Basketball Association]] teams who won all [[List of PBA conferences|three tournaments]] in a season is called a '''[[Grand Slam (PBA)|Grand Slam]]'''?</s>
 
* <s>...that the achievement made by [[Philippine Basketball Association]] teams who won all [[List of PBA conferences|three tournaments]] in a season is called a '''[[Grand Slam (PBA)|Grand Slam]]'''?</s>
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:* '''ALT1''':...that there are only five instances in [[Philippine Basketball Association]] history that a team won the '''[[Grand Slam (PBA)|Grand Slam]]'''?
 
:* '''ALT1''':...that there are only five instances in [[Philippine Basketball Association]] history that a team won the '''[[Grand Slam (PBA)|Grand Slam]]'''?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/2014 PBA Governors' Cup|2014 PBA Governors' Cup]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/2014 PBA Governors' Cup|2014 PBA Governors' Cup]]
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:WayKurat|WayKurat]] ([[User talk:WayKurat|talk]]). Self nominated at 15:20, 14 July 2014 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:WayKurat|WayKurat]] ([[User talk:WayKurat|talk]]). Self nominated at 15:20, 14 July 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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*'''ALT2'''<s> ...that the [[Philippine Basketball Association]]'s '''[[Grand Slam (PBA)|Grand Slam]]'''  has been won only five times? </s>[[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 03:15, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
 
*'''ALT2'''<s> ...that the [[Philippine Basketball Association]]'s '''[[Grand Slam (PBA)|Grand Slam]]'''  has been won only five times? </s>[[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 03:15, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
  
[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good to go. New enough, large enough, sources and content check out. I like ALT 2 as being just a tad more interesting hook. '''[[User:MichaelQSchmidt|<font color="blue">Schmidt, </font>]]''' ''[[User talk:MichaelQSchmidt|<sup><small>Michael Q.</small></sup>]]'' 06:17, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
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[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good to go. New enough, large enough, sources and content check out. I like ALT 2 as being just a tad more interesting hook. '''[[User:MichaelQSchmidt|<span style="color:blue;">Schmidt, </span>]]''' ''[[User talk:MichaelQSchmidt|<sup><small>Michael Q.</small></sup>]]'' 06:17, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] [[ping|MichaelQSchmidt]], did you check the sources for close paraphrasing? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:44, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] [[ping|MichaelQSchmidt]], did you check the sources for close paraphrasing? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:44, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
 
::*[[ping|Yoninah]], I have revised the article that has a most likely close paraphrasing sentences. Kindly check [[ping|MichaelQSchmidt]] if it is now OK. -[[User:WayKurat|WayKurat]] ([[User talk:WayKurat|talk]]) 02:50, 19 July 2014 (UTC)
 
::*[[ping|Yoninah]], I have revised the article that has a most likely close paraphrasing sentences. Kindly check [[ping|MichaelQSchmidt]] if it is now OK. -[[User:WayKurat|WayKurat]] ([[User talk:WayKurat|talk]]) 02:50, 19 July 2014 (UTC)
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::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Great, we are set. The original hook and ALT2 are written too passively. I prefer ALT1, but would write it this way:
 
::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Great, we are set. The original hook and ALT2 are written too passively. I prefer ALT1, but would write it this way:
 
::*'''ALT3''': ... that only five times in [[Philippine Basketball Association]] history did a team win the '''[[Grand Slam (PBA)|Grand Slam]]'''?
 
::*'''ALT3''': ... that only five times in [[Philippine Basketball Association]] history did a team win the '''[[Grand Slam (PBA)|Grand Slam]]'''?
::* ALT3 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 12:16, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 03:35, 22 July 2014 (UTC)

Grand Slam (PBA)

5x expanded by WayKurat (talk). Self nominated at 15:20, 14 July 2014 (UTC).

Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go. New enough, large enough, sources and content check out. I like ALT 2 as being just a tad more interesting hook. Schmidt, Michael Q. 06:17, 15 July 2014 (UTC)

  • Yoninah, I have revised the article that has a most likely close paraphrasing sentences. Kindly check MichaelQSchmidt if it is now OK. -WayKurat (talk) 02:50, 19 July 2014 (UTC)
  • I did a thorough copyedit on the grammar, and also added "cite needed" tags to several paragraphs. According to DYK rules, there needs to be at least one cite per paragraph to qualify. I didn't see close paraphrasing in the sources I checked, but I didn't check all of them. BTW, I was unable to find any of the information in the third paragraph under "1996 Alaska Milkmen" in footnote 7. Yoninah (talk) 21:57, 20 July 2014 (UTC)
  • I already attached the sources for those paragraphs in question and removed one that was more trivial. Kindly check Yoninah if it is now ok. -WayKurat (talk) 01:13, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Regarding the third paragraph of 1996 Alaska Milkmen section, footnote 7 actually has three pages. The information mentioned in the third paragraph is located in the third page of the source. -WayKurat (talk) 01:32, 21 July 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you for adding the cites and pointing out what I missed in footnote 7. I overlooked one paragraph (the first paragraph under "2013–14 San Mig Super Coffee Mixers" that also needs a cite. The more I look at the sources, the more I see how well you avoided close paraphrasing. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 09:01, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

Template:Unindent*Okay, done adding with the sources. Hopefully this will be enough. :) -WayKurat (talk) 10:19, 21 July 2014 (UTC)

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Great, we are set. The original hook and ALT2 are written too passively. I prefer ALT1, but would write it this way:
  • ALT3: ... that only five times in Philippine Basketball Association history did a team win the Grand Slam?
  • ALT3 hook refs verified and cited inline. ALT3 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 12:16, 21 July 2014 (UTC)