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* ... that '''[[Indian Cave Creek]]''' flows over a 40-foot (12-meter) waterfall to reach [[White Oak Run (Lackawanna River)|White Oak Run]]? | * ... that '''[[Indian Cave Creek]]''' flows over a 40-foot (12-meter) waterfall to reach [[White Oak Run (Lackawanna River)|White Oak Run]]? | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/American Society for Virology]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/American Society for Virology]] | ||
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Jakec|Jakec]] ([[User talk:Jakec|talk]]). Self-nominated at 01:39, 26 May 2015 (UTC).</small> | <small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Jakec|Jakec]] ([[User talk:Jakec|talk]]). Self-nominated at 01:39, 26 May 2015 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]The article is new, has never been featured on the Main Page, and is long enough. There are hooks for each paragraph and they are properly formatted. The hook has a neutral point of view and is not negative. The editor has completed their QPQ. | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]]The article is new, has never been featured on the Main Page, and is long enough. There are hooks for each paragraph and they are properly formatted. The hook has a neutral point of view and is not negative. The editor has completed their QPQ. | ||
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:: Let me know if you need any help or would like me to followup with this nomination. [[User:Z1720|Z1720]] ([[User talk:Z1720|talk]]) 03:10, 31 May 2015 (UTC) | :: Let me know if you need any help or would like me to followup with this nomination. [[User:Z1720|Z1720]] ([[User talk:Z1720|talk]]) 03:10, 31 May 2015 (UTC) | ||
:::{{ping|Z1720}} You are mistaken on both counts. The inline citation does in fact say that the falls are 40 feet high. It also says that the falls are at its mouth, which is White Oak Run. --'''[[User:Jakec|Jakob]] ([[user talk:Jakec|talk]]) ''' <small><small>aka Jakec</small></small> 11:41, 31 May 2015 (UTC) | :::{{ping|Z1720}} You are mistaken on both counts. The inline citation does in fact say that the falls are 40 feet high. It also says that the falls are at its mouth, which is White Oak Run. --'''[[User:Jakec|Jakob]] ([[user talk:Jakec|talk]]) ''' <small><small>aka Jakec</small></small> 11:41, 31 May 2015 (UTC) | ||
− | ::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]After taking a second look through the document, I was able to find where it states that it is a forty-foot fall (page 315) and it does say that they meet at White Oak Run (page 137). I am sorry for the confusion. I would recommend the original hook for the Main Page. Great work. [[User:Z1720|Z1720]] ([[User talk:Z1720|talk]]) 17:35, 31 May 2015 (UTC) | + | ::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]After taking a second look through the document, I was able to find where it states that it is a forty-foot fall (page 315) and it does say that they meet at White Oak Run (page 137). I am sorry for the confusion. I would recommend the original hook for the Main Page. Great work. [[User:Z1720|Z1720]] ([[User talk:Z1720|talk]]) 17:35, 31 May 2015 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> |
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Latest revision as of 06:41, 5 June 2015
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:41, 5 June 2015 (UTC)
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Indian Cave Creek
- ... that Indian Cave Creek flows over a 40-foot (12-meter) waterfall to reach White Oak Run?
Moved to mainspace by Jakec (talk). Self-nominated at 01:39, 26 May 2015 (UTC).
- There are some concerns I have with the hook. "That Indian Cave Creek flows over a 40-foot (12-meter) waterfall" is present in the "Geography and geology" section, but the second part is not. Instead, that information is inferred in other parts of the article. I would suggest striking out the second part. The second problem is the inline citation given for the hook does not mention that Forty Foot Falls is forty feet high. If I am mistaken can you reply with the page number from the citation? In light of these issues, I would recommend the ALT1 hook below:
- ALT1 ... that Indian Cave Creek flows over Forty Foot Falls in Archbald, Pennsylvania?
- Let me know if you need any help or would like me to followup with this nomination. Z1720 (talk) 03:10, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
- Template:Ping You are mistaken on both counts. The inline citation does in fact say that the falls are 40 feet high. It also says that the falls are at its mouth, which is White Oak Run. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 11:41, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
After taking a second look through the document, I was able to find where it states that it is a forty-foot fall (page 315) and it does say that they meet at White Oak Run (page 137). I am sorry for the confusion. I would recommend the original hook for the Main Page. Great work. Z1720 (talk) 17:35, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
- Template:Ping You are mistaken on both counts. The inline citation does in fact say that the falls are 40 feet high. It also says that the falls are at its mouth, which is White Oak Run. --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 11:41, 31 May 2015 (UTC)
- Let me know if you need any help or would like me to followup with this nomination. Z1720 (talk) 03:10, 31 May 2015 (UTC)