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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Orlady|Orlady]] ([[User talk:Orlady|talk]]) 05:11, 28 August 2012 (UTC)<br />}}
 
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:*''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Dock Ellis|Dock Ellis]]
 
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:*''Comment'': Save for the Paralympics?  Moved from user space.
 
:*''Comment'': Save for the Paralympics?  Moved from user space.
 
<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:LauraHale|LauraHale]] ([[User talk:LauraHale|talk]]).  Self nom at 09:24, 23 July 2012 (UTC)</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:LauraHale|LauraHale]] ([[User talk:LauraHale|talk]]).  Self nom at 09:24, 23 July 2012 (UTC)</small>
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:*Hook and content check out.  Should Cleo in the article link to [[Cleo (magazine)]]?  It currently links to a DAB page.  I only ask this because I think it might be necessary to link it in the hook.  I had no idea what the Victorian Cleo Bachelor of the Year was.  After finding the magazine, I take that it is similar to GQ.  In addition, he was only a finalist, so it might be better to discuss that prior to his disablement he worked as a plumber.  The plumber story is interesting, but I can't think of an incredibly hooky way to say it.  In any case, everything [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] checks out.  I'd just like to see a thought on the lead.  (You may want to create a DAB at [[Jack Swift]] while you are at it.&nbsp;[[User:Ryan Vesey|'''''Ryan''''']]&nbsp;[[User talk:Ryan Vesey|'''''Vesey''''']]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Ryan Vesey|<small>Review me!</small>]] 05:04, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 
:*Hook and content check out.  Should Cleo in the article link to [[Cleo (magazine)]]?  It currently links to a DAB page.  I only ask this because I think it might be necessary to link it in the hook.  I had no idea what the Victorian Cleo Bachelor of the Year was.  After finding the magazine, I take that it is similar to GQ.  In addition, he was only a finalist, so it might be better to discuss that prior to his disablement he worked as a plumber.  The plumber story is interesting, but I can't think of an incredibly hooky way to say it.  In any case, everything [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] checks out.  I'd just like to see a thought on the lead.  (You may want to create a DAB at [[Jack Swift]] while you are at it.&nbsp;[[User:Ryan Vesey|'''''Ryan''''']]&nbsp;[[User talk:Ryan Vesey|'''''Vesey''''']]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Ryan Vesey|<small>Review me!</small>]] 05:04, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
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::On that note, the article appears long enough, but DYK check doesn't appear to be working.  I get 1784 B when using a page size check (that only looks at prose size), so it appears like it meets the 1500 character requirement (one byte=one character).&nbsp;[[User:Ryan Vesey|'''''Ryan''''']]&nbsp;[[User talk:Ryan Vesey|'''''Vesey''''']]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Ryan Vesey|<small>Review me!</small>]] 05:17, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 
::On that note, the article appears long enough, but DYK check doesn't appear to be working.  I get 1784 B when using a page size check (that only looks at prose size), so it appears like it meets the 1500 character requirement (one byte=one character).&nbsp;[[User:Ryan Vesey|'''''Ryan''''']]&nbsp;[[User talk:Ryan Vesey|'''''Vesey''''']]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Ryan Vesey|<small>Review me!</small>]] 05:17, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
  
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:T his makes it eligible because 1,500+ characters and on July 23 it was moved. :) in any case, just so no confusion, can you toss another preceding green tick before a comment to make clear this is good to go?  Green ticks at the end and conversations sometimes make it hard for movers to determine the status. :) --[[User:LauraHale|LauraHale]] ([[User talk:LauraHale|talk]]) 05:21, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]Green ticks all around.&nbsp;[[User:Ryan Vesey|'''''Ryan''''']]&nbsp;[[User talk:Ryan Vesey|'''''Vesey''''']]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Ryan Vesey|<small>Review me!</small>]] 05:23, 24 July 2012 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

Latest revision as of 12:38, 6 March 2018

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Orlady (talk) 05:11, 28 August 2012 (UTC)

Jack Swift (athlete)

  • Reviewed: Dock Ellis
  • Comment: Save for the Paralympics? Moved from user space.

Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk). Self nom at 09:24, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

  • Hook and content check out. Should Cleo in the article link to Cleo (magazine)? It currently links to a DAB page. I only ask this because I think it might be necessary to link it in the hook. I had no idea what the Victorian Cleo Bachelor of the Year was. After finding the magazine, I take that it is similar to GQ. In addition, he was only a finalist, so it might be better to discuss that prior to his disablement he worked as a plumber. The plumber story is interesting, but I can't think of an incredibly hooky way to say it. In any case, everything Symbol confirmed.svg checks out. I'd just like to see a thought on the lead. (You may want to create a DAB at Jack Swift while you are at it. Ryan Vesey Review me! 05:04, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
Oops. yeah. I fixed that Cleo problem. Disambigs are not my strong point. :( Hard to find interesting things in some articles. : / Lead does need to be improved a bit but hard to do when article so short. ;) --LauraHale (talk) 05:10, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
On that note, the article appears long enough, but DYK check doesn't appear to be working. I get 1784 B when using a page size check (that only looks at prose size), so it appears like it meets the 1500 character requirement (one byte=one character). Ryan Vesey Review me! 05:17, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
DYK Check for me says:
  • Prose size (text only): 1784 characters (297 words) "readable prose size"
  • Article created by LauraHale on July 6, 2012
  • Article moved from User:LauraHale/Jack Swift (athlete) on July 23, 2012
T his makes it eligible because 1,500+ characters and on July 23 it was moved. :) in any case, just so no confusion, can you toss another preceding green tick before a comment to make clear this is good to go? Green ticks at the end and conversations sometimes make it hard for movers to determine the status. :) --LauraHale (talk) 05:21, 24 July 2012 (UTC)