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| − | | | + | :''The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. <span style="color:red">'''Please do not modify this page.'''</span> Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as [[{{TALKPAGENAME}}|this nomination's talk page]], [[Talk:{{SUBPAGENAME}}|the article's talk page]] or [[Wikipedia talk:Did you know]]), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. '''No further edits should be made to this page'''.'' |
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* ... that [[Donald Trump]]'s official musical adviser is '''[[Jason Fettig|Col. Jason Fettig]]''' ''(pictured)''? | * ... that [[Donald Trump]]'s official musical adviser is '''[[Jason Fettig|Col. Jason Fettig]]''' ''(pictured)''? | ||
:* ... that the first military promotion personally performed by [[President of the United States]] [[Donald Trump]] was to advance '''[[Jason Fettig]]''' ''(pictured)'' to the rank of [[colonel]]? | :* ... that the first military promotion personally performed by [[President of the United States]] [[Donald Trump]] was to advance '''[[Jason Fettig]]''' ''(pictured)'' to the rank of [[colonel]]? | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': <del>''Forthcoming''</del> [[Template:Did you know nominations/Kris Knoblauch]] | :* ''Reviewed'': <del>''Forthcoming''</del> [[Template:Did you know nominations/Kris Knoblauch]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]). Self-nominated at 05:58, 2 August 2019 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]). Self-nominated at 05:58, 2 August 2019 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is long enough and in date, no copyvio detected. Hooks are cited and article meets policies. Image is claimed as freeuse. Looks good to go, pending QPQ. As a sidenote on the hooks, I'd prefer active voice, to make the fact about the subject, rather than the relation to Trump. And also to avoid the abbreviation of Col. for those who might not be familiar with military ranks. So something along the lines of: | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is long enough and in date, no copyvio detected. Hooks are cited and article meets policies. Image is claimed as freeuse. Looks good to go, pending QPQ. As a sidenote on the hooks, I'd prefer active voice, to make the fact about the subject, rather than the relation to Trump. And also to avoid the abbreviation of Col. for those who might not be familiar with military ranks. So something along the lines of: | ||
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::*Thanks [[User:Spokoyni|Spokoyni]]! The QPQ is done now. I very much prefer your suggested Alts to the original ones. [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]) 20:44, 2 August 2019 (UTC) | ::*Thanks [[User:Spokoyni|Spokoyni]]! The QPQ is done now. I very much prefer your suggested Alts to the original ones. [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]) 20:44, 2 August 2019 (UTC) | ||
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Approving, as I think this ought to be ok as I merely shifted the word order in the hooks. The promoter might play with them a bit more if they feel it necessary. Looks good to go! [[User:Spokoyni|Spokoyni]] ([[User talk:Spokoyni|talk]]) 22:30, 2 August 2019 (UTC) | :::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Approving, as I think this ought to be ok as I merely shifted the word order in the hooks. The promoter might play with them a bit more if they feel it necessary. Looks good to go! [[User:Spokoyni|Spokoyni]] ([[User talk:Spokoyni|talk]]) 22:30, 2 August 2019 (UTC) | ||
| − | {{-}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | + | ::::*I agree about putting the bolded subject toward the front of the hook. But this is a short hook, and in the image slot, saying "Trump" first really catches the eye (it caught mine). [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:30, 22 August 2019 (UTC) |
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Latest revision as of 22:30, 22 August 2019
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:30, 22 August 2019 (UTC)
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Jason Fettig
Jason Fettig was promoted to colonel by Donald Trump
Jason Fettig was promoted to colonel by Donald Trump
- ... that Donald Trump's official musical adviser is Col. Jason Fettig (pictured)?
- ... that the first military promotion personally performed by President of the United States Donald Trump was to advance Jason Fettig (pictured) to the rank of colonel?
- Reviewed:
ForthcomingTemplate:Did you know nominations/Kris Knoblauch
Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 05:58, 2 August 2019 (UTC).
- 16px Article is long enough and in date, no copyvio detected. Hooks are cited and article meets policies. Image is claimed as freeuse. Looks good to go, pending QPQ. As a sidenote on the hooks, I'd prefer active voice, to make the fact about the subject, rather than the relation to Trump. And also to avoid the abbreviation of Col. for those who might not be familiar with military ranks. So something along the lines of:
- ALT2 ... that Colonel Jason Fettig (pictured) is Donald Trump's official musical adviser?
- ALT3 ... that Jason FettigTemplate:`s (pictured) advancement to colonel was the first military promotion personally performed by Donald Trump? Spokoyni (talk) 12:35, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks Spokoyni! The QPQ is done now. I very much prefer your suggested Alts to the original ones. Chetsford (talk) 20:44, 2 August 2019 (UTC)
