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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]])&nbsp;06:07, 27 April 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that '''[[Jayne Spain|Mrs. Spain]]''' ''(pictured)'' was from California?
 
* ... that '''[[Jayne Spain|Mrs. Spain]]''' ''(pictured)'' was from California?
 
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Jayne Spain]]''' ''(pictured)'' hired one handicapped individual for every 10 able bodies?  <small>[https://newspaperarchive.com/politics-clipping-oct-11-1970-1621537/ Company President Is Liberated Woman]</small></s>
 
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Jayne Spain]]''' ''(pictured)'' hired one handicapped individual for every 10 able bodies?  <small>[https://newspaperarchive.com/politics-clipping-oct-11-1970-1621537/ Company President Is Liberated Woman]</small></s>
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Clyde A. Lynch]]
 
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<small>Created by [[User:HickoryOughtShirt?4|HickoryOughtShirt?4]] ([[User talk:HickoryOughtShirt?4|talk]]). Self-nominated at 18:04, 1 April 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:HickoryOughtShirt?4|HickoryOughtShirt?4]] ([[User talk:HickoryOughtShirt?4|talk]]). Self-nominated at 18:04, 1 April 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|HickoryOughtShirt?4}} Article is well cited and I will be assuming that there should be no copyvio issues. I find ALT0 interesting. I find ALT1 just as interesting as ALT0, however the term "able bodies" can be considered derogatory. See this article, "[https://ncdj.org/2015/09/terms-to-avoid-when-writing-about-disability/ Terms to Avoid When Writing About Disability]". Is there a better term that can be used both in the hook and the article? Let me know and please notify me with a [[Template:Ping|ping]]. ALT2 is just a matter-of-fact, so it's not interesting. QPQ is also missing. [[User:Nice4What|Nice4What]] ([[User talk:Nice4What|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Nice4What|contribs]]) – <small>(Don't forget to share a [[Help:Notifications/Thanks|Thanks]] <span style="color:#4dac8b;">♥</span>)</small> 13:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|HickoryOughtShirt?4}} Article is well cited and I will be assuming that there should be no copyvio issues. I find ALT0 interesting. I find ALT1 just as interesting as ALT0, however the term "able bodies" can be considered derogatory. See this article, "[https://ncdj.org/2015/09/terms-to-avoid-when-writing-about-disability/ Terms to Avoid When Writing About Disability]". Is there a better term that can be used both in the hook and the article? Let me know and please notify me with a [[Template:Ping|ping]]. ALT2 is just a matter-of-fact, so it's not interesting. QPQ is also missing. [[User:Nice4What|Nice4What]] ([[User talk:Nice4What|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Nice4What|contribs]]) – <small>(Don't forget to share a [[Help:Notifications/Thanks|Thanks]] <span style="color:#4dac8b;">♥</span>)</small> 13:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
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::::::::*Maybe "'''ALT1c''':... that '''[[Jayne Spain]]''' ''(pictured)'' hired a ratio of one physically handicapped individual in every ten employees?" per the newspaper sourced. Thoughts? [[User:Nice4What|Nice4What]] ([[User talk:Nice4What|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Nice4What|contribs]]) – <small>(Don't forget to share a [[Help:Notifications/Thanks|Thanks]] <span style="color:#4dac8b;">♥</span>)</small> 02:15, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::::*Maybe "'''ALT1c''':... that '''[[Jayne Spain]]''' ''(pictured)'' hired a ratio of one physically handicapped individual in every ten employees?" per the newspaper sourced. Thoughts? [[User:Nice4What|Nice4What]] ([[User talk:Nice4What|talk]] · [[Special:Contributions/Nice4What|contribs]]) – <small>(Don't forget to share a [[Help:Notifications/Thanks|Thanks]] <span style="color:#4dac8b;">♥</span>)</small> 02:15, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::::* That's good. [[User:HickoryOughtShirt?4|HickoryOughtShirt?4]] ([[User talk:HickoryOughtShirt?4|talk]]) 02:16, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::::* That's good. [[User:HickoryOughtShirt?4|HickoryOughtShirt?4]] ([[User talk:HickoryOughtShirt?4|talk]]) 02:16, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 06:07, 27 April 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:07, 27 April 2020 (UTC)

Jayne Spain

Spain in 1971
Spain in 1971

Created by HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:04, 1 April 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping Article is well cited and I will be assuming that there should be no copyvio issues. I find ALT0 interesting. I find ALT1 just as interesting as ALT0, however the term "able bodies" can be considered derogatory. See this article, "Terms to Avoid When Writing About Disability". Is there a better term that can be used both in the hook and the article? Let me know and please notify me with a ping. ALT2 is just a matter-of-fact, so it's not interesting. QPQ is also missing. Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ) 13:54, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
  • I suggest maybe using "ALT1a:... that Jayne Spain (pictured) hired one handicapped individual for every ten individuals without a disability?" or "ALT1b:... that Jayne Spain (pictured) hired one handicapped individual for every ten nine non-disabled individuals?" per this style guide. Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ) 14:23, 2 April 2020 (UTC); Edited 02:03, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:U, thank you for the quick review. I apologize about the language, wasn't thinking. I agree your proposed hook is much better. I am working on my QPQ. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:23, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping Quickly passed and good to go. You still need to replace the derogatory term from the article. The source also states that she hired one in ten, not a ratio of one to ten. Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ) 01:59, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg Template:Ping Since you changed the phrasing in the article, you may need to make it more clear in a DYK hook to match. Other than that, should be good to go. Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ) 02:11, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Maybe "ALT1c:... that Jayne Spain (pictured) hired a ratio of one physically handicapped individual in every ten employees?" per the newspaper sourced. Thoughts? Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ) 02:15, 3 April 2020 (UTC)