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The result was: '''promoted''' by <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.118em 0.118em 0.118em; class=texhtml">'''[[User:Adam Cuerden|Adam Cuerden]]''' <sup>([[User talk:Adam Cuerden|talk]])</sup></span> 02:50, 10 March 2014 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that in addition to inventing and patenting the first [[ballpoint pen]], '''[[John J. Loud]]''' ''(pictured)'' also held a patent for a [[firecracker]] cannon?
 
* ... that in addition to inventing and patenting the first [[ballpoint pen]], '''[[John J. Loud]]''' ''(pictured)'' also held a patent for a [[firecracker]] cannon?
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<small>Created by [[User:Connormah|Connormah]] ([[User talk:Connormah|talk]]). Self nominated at 08:20, 8 March 2014 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Connormah|Connormah]] ([[User talk:Connormah|talk]]). Self nominated at 08:20, 8 March 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Length and date OK. Citation for hook checks out. Image file checks out. It's a notable subject and I like the hook. Just a bit of tidying up to do. Please correct the disambig links in the article to "attorney", "tanner" and "Derby Academy". The external-links checker flags up citation no.12, although I cannot personally see what the problem is; the link works OK - might be worth checking with an expert or admin. Please change "practiced" to "practised". In the Personal Life section, the word "also" is used four times - could you rephrase some of this please? This is fundamentally a nicely researched and worthwhile article, so worth scrubbing up to look its best.--[[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 11:44, 8 March 2014 (UTC)  
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Length and date OK. Citation for hook checks out. Image file checks out. It's a notable subject and I like the hook. Just a bit of tidying up to do. Please correct the disambig links in the article to "attorney", "tanner" and "Derby Academy". The external-links checker flags up citation no.12, although I cannot personally see what the problem is; the link works OK - might be worth checking with an expert or admin. Please change "practiced" to "practised". In the Personal Life section, the word "also" is used four times - could you rephrase some of this please? This is fundamentally a nicely researched and worthwhile article, so worth scrubbing up to look its best.--[[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 11:44, 8 March 2014 (UTC)  
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::*{{ping|Storye book}} - QPQ now done! [[User:Connormah|Connormah]] ([[User talk:Connormah|talk]]) 19:00, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|Storye book}} - QPQ now done! [[User:Connormah|Connormah]] ([[User talk:Connormah|talk]]) 19:00, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
 
:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you for doing all that. Good to go. --[[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 08:18, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
 
:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you for doing all that. Good to go. --[[User:Storye book|Storye book]] ([[User talk:Storye book|talk]]) 08:18, 9 March 2014 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 02:50, 10 March 2014

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Adam Cuerden (talk) 02:50, 10 March 2014 (UTC)

John J. Loud

John J. Loud

Created by Connormah (talk). Self nominated at 08:20, 8 March 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Length and date OK. Citation for hook checks out. Image file checks out. It's a notable subject and I like the hook. Just a bit of tidying up to do. Please correct the disambig links in the article to "attorney", "tanner" and "Derby Academy". The external-links checker flags up citation no.12, although I cannot personally see what the problem is; the link works OK - might be worth checking with an expert or admin. Please change "practiced" to "practised". In the Personal Life section, the word "also" is used four times - could you rephrase some of this please? This is fundamentally a nicely researched and worthwhile article, so worth scrubbing up to look its best.--Storye book (talk) 11:44, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you for doing all that. Good to go. --Storye book (talk) 08:18, 9 March 2014 (UTC)