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** '''ALT1''':<s>... that the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]]''' came last in the inaugural [[Lanka Premier League|LPL]]? </s><small>Source:  https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/lanka-premier-league-2020-21-1237339/points-table-standings</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':<s>... that the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]]''' came last in the inaugural [[Lanka Premier League|LPL]]? </s><small>Source:  https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/lanka-premier-league-2020-21-1237339/points-table-standings</small>
 
*** '''ALT2''':<s>... that the Sri Lankan [[Lanka Premier League]] cricket team the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]]''' are owned by Bollywood actor [[Sohail Khan]]?</s> <small>Source: https://news.abplive.com/entertainment/movies/sohail-khan-becomes-proud-owner-of-kandy-tuskers-franchise-in-lanka-premier-league-2020-1370130 </small>
 
*** '''ALT2''':<s>... that the Sri Lankan [[Lanka Premier League]] cricket team the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]]''' are owned by Bollywood actor [[Sohail Khan]]?</s> <small>Source: https://news.abplive.com/entertainment/movies/sohail-khan-becomes-proud-owner-of-kandy-tuskers-franchise-in-lanka-premier-league-2020-1370130 </small>
**** '''ALT3''':... that in 2020, the Sri Lankan [[Lanka Premier League]] (LPL) cricket team the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]]''' won 2 out of 8 matches in the inugral LPL meaning they finished last? <small>Source: https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/lanka-premier-league-2020-21-1237339/points-table-standings </small>
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**** '''ALT3''':... that [[Lanka Premier League|LPL]] cricket team the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]]''' won 2 out of 8 matches in the 1st LPL meaning they finished last? <small>Source: https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/lanka-premier-league-2020-21-1237339/points-table-standings </small>
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***** '''ALT4''':... that the [[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]] replaced [[Chris Gayle]] with [[Brendan Taylor]] after Gayle withdrew from the [[Lanka Premier League|LPL]]? <small>Source: https://www.sportskeeda.com/cricket/news-lpl-2020-kandy-tuskers-sign-brendan-taylor-chris-gayle-s-replacement </small>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Fade258|Fade258]] ([[User talk:Fade258|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) at 12:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Fade258|Fade258]] ([[User talk:Fade258|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) at 12:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC).</small>
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::::::* {{reply to|Yoninah}} Is ALT3 alright? Thanks. [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 21:54, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::* {{reply to|Yoninah}} Is ALT3 alright? Thanks. [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 21:54, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::*{{ping|CreativeNorth}} well, it's almost identical to another nomination, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Galle Gladiators in 2020]]. Try to be "hooky" rather than spell everything out. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:10, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::*{{ping|CreativeNorth}} well, it's almost identical to another nomination, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Galle Gladiators in 2020]]. Try to be "hooky" rather than spell everything out. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:10, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
 
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::::::::*{{reply to|Yoninah}} Sorry if I'm being annoying. But I've tried to make ALT3 less wordy and also added an ALT4. Thanks. [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 17:17, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
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:::::::::*{{ping|CreativeNorth}} as I said above, these new hooks also make it seem like you're clicking on the team article, not the article about the 2020 season. I took a look at the article and gave it a complete copyedit. Please check to see that I understood what you were talking about (I know nothing about cricket) and then I will suggest an alt. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 18:05, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
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::::::::::*{{reply to|Yoninah}} Thanks for the copyedit, in your opinion what would you suggest for a hook then. Thanks [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 18:30, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
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:::::::::::*Really? I got everything right? I think I mixed up wickets and runs in several places.
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:::::::::::*The Squad and Administration and support staff charts need cites, per [[WP:DYKSG#D2|Rule D2]].
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:::::::::::*'''ALT5''': ... that though their captain scored the most runs of any [[Batting (cricket)|batsman]] in the [[Lanka Premier League]] in 2020, the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers finished in last place]]'''? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 18:40, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 
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Latest revision as of 18:40, 20 December 2020

Kandy Tuskers in 2020

Created by Fade258 (talk). Nominated by CreativeNorth (talk) at 12:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The source reflects the hook, and the article appears appropriate, but the hook doesn't make sense to an average reader. Suggest something like: that the Sri Lankan Lanka Premier League cricket team the Kandy Tuskers is owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan? Sadads (talk) 13:41, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg That looks right, lets go with ALT2, Sadads (talk) 21:09, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Sorry, but none of the hooks are accurate because they make you think you're clicking on Kandy Tuskers, not an article about their 2020 season. Please write a different hook that clues the reader to the topic. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 19:57, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping as I said above, these new hooks also make it seem like you're clicking on the team article, not the article about the 2020 season. I took a look at the article and gave it a complete copyedit. Please check to see that I understood what you were talking about (I know nothing about cricket) and then I will suggest an alt. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 18:05, 20 December 2020 (UTC)