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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 06:10, 23 June 2018 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Mount Hope(Ottoman Empire)====
 
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* <s>... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa ‎|Mount Hope]]''' site was visited by authors of [[Herman Melville|Moby Dick]] and [[John Steinbeck|The Grapes of Wrath]]?</s> <small> Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/172416], [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
 
* <s>... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa ‎|Mount Hope]]''' site was visited by authors of [[Herman Melville|Moby Dick]] and [[John Steinbeck|The Grapes of Wrath]]?</s> <small> Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/172416], [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''': <s>... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''' site was visited by [[Herman Melville]] and [[John Steinbeck]]?</s><small> Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/172416], [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''': <s>... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''' site was visited by [[Herman Melville]] and [[John Steinbeck]]?</s><small> Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/172416], [https://muse.jhu.edu/article/176442]</small>
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:* ''Reviewed'': Not needed my third nomination.
 
:* ''Reviewed'': Not needed my third nomination.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Shrike|Shrike]] ([[User talk:Shrike|talk]]). Self-nominated at 08:29, 12 June 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Shrike|Shrike]] ([[User talk:Shrike|talk]]). Self-nominated at 08:29, 12 June 2018 (UTC).</small>
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting, on good sources, Hebrew sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - The hooks need work, I think. How about mentioning Jaffa? Saying not "site" but something more precise such as "former [educational] farm"? As cute as it is to combine quirky things, original hook and ALT1 rely on people knowing titles and/or authors. How about focusing on Steinbeck and saying that he not only visited but had his roots there? - How do you feel about an infobox, which would show at a glance that it's not about a mountain? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 12:31, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting, on good sources, Hebrew sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - The hooks need work, I think. How about mentioning Jaffa? Saying not "site" but something more precise such as "former [educational] farm"? As cute as it is to combine quirky things, original hook and ALT1 rely on people knowing titles and/or authors. How about focusing on Steinbeck and saying that he not only visited but had his roots there? - How do you feel about an infobox, which would show at a glance that it's not about a mountain? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 12:31, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
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:::: Thank you, how is this:
 
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:::: '''ALT4''': ... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''', a farm near [[Jaffa]], was founded by grandparents of [[John Steinbeck]], who visited its remnants?
 
:::: '''ALT4''': ... that '''[[Mount Hope, Jaffa|Mount Hope]]''', a farm near [[Jaffa]], was founded by grandparents of [[John Steinbeck]], who visited its remnants?
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Latest revision as of 06:10, 23 June 2018

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:10, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Mount Hope(Ottoman Empire)

  • ... that Mount Hope site was visited by authors of Moby Dick and The Grapes of Wrath? Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [1], [2]
    • ALT1: ... that Mount Hope site was visited by Herman Melville and John Steinbeck? Source: "The writer Herman Melville, author of "Moby Dick," visited the little community in January 1857...", John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [3], [4]
    • ALT2: ... that Mount Hope farm was commemorated in the name of Hatikva Quarter in south Tel Aviv? Source:

  • Reviewed: Not needed my third nomination.

Created by Shrike (talk). Self-nominated at 08:29, 12 June 2018 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Interesting, on good sources, Hebrew sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. - The hooks need work, I think. How about mentioning Jaffa? Saying not "site" but something more precise such as "former [educational] farm"? As cute as it is to combine quirky things, original hook and ALT1 rely on people knowing titles and/or authors. How about focusing on Steinbeck and saying that he not only visited but had his roots there? - How do you feel about an infobox, which would show at a glance that it's not about a mountain? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:31, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
  • ALT3: ... that Mount Hope former farm near Jaffa was founded by grandparents of John Steinbeck and he visited the remnants during his visit to Israel? Source: John Steinbeck ... visited the former site of the community during a visit to Israel in 1966 [5]
      • User:Gerda Arendt If you could improve the hook any futher I would be gratefull.I will add the infobox Shrike (talk) 13:38, 18 June 2018 (UTC)
Thank you, how is this:
ALT4: ... that Mount Hope, a farm near Jaffa, was founded by grandparents of John Steinbeck, who visited its remnants?
Symbol voting keep.svg but I'll watch for other ideas. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 14:37, 18 June 2018 (UTC)