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| − | + | The result was: '''rejected''' by [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 04:47, 18 November 2013 (UTC)<br />}} | |
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====Rose Laure Allatini==== | ====Rose Laure Allatini==== | ||
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* ... that '''[[Rose Laure Allatini]]'''{{`s}} 1918 novel ''Despised and Rejected'' was banned for its themes of [[pacifism]] and homosexuality? | * ... that '''[[Rose Laure Allatini]]'''{{`s}} 1918 novel ''Despised and Rejected'' was banned for its themes of [[pacifism]] and homosexuality? | ||
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Jacques Schmidt|Jacques Schmidt]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Jacques Schmidt|Jacques Schmidt]] | ||
:* ''Comment'': Created as part of the [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Literature/Bloomsbury Group editathon|Bloomsbury Group editathon]], 19 October 2013 | :* ''Comment'': Created as part of the [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Literature/Bloomsbury Group editathon|Bloomsbury Group editathon]], 19 October 2013 | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Tom Morris|Tom Morris]] ([[User talk:Tom Morris|talk]]), [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) at 23:17, 24 October 2013 (UTC)</small>. | <small>Created by [[User:Tom Morris|Tom Morris]] ([[User talk:Tom Morris|talk]]), [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) at 23:17, 24 October 2013 (UTC)</small>. | ||
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:* [[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] New (19th), barely long enough, not within policy (see below), no copyvio found via tool, [[Wikipedia:QPQ|QPQ]] done. Recurring copyvio/close paraphrasing issue as mentioned in other DYKs and talk page, e.g., {{talkquote|i=y|she was prone to repetition from one book to another, and in later novels her popular tone became sensational, then clichéd both in style and incident |source=[http://orlando.cambridge.org/public/svPeople?person_id=allaro source]}} {{talkquote|i=y|Allatini's prose she was prone to repetition from one book to another. In her later novels, her popular tone became increasingly sensational, and clichéd both in style and incident. |source=[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Rose_Laure_Allatini&oldid=579722717 WP article]}} Let's work together to make sure these issues don't crop up in the future, because this kind of close paraphrasing requires rewriting the article. Please ping me if I don't respond. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><font color="#909">czar</font> [[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 15:20, 9 November 2013 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] New (19th), barely long enough, not within policy (see below), no copyvio found via tool, [[Wikipedia:QPQ|QPQ]] done. Recurring copyvio/close paraphrasing issue as mentioned in other DYKs and talk page, e.g., {{talkquote|i=y|she was prone to repetition from one book to another, and in later novels her popular tone became sensational, then clichéd both in style and incident |source=[http://orlando.cambridge.org/public/svPeople?person_id=allaro source]}} {{talkquote|i=y|Allatini's prose she was prone to repetition from one book to another. In her later novels, her popular tone became increasingly sensational, and clichéd both in style and incident. |source=[https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Rose_Laure_Allatini&oldid=579722717 WP article]}} Let's work together to make sure these issues don't crop up in the future, because this kind of close paraphrasing requires rewriting the article. Please ping me if I don't respond. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><font color="#909">czar</font> [[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 15:20, 9 November 2013 (UTC) | ||
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::::[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Thanks. Still need to check [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Rose_Laure_Allatini&diff=581018964&oldid=577848690 the other additions] for close paraphrasing, but wanted to note that the article is too short now (under 1,500 characters) and needs to be expanded. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><font color="#909">czar</font> [[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 15:10, 10 November 2013 (UTC) | ::::[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Thanks. Still need to check [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Rose_Laure_Allatini&diff=581018964&oldid=577848690 the other additions] for close paraphrasing, but wanted to note that the article is too short now (under 1,500 characters) and needs to be expanded. <span style='font:1.1em"Avenir";padding:1px 3px;border:1px solid #909'><font color="#909">czar</font> [[User:Czar|<font color="#909">♔</font>]]</span> 15:10, 10 November 2013 (UTC) | ||
:::::Thanks. I scanned through the diffs that [[User:Edwardx]] made. London Gazette and 1911 Census are just data sources, there's pretty much no prose ''to'' closely paraphrase! I've removed a bit more close paraphrasing. As for the length: as I said, I'm not sure I can make it longer than 1,500 characters based on the sources to hand (which is why I didn't nominate it). —[[User:Tom Morris|Tom Morris]] ([[User talk:Tom Morris|talk]]) 17:00, 10 November 2013 (UTC) | :::::Thanks. I scanned through the diffs that [[User:Edwardx]] made. London Gazette and 1911 Census are just data sources, there's pretty much no prose ''to'' closely paraphrase! I've removed a bit more close paraphrasing. As for the length: as I said, I'm not sure I can make it longer than 1,500 characters based on the sources to hand (which is why I didn't nominate it). —[[User:Tom Morris|Tom Morris]] ([[User talk:Tom Morris|talk]]) 17:00, 10 November 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Latest revision as of 04:47, 18 November 2013
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 04:47, 18 November 2013 (UTC)
Article too short and other issues (including bare urls not noted below).
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Rose Laure Allatini
- ... that Rose Laure AllatiniTemplate:`s 1918 novel Despised and Rejected was banned for its themes of pacifism and homosexuality?
- Reviewed: Jacques Schmidt
- Comment: Created as part of the Bloomsbury Group editathon, 19 October 2013
Created by Tom Morris (talk), Edwardx (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 23:17, 24 October 2013 (UTC).
- 16px New (19th), barely long enough, not within policy (see below), no copyvio found via tool, QPQ done. Recurring copyvio/close paraphrasing issue as mentioned in other DYKs and talk page, e.g., Template:Talkquote Template:Talkquote Let's work together to make sure these issues don't crop up in the future, because this kind of close paraphrasing requires rewriting the article. Please ping me if I don't respond. czar ♔ 15:20, 9 November 2013 (UTC)
- I've removed the copyvio that User:Edwardx seems to have introduced. —Tom Morris (talk) 09:31, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
- 16px Thanks. Still need to check the other additions for close paraphrasing, but wanted to note that the article is too short now (under 1,500 characters) and needs to be expanded. czar ♔ 15:10, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks. I scanned through the diffs that User:Edwardx made. London Gazette and 1911 Census are just data sources, there's pretty much no prose to closely paraphrase! I've removed a bit more close paraphrasing. As for the length: as I said, I'm not sure I can make it longer than 1,500 characters based on the sources to hand (which is why I didn't nominate it). —Tom Morris (talk) 17:00, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
- 16px Thanks. Still need to check the other additions for close paraphrasing, but wanted to note that the article is too short now (under 1,500 characters) and needs to be expanded. czar ♔ 15:10, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
- I've removed the copyvio that User:Edwardx seems to have introduced. —Tom Morris (talk) 09:31, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
