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*... that [[Dre-fach Felindre]] ''(weavers' cottages pictured)'' in the Teifi valley became known as the "The [[Huddersfield]] of Wales" when the '''[[Sheep farming in Wales|wool industry]]''' was prosperous there?
 
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{{*mp}}... that [[Dre-fach Felindre]] ''(weavers' cottages pictured)'' in the Teifi valley became known as the "The [[Huddersfield]] of Wales" when the '''[[Sheep farming in Wales|wool industry]]''' was prosperous there?
 
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<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Rosiestep|Rosiestep]] ([[User talk:Rosiestep|talk]]), [[User:Martinevans123|Martinevans123]] ([[User talk:Martinevans123|talk]]), [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]]), and [[User:Dr. Blofeld|Dr. Blofeld]] ([[User talk:Dr. Blofeld|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:Dr. Blofeld|Dr. Blofeld]] ([[User talk:Dr. Blofeld|talk]]) at 10:20, 27 June 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Rosiestep|Rosiestep]] ([[User talk:Rosiestep|talk]]), [[User:Martinevans123|Martinevans123]] ([[User talk:Martinevans123|talk]]), [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]]), and [[User:Dr. Blofeld|Dr. Blofeld]] ([[User talk:Dr. Blofeld|talk]]).&nbsp;Nominated by [[User:Dr. Blofeld|Dr. Blofeld]] ([[User talk:Dr. Blofeld|talk]]) at 10:20, 27 June 2013 (UTC)</small>.
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:::* Fine. I have revised the last part of the hook by removing the link and added an img.
 
:::* Fine. I have revised the last part of the hook by removing the link and added an img.
::::* '''ALT 2''' Hook ... that [[Dre-fach Felindre]]  in the Teifi valley became known as the "The [[Huddersfield]] of Wales", as part of the '''[[sheep farming in Wales]]''' ''(pictured)''? <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Nvvchar|contribs]]) 17:11, 30 June 2013 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned -->
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::::* '''ALT 2''' Hook ... that [[Dre-fach Felindre]]  in the Teifi valley became known as the "The [[Huddersfield]] of Wales", as part of the '''[[sheep farming in Wales]]''' ''(pictured)''? <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Nvvchar|contribs]]) 17:11, 30 June 2013 (UTC)</span></small>
 
:::::Sorry, but that's no good (actually, it's worse).  It would be a much better hook if it were completely changed to omit any mention of the village - which was a ''wool processing'' village, not a ''sheep farming'' village.  There's very little reason for there to be any mention of the village in the article at all.  But, if you don't want to do that, how about:
 
:::::Sorry, but that's no good (actually, it's worse).  It would be a much better hook if it were completely changed to omit any mention of the village - which was a ''wool processing'' village, not a ''sheep farming'' village.  There's very little reason for there to be any mention of the village in the article at all.  But, if you don't want to do that, how about:
 
:::::*'''ALT 3''':  ... that '''[[sheep farming in Wales]]''' ''(pictured)'' led to the development of [[Dre-fach Felindre]] in the [[Teifi]] valley, which became known as the "The [[Huddersfield]] of Wales"?  [[User:Ghmyrtle|Ghmyrtle]] ([[User talk:Ghmyrtle|talk]]) 17:40, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
 
:::::*'''ALT 3''':  ... that '''[[sheep farming in Wales]]''' ''(pictured)'' led to the development of [[Dre-fach Felindre]] in the [[Teifi]] valley, which became known as the "The [[Huddersfield]] of Wales"?  [[User:Ghmyrtle|Ghmyrtle]] ([[User talk:Ghmyrtle|talk]]) 17:40, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
  
::::::* Thanks. Your suggestion of '''ALT 3''' hook is very nice. Accepted. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Nvvchar|contribs]]) 18:06, 30 June 2013 (UTC)</span></small><!-- Template:Unsigned -->
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::::::* Thanks. Your suggestion of '''ALT 3''' hook is very nice. Accepted. <small><span class="autosigned">— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Nvvchar|Nvvchar]] ([[User talk:Nvvchar|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Nvvchar|contribs]]) 18:06, 30 June 2013 (UTC)</span></small>{{#if:y|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Gatoclass (talk) 14:38, 5 July 2013 (UTC)

Sheep farming in Wales

Created/expanded by Rosiestep (talk), Martinevans123 (talk), Nvvchar (talk), and Dr. Blofeld (talk). Nominated by Dr. Blofeld (talk) at 10:20, 27 June 2013 (UTC).


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  • Symbol confirmed.svg new enough, long enough, follows policy, hook has inline citation, did QPQ. Zeete (talk) 20:34, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg The image does not appear in the article. MANdARAX  XAЯAbИAM 07:40, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Image is now added in the article.--Nvvchar. 16:13, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
I'll remove it again. The image has nothing to do with sheep farming, the subject of the article. It relates to the processing of wool, which is by no means the same thing. In addition, it is quite incorrect and misleading to link the words "wool industry" in the hook to the article on farming. Sheep farming is but one single stage in the wool industry. Ghmyrtle (talk) 16:35, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

Sheep farm in Wales

  • Fine. I have revised the last part of the hook by removing the link and added an img.
Sorry, but that's no good (actually, it's worse). It would be a much better hook if it were completely changed to omit any mention of the village - which was a wool processing village, not a sheep farming village. There's very little reason for there to be any mention of the village in the article at all. But, if you don't want to do that, how about:
  • Thanks. Your suggestion of ALT 3 hook is very nice. Accepted. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nvvchar (talkcontribs) 18:06, 30 June 2013 (UTC)