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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:PumpkinSky|<font color="darkorange">Pumpkin</font><font color="darkblue">Sky</font>]] [[User talk:PumpkinSky|<font color="darkorange">talk</font>]] 00:23, 2 October 2012 (UTC)<br />}}
 
====St Mary's Church, Longfleet====
 
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[[File:Longfleet, parish church of St. Mary - geograph.org.uk - 466067.jpg|100x100px|St Mary's Longfleet]]
 
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*... that the northwest tower and spire of '''[[St Mary's Church, Longfleet]]''' ''(pictured)'', form one of [[Poole]]'s most important landmarks?<br />
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{{*mp}}... that the northwest tower and spire of '''[[St Mary's Church, Longfleet]]''' ''(pictured)'', form one of [[Poole]]'s most important landmarks?<br />
 
  
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<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:Bermicourt|Bermicourt]] ([[User talk:Bermicourt|talk]]).  Self nom at 20:41, 11 September 2012 (UTC)</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:Bermicourt|Bermicourt]] ([[User talk:Bermicourt|talk]]).  Self nom at 20:41, 11 September 2012 (UTC)</small>
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:*<!--Make first comment here-->{{In progress}} [[User:ACP2011|Anne]] ([[User talk:ACP2011|talk]]) 19:51, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
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:*{{In progress}} [[User:ACP2011|Anne]] ([[User talk:ACP2011|talk]]) 19:51, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Date and length fine. Photo licensed. Hook correctly formatted and cited. However, the text from ref #4 Flickr cannot be used as a source. In addition, ref #1 is the home page of the church and does not have the quotations from paragraph 1 or much of the material from paragraph 2. You should make separate refs for separate pages of the website. My primary concern is the close similarity of some of the phrasing in the article to the sources. The best example is: "The parish boundaries were altered in 1946 when the parish of Oakdale St George was established out of Longfleet." This is identical to the National Archives site. I've started you off with a few copy edits. [[User:ACP2011|Anne]] ([[User talk:ACP2011|talk]]) 21:00, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Date and length fine. Photo licensed. Hook correctly formatted and cited. However, the text from ref #4 Flickr cannot be used as a source. In addition, ref #1 is the home page of the church and does not have the quotations from paragraph 1 or much of the material from paragraph 2. You should make separate refs for separate pages of the website. My primary concern is the close similarity of some of the phrasing in the article to the sources. The best example is: "The parish boundaries were altered in 1946 when the parish of Oakdale St George was established out of Longfleet." This is identical to the National Archives site. I've started you off with a few copy edits. [[User:ACP2011|Anne]] ([[User talk:ACP2011|talk]]) 21:00, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
 
:::*Note: nominator had not been notified of review issues; I have just done so on Bermicourt's talk page. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 04:20, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
 
:::*Note: nominator had not been notified of review issues; I have just done so on Bermicourt's talk page. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 04:20, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
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:[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] good article on a lively church. The hook is no big surprise, a high tower a landmark, but ok. Suggestions for the article: what do you think of starting with a compact lead, then history, then church life today? (The lead should be a summary of referenced info from the body, no refs there.) In the refs, if available list the publisher's name rather than a url, --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 22:46, 29 September 2012 (UTC)
 
:[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] good article on a lively church. The hook is no big surprise, a high tower a landmark, but ok. Suggestions for the article: what do you think of starting with a compact lead, then history, then church life today? (The lead should be a summary of referenced info from the body, no refs there.) In the refs, if available list the publisher's name rather than a url, --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 22:46, 29 September 2012 (UTC)
 
::* I have re-organized the sections as suggested, with a short lede and referenced material moved to the body of the article. Hope that helps. --[[User:Bermicourt|Bermicourt]] ([[User talk:Bermicourt|talk]]) 18:07, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
 
::* I have re-organized the sections as suggested, with a short lede and referenced material moved to the body of the article. Hope that helps. --[[User:Bermicourt|Bermicourt]] ([[User talk:Bermicourt|talk]]) 18:07, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
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:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] it does ;) --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 20:30, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 22:41, 7 March 2018

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PumpkinSky talk 00:23, 2 October 2012 (UTC)

St Mary's Church, Longfleet

St Mary's Longfleet

Created/expanded by Bermicourt (talk). Self nom at 20:41, 11 September 2012 (UTC)

  • clock In progress Anne (talk) 19:51, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Date and length fine. Photo licensed. Hook correctly formatted and cited. However, the text from ref #4 Flickr cannot be used as a source. In addition, ref #1 is the home page of the church and does not have the quotations from paragraph 1 or much of the material from paragraph 2. You should make separate refs for separate pages of the website. My primary concern is the close similarity of some of the phrasing in the article to the sources. The best example is: "The parish boundaries were altered in 1946 when the parish of Oakdale St George was established out of Longfleet." This is identical to the National Archives site. I've started you off with a few copy edits. Anne (talk) 21:00, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Note: nominator had not been notified of review issues; I have just done so on Bermicourt's talk page. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:20, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the guidance. I have reworked the referencing to make it more precise and adjusted the wording as suggested. I have left the flickr reference in for now, but will try and find a better source for that sentence eventually. How does it now look? --Bermicourt (talk) 11:34, 24 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote4.png Reviewer needed to continue review based on earlier comments and subsequent edits. BlueMoonset (talk) 03:28, 29 September 2012 (UTC)
Symbol question.svg good article on a lively church. The hook is no big surprise, a high tower a landmark, but ok. Suggestions for the article: what do you think of starting with a compact lead, then history, then church life today? (The lead should be a summary of referenced info from the body, no refs there.) In the refs, if available list the publisher's name rather than a url, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:46, 29 September 2012 (UTC)
  • I have re-organized the sections as suggested, with a short lede and referenced material moved to the body of the article. Hope that helps. --Bermicourt (talk) 18:07, 1 October 2012 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg it does ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:30, 1 October 2012 (UTC)