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====Talal al-Sharif====
 
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* ... that after firing an [[AK-47]] in the House of Representatives, Jordanian Representative '''[[Talal al-Sharif]]''' was expelled as a member?
 
* ... that after firing an [[AK-47]] in the House of Representatives, Jordanian Representative '''[[Talal al-Sharif]]''' was expelled as a member?
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad|Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad|Consulate General of the United States, Hyderabad]]
 
:* ''Comment'': I'm open to rewriting the hook. Maybe something as the following is better: ... that after pulling an [[AK-47]] during an argument, Jordanian Representative '''[[Talal al-Sharif]]''' fired it in the House of Representatives and was consequently expelled?
 
:* ''Comment'': I'm open to rewriting the hook. Maybe something as the following is better: ... that after pulling an [[AK-47]] during an argument, Jordanian Representative '''[[Talal al-Sharif]]''' fired it in the House of Representatives and was consequently expelled?
 
<small>Created by [[User:Crispulop|Crispulop]] ([[User talk:Crispulop|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 11:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Crispulop|Crispulop]] ([[User talk:Crispulop|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 11:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC)</small>.
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:* Nothing wrong with hook, but I have edited to remove BLP issues over his alleged intent, & updated - he was still in jail on 28 October. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 15:02, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
 
:* Nothing wrong with hook, but I have edited to remove BLP issues over his alleged intent, & updated - he was still in jail on 28 October. [[User:Johnbod|Johnbod]] ([[User talk:Johnbod|talk]]) 15:02, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Needs full review. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 15:29, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Needs full review. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 15:29, 15 November 2013 (UTC)
:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New article is long enough (2,761 characters back on October 18).  No copyright violations detected.  Duplication detector check of main sources [https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fjordantimes.com%2Fhouse-shooter-mp-dismissed-another-suspended&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.france24.com%2Fen%2F20130910-jordan-mp-fires-kalashnikov-rival-parliament&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.upi.com%2FTop_News%2FWorld-News%2F2013%2F09%2F10%2FJordanian-lawmaker-dismissed-after-shooting-in-Parliament%2FUPI-57001378815812%2F&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fjordantimes.com%2Flower-house-endorses-new-rules-of-procedure&minwords=2&minchars=13] reveal no close paraphrasing issues (I've exempted key phrases that cannot be change without altering the meaning).  Article is well-sourced.  Hook is 126 characters long (160 characters for ALT1); both are under the 200 character max. limit and are interesting. Ref 4 (verifying both hooks) is a reliable source from ''[[The Jordan Times]]''.  QPQ done.  Looks good to go! —[[User:Bloom6132|Bloom6132]] ([[User talk:Bloom6132|talk]]) 01:50, 21 November 2013 (UTC)
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New article is long enough (2,761 characters back on October 18).  No copyright violations detected.  Duplication detector check of main sources [https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fjordantimes.com%2Fhouse-shooter-mp-dismissed-another-suspended&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.france24.com%2Fen%2F20130910-jordan-mp-fires-kalashnikov-rival-parliament&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.upi.com%2FTop_News%2FWorld-News%2F2013%2F09%2F10%2FJordanian-lawmaker-dismissed-after-shooting-in-Parliament%2FUPI-57001378815812%2F&minwords=2&minchars=13][https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fwiki%2FTalal_al-Sharif&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fjordantimes.com%2Flower-house-endorses-new-rules-of-procedure&minwords=2&minchars=13] reveal no close paraphrasing issues (I've exempted key phrases that cannot be change without altering the meaning).  Article is well-sourced.  Hook is 126 characters long (160 characters for ALT1); both are under the 200 character max. limit and are interesting. Ref 4 (verifying both hooks) is a reliable source from ''[[The Jordan Times]]''.  QPQ done.  Looks good to go! —[[User:Bloom6132|Bloom6132]] ([[User talk:Bloom6132|talk]]) 01:50, 21 November 2013 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
 
 
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Latest revision as of 02:01, 21 November 2013

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 02:01, 21 November 2013 (UTC)

Talal al-Sharif

  • ... that after firing an AK-47 in the House of Representatives, Jordanian Representative Talal al-Sharif was expelled as a member?

Created by Crispulop (talk). Self nominated at 11:26, 18 October 2013 (UTC).

  • Nothing wrong with hook, but I have edited to remove BLP issues over his alleged intent, & updated - he was still in jail on 28 October. Johnbod (talk) 15:02, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
  • I've just seen this rule in the DYK criteria (4a): "Articles and hooks that focus unduly on negative aspects of living individuals or promote one side of an ongoing dispute should be avoided." If someone believes this is too negative I will gladly withdraw this nomination altogether. Crispulop (talk) 22:15, 8 November 2013 (UTC)
  • For a guy elected in January 2013 with under 3,000 votes, & known for only one thing, the focus seems entirely "due". Johnbod (talk) 02:30, 9 November 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg New article is long enough (2,761 characters back on October 18). No copyright violations detected. Duplication detector check of main sources [1][2][3][4] reveal no close paraphrasing issues (I've exempted key phrases that cannot be change without altering the meaning). Article is well-sourced. Hook is 126 characters long (160 characters for ALT1); both are under the 200 character max. limit and are interesting. Ref 4 (verifying both hooks) is a reliable source from The Jordan Times. QPQ done. Looks good to go! —Bloom6132 (talk) 01:50, 21 November 2013 (UTC)