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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 13:17, 14 March 2018 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that ''[[The Daily Telegraph]]'' claimed '''''[[The Hatton Garden Job]]''''' "begins to feel like a bizarre, [[Bertold Brecht|Brechtian]] joke at the audience’s expense"?<br>
 
* ... that ''[[The Daily Telegraph]]'' claimed '''''[[The Hatton Garden Job]]''''' "begins to feel like a bizarre, [[Bertold Brecht|Brechtian]] joke at the audience’s expense"?<br>
 
<small>Source: Robbie Collin, [https://www.telegraph.co.uk/films/0/hatton-garden-job-review-large-parts-guy-ritchie-pasticheare/ The Hatton Garden Job: 'large parts of this Guy Ritchie pastiche are, quite literally, just boring' - review] in ''[[The Daily Telegraph]]'' dated 13 April 2017 at telegraph.co.uk</small>
 
<small>Source: Robbie Collin, [https://www.telegraph.co.uk/films/0/hatton-garden-job-review-large-parts-guy-ritchie-pasticheare/ The Hatton Garden Job: 'large parts of this Guy Ritchie pastiche are, quite literally, just boring' - review] in ''[[The Daily Telegraph]]'' dated 13 April 2017 at telegraph.co.uk</small>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Moonraker|Moonraker]] ([[User talk:Moonraker|talk]]). Self-nominated at 08:00, 11 March 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Moonraker|Moonraker]] ([[User talk:Moonraker|talk]]). Self-nominated at 08:00, 11 March 2018 (UTC).</small>
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. - For my taste, the article is a bit too much on the actual crime, too little on the film, but this is just DYK. I am not happy with the hook because I think "begins to feel" is a strange phrase. Can you quote differently/shorter? Or say something else? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 12:44, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
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:*'''ALT1''' ... that ''[[The Daily Telegraph]]'' compared '''''[[The Hatton Garden Job]]''''' with "a bizarre, [[Bertold Brecht|Brechtian]] joke at the audience’s expense"?  (<small>Source: as before</small>)
  
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::{{u|Gerda Arendt}} I take your point on “begins to feel”, is ALT1 better? I was struggling to find an interesting hook that was about the film and not the crime. On your other point, the outline is of the film, but inevitably it’s also about the crime, as the subtitle of the film is “the remarkable true story”. [[User:Moonraker|Moonraker]] ([[User talk:Moonraker|talk]]) 07:24, 14 March 2018 (UTC)
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::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] yes, I like that much better, thank you! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 08:01, 14 March 2018 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Gatoclass (talk) 13:17, 14 March 2018 (UTC)

The Hatton Garden Job

Source: Robbie Collin, The Hatton Garden Job: 'large parts of this Guy Ritchie pastiche are, quite literally, just boring' - review in The Daily Telegraph dated 13 April 2017 at telegraph.co.uk

Created by Moonraker (talk). Self-nominated at 08:00, 11 March 2018 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Interesting, on good sources, no copyvio obvious. - For my taste, the article is a bit too much on the actual crime, too little on the film, but this is just DYK. I am not happy with the hook because I think "begins to feel" is a strange phrase. Can you quote differently/shorter? Or say something else? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:44, 11 March 2018 (UTC)
Template:U I take your point on “begins to feel”, is ALT1 better? I was struggling to find an interesting hook that was about the film and not the crime. On your other point, the outline is of the film, but inevitably it’s also about the crime, as the subtitle of the film is “the remarkable true story”. Moonraker (talk) 07:24, 14 March 2018 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg yes, I like that much better, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:01, 14 March 2018 (UTC)