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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Keilana|Keilana]]&#124;<sup>[[User talk:Keilana|Parlez ici]]</sup> 04:14, 19 August 2015 (UTC)<br />
 
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* <s>... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces '''''[[Tre Klaverstykker]]''''' have been attested a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"?</s>
 
* <s>... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces '''''[[Tre Klaverstykker]]''''' have been attested a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"?</s>
  
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<small>Created by [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 10:09, 15 August 2015 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 10:09, 15 August 2015 (UTC).</small>
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:* Hi Gerda, I'm happy to review this and am sure I'll be able to mark it as good to go soon, but there are things to do re. the hook and the article itself. Firstly, I think you mean "ascribed" (effectively meaning "described as") above rather than "attested". Secondly I think the quotes by critics like  Morrison of Allmusic should be explicitly attributed to those critics in the text, otherwise one could assume it's Nielson himself saying it. Cheers, [[User:Ian Rose|Ian Rose]] ([[User talk:Ian Rose|talk]]) 09:14, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
 
:* Hi Gerda, I'm happy to review this and am sure I'll be able to mark it as good to go soon, but there are things to do re. the hook and the article itself. Firstly, I think you mean "ascribed" (effectively meaning "described as") above rather than "attested". Secondly I think the quotes by critics like  Morrison of Allmusic should be explicitly attributed to those critics in the text, otherwise one could assume it's Nielson himself saying it. Cheers, [[User:Ian Rose|Ian Rose]] ([[User talk:Ian Rose|talk]]) 09:14, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
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:: Thank you for the better word!
 
:: Thank you for the better word!
 
:: '''ALT1''': ... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces '''''[[Tre Klaverstykker]]''''' have been ascribed a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"? Will fix the attributions in the article now. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 10:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
 
:: '''ALT1''': ... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces '''''[[Tre Klaverstykker]]''''' have been ascribed a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"? Will fix the attributions in the article now. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 10:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Tks Gerda -- '''ALT1''' is good to go: article new enough, long enough, fully referenced, and incorporating PD image; hook short enough, interesting enough, and cited to online source. Cheers, [[User:Ian Rose|Ian Rose]] ([[User talk:Ian Rose|talk]]) 04:27, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
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:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Tks Gerda -- '''ALT1''' is good to go: article new enough, long enough, fully referenced, and incorporating PD image; hook short enough, interesting enough, and cited to online source. Cheers, [[User:Ian Rose|Ian Rose]] ([[User talk:Ian Rose|talk]]) 04:27, 18 August 2015 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 04:14, 19 August 2015

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Keilana|Parlez ici 04:14, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

Tre Klaverstykker

  • ... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces Tre Klaverstykker have been attested a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"?
  • Reviewed: Enno Hallek
  • Comment: improvement of wording welcome

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 10:09, 15 August 2015 (UTC).

  • Hi Gerda, I'm happy to review this and am sure I'll be able to mark it as good to go soon, but there are things to do re. the hook and the article itself. Firstly, I think you mean "ascribed" (effectively meaning "described as") above rather than "attested". Secondly I think the quotes by critics like Morrison of Allmusic should be explicitly attributed to those critics in the text, otherwise one could assume it's Nielson himself saying it. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 09:14, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Thank you for the better word!
ALT1: ... that Carl Nielsen's late piano pieces Tre Klaverstykker have been ascribed a "dual sense of childlike innocence and devilish improvisation"? Will fix the attributions in the article now. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 10:03, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Tks Gerda -- ALT1 is good to go: article new enough, long enough, fully referenced, and incorporating PD image; hook short enough, interesting enough, and cited to online source. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 04:27, 18 August 2015 (UTC)