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The result was: '''promoted''' by ''[[User: Allen3|Allen3]]''&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:Allen3|talk]]</sup> 13:04, 25 June 2013 (UTC)<br />}}
 
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*... <s>that "'''[[White Foxes]]'''", the [[lead single]] of Norwegian singer-songwriter [[Susanne Sundfør]]'s 2012 album ''[[The Silicone Veil]]'', has been described  as "thick with mythology and dark as a nighttime thicket"?</s>
 
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:* ''Comment'': '''ALT1''' ... that "'''[[White Foxes]]'''", a 2012 [[lead single|single]] by singer-songwriter [[Susanne Sundfør]], quickly grew to be the most downloaded song on [[iTunes]] in Norway?
 
 
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:{{*mp}} ''Comment'': '''ALT1''' ... that "'''[[White Foxes]]'''", a 2012 [[lead single|single]] by singer-songwriter [[Susanne Sundfør]], quickly grew to be the most downloaded song on [[iTunes]] in Norway?
 
 
<small>Created by [[User:Ruby2010|Ruby2010]] ([[User talk:Ruby2010|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 19:16, 17 June 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:Ruby2010|Ruby2010]] ([[User talk:Ruby2010|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 19:16, 17 June 2013 (UTC)</small>.
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new enough, long enough, was nominated in time, and is neutral. So basically it checks out, but there are some minor issues I want sorted before passing. I don't find the original hook any interesting (and it needs an inline citation if approved), so I'd prefer the ALT hook, which is supported by an inline citation. I don't know if it is common practice in song-articles, but I would like you to rewrite some of the paraphrasing into prose, like the sectios about Pitchfork media and Daniel D'amour. [[User:Mentoz86|Mentoz86]] ([[User talk:Mentoz86|talk]]) 08:16, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new enough, long enough, was nominated in time, and is neutral. So basically it checks out, but there are some minor issues I want sorted before passing. I don't find the original hook any interesting (and it needs an inline citation if approved), so I'd prefer the ALT hook, which is supported by an inline citation. I don't know if it is common practice in song-articles, but I would like you to rewrite some of the paraphrasing into prose, like the sectios about Pitchfork media and Daniel D'amour. [[User:Mentoz86|Mentoz86]] ([[User talk:Mentoz86|talk]]) 08:16, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
 
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::*Thanks for reviewing. I have trimmed/converted the two sections you referred to to prose. I am fine with the alt hook being promoted. Let me know if there is anything else (I am also new to song articles). '''[[User:Ruby2010|<font color="003B48" size="2px">Ruby</font>]]''' [[User talk:Ruby2010|<font color="maroon " size="2px">2010/</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Ruby2010|<font color="maroon " size="2px">2013</font>]] 19:58, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
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:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Great, the ALT-hook is good to go. Good job. [[User:Mentoz86|Mentoz86]] ([[User talk:Mentoz86|talk]]) 09:31, 25 June 2013 (UTC){{#if:yes|</div></noinclude>|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template talk:Did you know/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:Pending DYK nominations]][[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]]|{{#ifeq:{{FULLPAGENAME}}|Template:Did you know nominations/{{SUBPAGENAME}}|[[Category:DYK/Nominations|Pending]][[Category:Pending DYK nominations]]}}}}}}<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->

Latest revision as of 01:09, 8 March 2018

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 13:04, 25 June 2013 (UTC)

White Foxes

Created by Ruby2010 (talk). Self nominated at 19:16, 17 June 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article is new enough, long enough, was nominated in time, and is neutral. So basically it checks out, but there are some minor issues I want sorted before passing. I don't find the original hook any interesting (and it needs an inline citation if approved), so I'd prefer the ALT hook, which is supported by an inline citation. I don't know if it is common practice in song-articles, but I would like you to rewrite some of the paraphrasing into prose, like the sectios about Pitchfork media and Daniel D'amour. Mentoz86 (talk) 08:16, 21 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks for reviewing. I have trimmed/converted the two sections you referred to to prose. I am fine with the alt hook being promoted. Let me know if there is anything else (I am also new to song articles). Ruby 2010/2013 19:58, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Great, the ALT-hook is good to go. Good job. Mentoz86 (talk) 09:31, 25 June 2013 (UTC)