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====1951 Hawaii cyclone====
 
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*<s> ... that a '''[[1951 Hawaii cyclone|cyclone]]''' made [[landfall (meteorology)|landfall]] in [[Hawaii]] three times?</s>
 
*<s> ... that a '''[[1951 Hawaii cyclone|cyclone]]''' made [[landfall (meteorology)|landfall]] in [[Hawaii]] three times?</s>
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:* ''Comment'': Going to review another DYK, even though I don't have to QPQ. (Start training :P)
 
:* ''Comment'': Going to review another DYK, even though I don't have to QPQ. (Start training :P)
 
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:CycloneIsaac|CycloneIsaac]] ([[User talk:CycloneIsaac|talk]]). Self nominated at 21:36, 11 June 2014 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:CycloneIsaac|CycloneIsaac]] ([[User talk:CycloneIsaac|talk]]). Self nominated at 21:36, 11 June 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I'm wondering, though, where you got all that information in the first paragraph under Meteorological history &ndash; are you interpreting the statistical charts in footnotes 2 and 3? Per DYK rules, you need to add a cite after the sentences describing the second and third landfalls. Also, I suggest adding "in 1951" to the hook to place it in context. No QPQ needed for under-5 DYKs nominator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:31, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I'm wondering, though, where you got all that information in the first paragraph under Meteorological history &ndash; are you interpreting the statistical charts in footnotes 2 and 3? Per DYK rules, you need to add a cite after the sentences describing the second and third landfalls. Also, I suggest adding "in 1951" to the hook to place it in context. No QPQ needed for under-5 DYKs nominator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:31, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
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::::*Thank you. What about my question about the statistical data? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:34, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 
::::*Thank you. What about my question about the statistical data? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:34, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 
:::::*IBTRACS and best track are statistical data, and I was interpreting it.&mdash;[[User:CycloneIsaac|<font face="Courier New" color="#5C5C33">CycloneIsaac</font>]] ([[User talk:CycloneIsaac|<font face="Courier New" color="#5C5C33">Talk</font>]]) 23:08, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
 
:::::*IBTRACS and best track are statistical data, and I was interpreting it.&mdash;[[User:CycloneIsaac|<font face="Courier New" color="#5C5C33">CycloneIsaac</font>]] ([[User talk:CycloneIsaac|<font face="Courier New" color="#5C5C33">Talk</font>]]) 23:08, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
::::::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] OK. The hook cites are both online, but I have to AGF your interpretations of the data. ALT1 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:42, 29 June 2014 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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::::::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] OK. The hook cites are both online, but I have to AGF your interpretations of the data. ALT1 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:42, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
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Revision as of 14:39, 30 June 2014

1951 Hawaii cyclone

  • Comment: Going to review another DYK, even though I don't have to QPQ. (Start training :P)

Moved to mainspace by CycloneIsaac (talk). Self nominated at 21:36, 11 June 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. I'm wondering, though, where you got all that information in the first paragraph under Meteorological history – are you interpreting the statistical charts in footnotes 2 and 3? Per DYK rules, you need to add a cite after the sentences describing the second and third landfalls. Also, I suggest adding "in 1951" to the hook to place it in context. No QPQ needed for under-5 DYKs nominator. Yoninah (talk) 20:31, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • I added a few more cites to footnotes 2 and 3 for the other two landfalls. I am proposing an alt hook, with your suggestion.
ALT 1:...that in 1951, a cyclone made landfall in Hawaii three times?
CycloneIsaac (Talk) 20:56, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Thank you. What about my question about the statistical data? Yoninah (talk) 21:34, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • IBTRACS and best track are statistical data, and I was interpreting it.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 23:08, 29 June 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg OK. The hook cites are both online, but I have to AGF your interpretations of the data. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:42, 29 June 2014 (UTC)