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− | * ... that [[Jesse Jackson]] compared the importance of the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' to [[collective bargaining]] to the importance the [[Selma to Montgomery marches]] had on voting rights? [https://www.upi.com/Archives/1986/04/13/The-Rev-Jesse-Jackson-hailed-as-the-last-hope/6952513752400/] | + | <s>* ... that [[Jesse Jackson]] compared the importance of the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' to [[collective bargaining]] to the importance the [[Selma to Montgomery marches]] had on voting rights? [https://www.upi.com/Archives/1986/04/13/The-Rev-Jesse-Jackson-hailed-as-the-last-hope/6952513752400/]</s> |
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' had been the subject of both an [[American Dream (film)|Academy Award-winning film]] and a stage play by the [[Children's Theatre Company]]? | ** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' had been the subject of both an [[American Dream (film)|Academy Award-winning film]] and a stage play by the [[Children's Theatre Company]]? | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Earl Dawson]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Earl Dawson]] | ||
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:: Thanks for the review, as far as the first hook is concerned, I see that I really could have made it clearer. How about this: | :: Thanks for the review, as far as the first hook is concerned, I see that I really could have made it clearer. How about this: | ||
− | * ... that [[Jesse Jackson]] compared the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' and its importance to [[collective bargaining]] to the impact the [[Selma to Montgomery marches]] had on voting rights? | + | '''ALT0a'''* ... that [[Jesse Jackson]] compared the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' and its importance to [[collective bargaining]] to the impact the [[Selma to Montgomery marches]] had on voting rights? |
:: But also, I think I'd probably prefer to use ALT1 as the hook, though with "had" replaced by "has", such that: | :: But also, I think I'd probably prefer to use ALT1 as the hook, though with "had" replaced by "has", such that: | ||
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' has been the subject of both an [[American Dream (film)|Academy Award-winning film]] and a stage play by the [[Children's Theatre Company]]? | ** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' has been the subject of both an [[American Dream (film)|Academy Award-winning film]] and a stage play by the [[Children's Theatre Company]]? | ||
:: Sources for this hook can be found at the following places: [https://www.chicagotribune.com/news/ct-xpm-1990-10-09-9003230866-story.html] (Academy Award-winning film) and [https://www.twincities.com/2020/02/20/spamtown-usa-looks-at-kids-caught-in-the-middle-of-the-hormel-strike-in-austin-back-in-the-1980s/] (stage play). Thanks! [[User:JJonahJackalope|JJonahJackalope]] ([[User talk:JJonahJackalope|talk]]) 03:01, 6 November 2020 (UTC) | :: Sources for this hook can be found at the following places: [https://www.chicagotribune.com/news/ct-xpm-1990-10-09-9003230866-story.html] (Academy Award-winning film) and [https://www.twincities.com/2020/02/20/spamtown-usa-looks-at-kids-caught-in-the-middle-of-the-hormel-strike-in-austin-back-in-the-1980s/] (stage play). Thanks! [[User:JJonahJackalope|JJonahJackalope]] ([[User talk:JJonahJackalope|talk]]) 03:01, 6 November 2020 (UTC) | ||
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1985–86 Hormel strike
* ... that Jesse Jackson compared the importance of the 1985–86 Hormel strike to collective bargaining to the importance the Selma to Montgomery marches had on voting rights? [1]
- ALT1:... that the 1985–86 Hormel strike had been the subject of both an Academy Award-winning film and a stage play by the Children's Theatre Company?
Improved to Good Article status by JJonahJackalope (talk). Self-nominated at 18:24, 4 November 2020 (UTC).
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- Both hooks interesting, but the first one is a bit confusing, I had to read it twice, wondering if we can tweak that. —valereee (talk) 12:53, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- Jackson hook is cited, the other has a source sentence The strike was later the subject of a 2020 stage play written by Philip Dawkins for the Children's Theatre Company called Spamtown, USA, which focused on the children of several Hormel workers on different sides of the strike. that needs a citation. —valereee (talk) 12:56, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, as far as the first hook is concerned, I see that I really could have made it clearer. How about this:
ALT0a* ... that Jesse Jackson compared the 1985–86 Hormel strike and its importance to collective bargaining to the impact the Selma to Montgomery marches had on voting rights?
- But also, I think I'd probably prefer to use ALT1 as the hook, though with "had" replaced by "has", such that:
- ALT1:... that the 1985–86 Hormel strike has been the subject of both an Academy Award-winning film and a stage play by the Children's Theatre Company?
- Sources for this hook can be found at the following places: [2] (Academy Award-winning film) and [3] (stage play). Thanks! JJonahJackalope (talk) 03:01, 6 November 2020 (UTC)