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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]])&nbsp;23:47, 19 November 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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<s>* ... that [[Jesse Jackson]] compared the importance of the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' to [[collective bargaining]] to the importance the [[Selma to Montgomery marches]] had on voting rights? [https://www.upi.com/Archives/1986/04/13/The-Rev-Jesse-Jackson-hailed-as-the-last-hope/6952513752400/]</s>
 
<s>* ... that [[Jesse Jackson]] compared the importance of the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' to [[collective bargaining]] to the importance the [[Selma to Montgomery marches]] had on voting rights? [https://www.upi.com/Archives/1986/04/13/The-Rev-Jesse-Jackson-hailed-as-the-last-hope/6952513752400/]</s>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' has been the subject of both an [[American Dream (film)|Academy Award-winning film]] and a stage play by the [[Children's Theatre Company]]?[https://www.chicagotribune.com/news/ct-xpm-1990-10-09-9003230866-story.html] (Academy Award-winning film) and [https://www.twincities.com/2020/02/20/spamtown-usa-looks-at-kids-caught-in-the-middle-of-the-hormel-strike-in-austin-back-in-the-1980s/] (stage play)
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[1985–86 Hormel strike]]''' has been the subject of both an [[American Dream (film)|Academy Award-winning film]] and a stage play by the [[Children's Theatre Company]]?[https://www.chicagotribune.com/news/ct-xpm-1990-10-09-9003230866-story.html] (Academy Award-winning film) and [https://www.twincities.com/2020/02/20/spamtown-usa-looks-at-kids-caught-in-the-middle-of-the-hormel-strike-in-austin-back-in-the-1980s/] (stage play)
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Earl Dawson]]
 
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<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:JJonahJackalope|JJonahJackalope]] ([[User talk:JJonahJackalope|talk]]). Self-nominated at 18:24, 4 November 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:JJonahJackalope|JJonahJackalope]] ([[User talk:JJonahJackalope|talk]]). Self-nominated at 18:24, 4 November 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:* Starting review [[User:Valereee|—valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 12:49, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:* Starting review [[User:Valereee|—valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 12:49, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 
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* Both hooks interesting, but the first one is a bit confusing, I had to read it twice, wondering if we can tweak that. [[User:Valereee|—valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 12:53, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
 
* Both hooks interesting, but the first one is a bit confusing, I had to read it twice, wondering if we can tweak that. [[User:Valereee|—valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 12:53, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
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::::I've inserted a cn tag where I'm talking about. [[User:Valereee|—valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 15:23, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
 
::::I've inserted a cn tag where I'm talking about. [[User:Valereee|—valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 15:23, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::{{u|Valereee}}, sorry about the confusion there, but I went ahead and moved that citation to the sentence in question and added another citation to the subsequent sentence talking about the reviews. Thanks, and if there's anything else please let me know. -[[User:JJonahJackalope|JJonahJackalope]] ([[User talk:JJonahJackalope|talk]]) 15:35, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::{{u|Valereee}}, sorry about the confusion there, but I went ahead and moved that citation to the sentence in question and added another citation to the subsequent sentence talking about the reviews. Thanks, and if there's anything else please let me know. -[[User:JJonahJackalope|JJonahJackalope]] ([[User talk:JJonahJackalope|talk]]) 15:35, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
::::::No worries, and sorry for the delay in completing! Both hooks approved, nom prefers ALT1a [[User:Valereee|—valereee]] ([[User talk:Valereee|talk]]) 15:38, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 23:47, 19 November 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 23:47, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

1985–86 Hormel strike

* ... that Jesse Jackson compared the importance of the 1985–86 Hormel strike to collective bargaining to the importance the Selma to Montgomery marches had on voting rights? [1]

Improved to Good Article status by JJonahJackalope (talk). Self-nominated at 18:24, 4 November 2020 (UTC).

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  • Both hooks interesting, but the first one is a bit confusing, I had to read it twice, wondering if we can tweak that. —valereee (talk) 12:53, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Jackson hook is cited, the other has a source sentence The strike was later the subject of a 2020 stage play written by Philip Dawkins for the Children's Theatre Company called Spamtown, USA, which focused on the children of several Hormel workers on different sides of the strike. that needs a citation. —valereee (talk) 12:56, 5 November 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for the review, as far as the first hook is concerned, I see that I really could have made it clearer. How about this:

ALT0a* ... that Jesse Jackson compared the 1985–86 Hormel strike and its importance to collective bargaining to the impact the Selma to Montgomery marches had on voting rights?

But also, I think I'd probably prefer to use ALT1 as the hook, though with "had" replaced by "has", such that:
Sources for this hook can be found at the following places: [4] (Academy Award-winning film) and [5] (stage play). Thanks! JJonahJackalope (talk) 03:01, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, can you add those citations to the sentence (DYK needs it at the support sentence.) I tried, but I don't understand that style of referencing. Ping me when you reply, I'd forgotten all about this. —valereee (talk) 13:22, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, there you go, think that would work, and if not let me know! -JJonahJackalope (talk) 15:15, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, I'm sorry if I'm being stupid...what I need is for the sentence The strike was later the subject of a 2020 stage play written by Philip Dawkins for the Children's Theatre Company called Spamtown, USA, which focused on the children of several Hormel workers on different sides of the strike, which supports ALT1, to have a citation at the sentence. —valereee (talk) 15:21, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
I've inserted a cn tag where I'm talking about. —valereee (talk) 15:23, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, sorry about the confusion there, but I went ahead and moved that citation to the sentence in question and added another citation to the subsequent sentence talking about the reviews. Thanks, and if there's anything else please let me know. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 15:35, 19 November 2020 (UTC)
No worries, and sorry for the delay in completing! Both hooks approved, nom prefers ALT1a —valereee (talk) 15:38, 19 November 2020 (UTC)