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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New (Dec 15th), long enough, neutral, a few close paraphrasing concerns [https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DAdrift_%28video_game%29%26oldid%3D640337491&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fkotaku.com%2Fadam-orth-is-turning-his-personal-disaster-into-a-beaut-1520037629&minwords=2&minchars=13&removequotations=1 here], [[Wikipedia:QPQ|QPQ]] done. First hook needs an immediate ref in article (see [[Wikipedia:Did you know#Eligibility criteria|3b]]). Rephrased second hook to be a bit more neutral. Really, really nice work with this. Please ping me if I don't respond. <span style='font:bold small-caps 1.2em "Avenir";color:#909'>czar</span> [[user:czar|<span style="color:black;font-size:1.2em"><u>⨹</u></span>]] 23:45, 10 January 2015 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New (Dec 15th), long enough, neutral, a few close paraphrasing concerns [https://tools.wmflabs.org/dupdet/compare.php?url1=https%3A%2F%2Fen.wikipedia.org%2Fw%2Findex.php%3Ftitle%3DAdrift_%28video_game%29%26oldid%3D640337491&url2=http%3A%2F%2Fkotaku.com%2Fadam-orth-is-turning-his-personal-disaster-into-a-beaut-1520037629&minwords=2&minchars=13&removequotations=1 here], [[Wikipedia:QPQ|QPQ]] done. First hook needs an immediate ref in article (see [[Wikipedia:Did you know#Eligibility criteria|3b]]). Rephrased second hook to be a bit more neutral. Really, really nice work with this. Please ping me if I don't respond. <span style='font:bold small-caps 1.2em "Avenir";color:#909'>czar</span> [[user:czar|<span style="color:black;font-size:1.2em"><u>⨹</u></span>]] 23:45, 10 January 2015 (UTC) | ||
:::Thanks for the feedback, {{u|czar}}! I've gone ahead and changed some of the things you mentioned. Let me know if there are any remaining problems. -- [[User:Rhain1999|<span style="color: #008;">'''''Rhain'''''1999</span>]] <sup>([[User talk:Rhain1999|talk to me]])</sup> 02:13, 11 January 2015 (UTC) | :::Thanks for the feedback, {{u|czar}}! I've gone ahead and changed some of the things you mentioned. Let me know if there are any remaining problems. -- [[User:Rhain1999|<span style="color: #008;">'''''Rhain'''''1999</span>]] <sup>([[User talk:Rhain1999|talk to me]])</sup> 02:13, 11 January 2015 (UTC) | ||
| + | :::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] works for me, hooks check out, gtg. One thing I'd add is that the close paraphrasing [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Adrift_(video_game)&diff=641954741&oldid=641937730 changes] should be more than moving around the affected words but recasting the sentence to similar words wherever they can be avoided <span style='font:bold small-caps 1.2em "Avenir";color:#909'>czar</span> [[user:czar|<span style="color:black;font-size:1.2em"><u>⨹</u></span>]] 02:27, 11 January 2015 (UTC) | ||
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Adrift (video game)
- ... that the original prototype for the upcoming video game Adrift was developed by three people in ten weeks?
- ALT1:... that the upcoming video game Adrift is a metaphor for the controversy caused by developer Adam Orth's comments on the Xbox One's proposed digital rights management strategy?
- Reviewed: Hard Candy (film)
- Comment: Hook source, ALT1 source
Created by Rhain1999 (talk). Self nominated at 08:05, 15 December 2014 (UTC).
The hook - while compelling - seems to be sourced to a self-published source, namely, the video game publisher's own website. Could the hook be changed to "that developers claimed the original ..."? Other than that it's new enough, long enough, well-sourced, and seems to meet all other criteria. DocumentError (talk) 01:41, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I have actually read some external sources that back up the statement in the hook, but I'm fine with changing the hook as you suggested. -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 04:03, 17 December 2014 (UTC)
- Also, would it be possible to change the hook so that the title of the game reads "ADR1FT"? This is the official title for the game, and I actually believe that the article itself should be renamed if it does not conflict with any policies. -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 01:49, 18 December 2014 (UTC)
- Template:Ping, courtesy ping. Re: ADR1FT, the precedent of Se7en and Driv3r is to not spell it that way (with the sole exception of mentioning it once as a stylization in the lede). czar ⨹ 04:38, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
- I thought this was the case. Thanks for the information, Template:U! -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 08:34, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
- Template:Ping, courtesy ping. Re: ADR1FT, the precedent of Se7en and Driv3r is to not spell it that way (with the sole exception of mentioning it once as a stylization in the lede). czar ⨹ 04:38, 2 January 2015 (UTC)
Original reviewer has not responded to this. New review requested. Fuebaey (talk) 22:07, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
New (Dec 15th), long enough, neutral, a few close paraphrasing concerns here, QPQ done. First hook needs an immediate ref in article (see 3b). Rephrased second hook to be a bit more neutral. Really, really nice work with this. Please ping me if I don't respond. czar ⨹ 23:45, 10 January 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback, Template:U! I've gone ahead and changed some of the things you mentioned. Let me know if there are any remaining problems. -- Rhain1999 (talk to me) 02:13, 11 January 2015 (UTC)