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[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] There are a few completely unsourced or inadequately sourced paragraphs. The style should certainly be improved. I am not sure if the hook source qualifies as reliable, being self-published. The hook, however, would be excellent. [[User:Surtsicna|Surtsicna]] ([[User talk:Surtsicna|talk]]) 12:04, 28 June 2013 (UTC) | [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] There are a few completely unsourced or inadequately sourced paragraphs. The style should certainly be improved. I am not sure if the hook source qualifies as reliable, being self-published. The hook, however, would be excellent. [[User:Surtsicna|Surtsicna]] ([[User talk:Surtsicna|talk]]) 12:04, 28 June 2013 (UTC) | ||
:*While anecdotal, number 3 in this [http://travel.cnn.com/explorations/escape/8-lessons-learned-public-transportation-indonesia-896711 CNN Travel piece] does lend support for the hook. [[Special:Contributions/24.151.116.25|24.151.116.25]] ([[User talk:24.151.116.25|talk]]) 23:47, 1 July 2013 (UTC) | :*While anecdotal, number 3 in this [http://travel.cnn.com/explorations/escape/8-lessons-learned-public-transportation-indonesia-896711 CNN Travel piece] does lend support for the hook. [[Special:Contributions/24.151.116.25|24.151.116.25]] ([[User talk:24.151.116.25|talk]]) 23:47, 1 July 2013 (UTC) | ||
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+ | *[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] There have been significant changes to the article over the past week and a half. Can a reviewer see whether the issues raised by Surtsicna remain while doing a full review of the article as it currently stands, notably the hook sourcing? Many thanks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 04:36, 9 July 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Animal transportation
- ... that singing to anxious goats whilst transporting them is recommended?
Created by Seal Boxer (talk). Self nominated at 13:38, 27 June 2013 (UTC).
- There's no article. If there were, and the DYK hook was adequately sourced in the article, I think it would be a keeper, except I'd change the archaic "whilst" to "while" in accordance with style guidelines on both sides of the Atlantic. ~Amatulić (talk) 15:05, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
- The article was at Animal Transportation. I moved it to Animal transportation, and added a bold link to it in the hook. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 19:16, 27 June 2013 (UTC)
There are a few completely unsourced or inadequately sourced paragraphs. The style should certainly be improved. I am not sure if the hook source qualifies as reliable, being self-published. The hook, however, would be excellent. Surtsicna (talk) 12:04, 28 June 2013 (UTC)
- While anecdotal, number 3 in this CNN Travel piece does lend support for the hook. 24.151.116.25 (talk) 23:47, 1 July 2013 (UTC)
There have been significant changes to the article over the past week and a half. Can a reviewer see whether the issues raised by Surtsicna remain while doing a full review of the article as it currently stands, notably the hook sourcing? Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 04:36, 9 July 2013 (UTC)