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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]])&nbsp;02:34, 11 October 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that before he died, aged 46, '''[[Anton Ausserer]]''' had described 38 new species of [[tarantula]]?
 
* ... that before he died, aged 46, '''[[Anton Ausserer]]''' had described 38 new species of [[tarantula]]?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/The Ford 50th Anniversary Show|The Ford 50th Anniversary Show]]
 
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<small>5x expanded by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]). Self-nominated at 06:01, 29 September 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]). Self-nominated at 06:01, 29 September 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new enough and long enough. A QPQ has been done and I didn't find any close paraphrasing. Given that all of the sources are offline, I am assuming good faith on their reliability. The hook fact is cited inline, but only partially: the 38 new species of tarantula is cited, but not that he died at the age of 46 (indeed, no source is provided for either his date of birth or his date of death). [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 09:35, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The article is new enough and long enough. A QPQ has been done and I didn't find any close paraphrasing. Given that all of the sources are offline, I am assuming good faith on their reliability. The hook fact is cited inline, but only partially: the 38 new species of tarantula is cited, but not that he died at the age of 46 (indeed, no source is provided for either his date of birth or his date of death). [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 09:35, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
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::::Thanks for the edit; however, as "age 46" is part of the hook, the reference needs to be duplicated at the sentence that goes {{tq|but died of lung disease a year later at the age of 46}} as well. In addition, the last paragraph of the "Life and career" section could be reworded since the word "tarantula" is repeated in relatively quick succession. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 10:40, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
 
::::Thanks for the edit; however, as "age 46" is part of the hook, the reference needs to be duplicated at the sentence that goes {{tq|but died of lung disease a year later at the age of 46}} as well. In addition, the last paragraph of the "Life and career" section could be reworded since the word "tarantula" is repeated in relatively quick succession. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 10:40, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
 
::::* {{Ping|Narutolovehinata5}} How's that then? [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 11:25, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
 
::::* {{Ping|Narutolovehinata5}} How's that then? [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 11:25, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
::::::* [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Thanks, this should be good to go now. There's just one last comment: the "Anton Ausserer's life was short, busy and full of hardship" phrase doesn't sound encyclopedic (it sounds like something you'd see in an obituary or a tribute, not an encyclopedia) so it probably needs to be removed, but it's a minor issue that shouldn't hold up the nom. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 12:10, 30 September 2020 (UTC)  
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::::::* [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Thanks, this should be good to go now. There's just one last comment: the "Anton Ausserer's life was short, busy and full of hardship" phrase doesn't sound encyclopedic (it sounds like something you'd see in an obituary or a tribute, not an encyclopedia) so it probably needs to be removed, but it's a minor issue that shouldn't hold up the nom. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 12:10, 30 September 2020 (UTC)</div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 02:34, 11 October 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 02:34, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Anton Ausserer

5x expanded by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 06:01, 29 September 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The article is new enough and long enough. A QPQ has been done and I didn't find any close paraphrasing. Given that all of the sources are offline, I am assuming good faith on their reliability. The hook fact is cited inline, but only partially: the 38 new species of tarantula is cited, but not that he died at the age of 46 (indeed, no source is provided for either his date of birth or his date of death). Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 09:35, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I have added two citations to the lead, one is online and confirms the year of birth and of death, the other is from the German Wikipedia and presumably confirms the actual dates. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:03, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
Thanks for the edit; however, as "age 46" is part of the hook, the reference needs to be duplicated at the sentence that goes Template:Tq as well. In addition, the last paragraph of the "Life and career" section could be reworded since the word "tarantula" is repeated in relatively quick succession. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 10:40, 30 September 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg Thanks, this should be good to go now. There's just one last comment: the "Anton Ausserer's life was short, busy and full of hardship" phrase doesn't sound encyclopedic (it sounds like something you'd see in an obituary or a tribute, not an encyclopedia) so it probably needs to be removed, but it's a minor issue that shouldn't hold up the nom. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:10, 30 September 2020 (UTC)