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:[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Fantastic article! Length, newness, cites, QPQ all good to go. Suggest ''slight'' re-wording of hook: "... that composer [[Ciprian Porumbescu]] died of tuberculosis he caught while awaiting trial for allegedly treason as leader of '''[[Arboroasa]]''' student society?" [[User:Maury Markowitz|Maury Markowitz]] ([[User talk:Maury Markowitz|talk]]) 22:46, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
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::One minor suggestion; am I correct in thinking that the area in question was culturally Romanian at some previous point in time? That seems like something that the lede should mention one way or the other. [[User:Maury Markowitz|Maury Markowitz]] ([[User talk:Maury Markowitz|talk]]) 22:46, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
  
 
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Arboroasa

  • ... that composer Ciprian Porumbescu contracted the tuberculosis that would kill him while awaiting trial for treason he had allegedly committed as leader of Arboroasa student society?

Created by Biruitorul (talk). Self nominated at 01:04, 13 February 2015 (UTC).

Symbol confirmed.svg Fantastic article! Length, newness, cites, QPQ all good to go. Suggest slight re-wording of hook: "... that composer Ciprian Porumbescu died of tuberculosis he caught while awaiting trial for allegedly treason as leader of Arboroasa student society?" Maury Markowitz (talk) 22:46, 18 February 2015 (UTC)
One minor suggestion; am I correct in thinking that the area in question was culturally Romanian at some previous point in time? That seems like something that the lede should mention one way or the other. Maury Markowitz (talk) 22:46, 18 February 2015 (UTC)