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* ... that the '''[[BBC Radio Theatre]]''' ''(pictured)'' was equipped with a developmental [[Ultra-high-definition television|Super Hi-Vision]] video system with [[22.2 surround sound]] audio to show the [[2012 Summer Olympics opening ceremony]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.bbc.co.uk/rd/blog/2012-08-the-olympics-in-super-hi-visio]</small>
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* <s>... that the '''[[BBC Radio Theatre]]''' ''(pictured)'' was equipped with a developmental [[Ultra-high-definition television|Super Hi-Vision]] video system with [[22.2 surround sound]] audio to show the [[2012 Summer Olympics opening ceremony]]?</s> <small>Source: [https://www.bbc.co.uk/rd/blog/2012-08-the-olympics-in-super-hi-visio]</small>
 
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<small>Created/expanded by [[User:MIDI|MIDI]] ([[User talk:MIDI|talk]]). Self-nominated at 13:05, 12 November 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:MIDI|MIDI]] ([[User talk:MIDI|talk]]). Self-nominated at 13:05, 12 November 2019 (UTC).</small>
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:::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thanks. ALT has been verified and cited inline, the rest of the review is per Raymie. Good to go. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 10:38, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
 
:::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thanks. ALT has been verified and cited inline, the rest of the review is per Raymie. Good to go. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 10:38, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
 
::::::Works for me! [[User:MIDI|MIDI]] ([[User talk:MIDI|talk]]) 10:50, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
 
::::::Works for me! [[User:MIDI|MIDI]] ([[User talk:MIDI|talk]]) 10:50, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
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:::::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this, but the hook is rather vague about who the dormitory was for; it could have been a college dorm. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:46, 22 December 2019 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 20:46, 22 December 2019

BBC Radio Theatre

BBC Radio Theatre
BBC Radio Theatre

Created/expanded by MIDI (talk). Self-nominated at 13:05, 12 November 2019 (UTC).

  •  Comment: Seems a rather boring hook to me - if it were me, I'd go with the sound leakage, or David Bowie & Ed Sheeran. Johnbod (talk) 22:49, 12 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping New enough, long enough, QPQ present. No textual issues. I concur with Johnbod that a new hook is necessary as the other one (while meeting sourcing criteria) is rather dull. I actually would like to propose a different hook than either of those: Raymie (tc) 07:55, 13 November 2019 (UTC)
ALT1: ... that the Concert Hall inside the BBC's Broadcasting House was pressed into service as a dormitory at the outbreak of World War II?
The new hook is a lot better (the original hook honestly read like an advertisement), it's just that the sentence that talks about it (the one that starts before the quote) doesn't have a footnote. This will be good to go once that is addressed. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:15, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
Template:Ping I added a new invocation of that citation (same one as the quote itself has) since it's such a minor addition. Raymie (tc) 06:23, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Thanks. ALT has been verified and cited inline, the rest of the review is per Raymie. Good to go. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 10:38, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
Works for me! MIDI (talk) 10:50, 14 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this, but the hook is rather vague about who the dormitory was for; it could have been a college dorm. Yoninah (talk) 20:46, 22 December 2019 (UTC)