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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough, new enough, QPQ done, no copyvios detected, hook sourced but too long. Article is currently at AfD but is swinging towards keep, so while you're waiting I recommend you conjure up a shorter hook - currently too long at [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Launchballer/sandbox&oldid=598438690 202 characters].--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 19:17, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough, new enough, QPQ done, no copyvios detected, hook sourced but too long. Article is currently at AfD but is swinging towards keep, so while you're waiting I recommend you conjure up a shorter hook - currently too long at [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Launchballer/sandbox&oldid=598438690 202 characters].--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 19:17, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
 
::* OK, here's my shot at it (ALT1 above). [[User:Wnt|Wnt]] ([[User talk:Wnt|talk]]) 16:11, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
 
::* OK, here's my shot at it (ALT1 above). [[User:Wnt|Wnt]] ([[User talk:Wnt|talk]]) 16:11, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
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::::Not bad, but uninteresting. Why were they so low? I think it would be best to state why in the hook.--<span style="background:#FF0;font-family:Rockwell Extra Bold">[[User:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">Laun</font>]][[User talk:Launchballer|<font color="#00F">chba</font>]][[Special:Contributions/Launchballer|<font color="#00F">ller</font>]]</span> 19:43, 8 March 2014 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 19:43, 8 March 2014

Barack Obama on mass surveillance

  • ... that Barack Obama addressed the German public to mend German–American relations, which an official said were "worse than … the low-point in 2003 during the Iraq War" due to surveillance allegations?
  • ALT1: ... that Barack Obama addressed the German public, seeking to mend relations described by Philipp Missfelder as "worse than … the low-point in 2003 during the Iraq War"?

Created by HectorMoffet (talk), Spirit of Eagle (talk). Nominated by Spirit of Eagle (talk) at 05:19, 22 February 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Long enough, new enough, QPQ done, no copyvios detected, hook sourced but too long. Article is currently at AfD but is swinging towards keep, so while you're waiting I recommend you conjure up a shorter hook - currently too long at 202 characters.--Launchballer 19:17, 6 March 2014 (UTC)
  • OK, here's my shot at it (ALT1 above). Wnt (talk) 16:11, 7 March 2014 (UTC)
Not bad, but uninteresting. Why were they so low? I think it would be best to state why in the hook.--Launchballer 19:43, 8 March 2014 (UTC)