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* <s>... that the '''[[Battle of Kolubara]]''' in late 1914 ended with a [[decisive victory|decisive]] Serbian victory?</s> | * <s>... that the '''[[Battle of Kolubara]]''' in late 1914 ended with a [[decisive victory|decisive]] Serbian victory?</s> | ||
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:* ''Reviewed'': Not a self-nomination | :* ''Reviewed'': Not a self-nomination | ||
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:23 editor|23 editor]] ([[User talk:23 editor|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) at 21:22, 5 October 2014 (UTC)</small>. | <small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:23 editor|23 editor]] ([[User talk:23 editor|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) at 21:22, 5 October 2014 (UTC)</small>. | ||
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Recently promoted to GA, all good. Just need to rephrase the hook and I'll accept it, which should be more interesting like "ended after a month with a decisive Serbian victory" or whatever you like. Just mention the duration of the battle because it is also an interesting thing that there were 22,000 killed in just a month of a battle, which is not a thing we hear daily. --[[User:Captain Assassin!|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:Green;font-family:Trajan Pro;">'''''Captain Assassin!'''''</span>]] <sup><span style="color:Red;font-size:85%;">«[[User talk:Captain Assassin!|T]] ♦ [[Special:Contributions/Captain Assassin!|C]] ♦ [[User:Captain Assassin!/Guestbook|G]]»</span></sup> 14:48, 22 October 2014 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Recently promoted to GA, all good. Just need to rephrase the hook and I'll accept it, which should be more interesting like "ended after a month with a decisive Serbian victory" or whatever you like. Just mention the duration of the battle because it is also an interesting thing that there were 22,000 killed in just a month of a battle, which is not a thing we hear daily. --[[User:Captain Assassin!|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:Green;font-family:Trajan Pro;">'''''Captain Assassin!'''''</span>]] <sup><span style="color:Red;font-size:85%;">«[[User talk:Captain Assassin!|T]] ♦ [[Special:Contributions/Captain Assassin!|C]] ♦ [[User:Captain Assassin!/Guestbook|G]]»</span></sup> 14:48, 22 October 2014 (UTC) | ||
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::::*No no no, firstly I don't like its wording and secondly it should be less than 200 characters, even more shorter is better. Hook needs to be rephrased, do not mention the kills just put 1914 before battle's name and then mention that ''was ended with a [[decisive victory|decisive]] Serbian victory after a month of bloodshed'' --[[User:Captain Assassin!|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:Green;font-family:Trajan Pro;">'''''Captain Assassin!'''''</span>]] <sup><span style="color:Red;font-size:85%;">«[[User talk:Captain Assassin!|T]] ♦ [[Special:Contributions/Captain Assassin!|C]] ♦ [[User:Captain Assassin!/Guestbook|G]]»</span></sup> 17:43, 26 October 2014 (UTC) | ::::*No no no, firstly I don't like its wording and secondly it should be less than 200 characters, even more shorter is better. Hook needs to be rephrased, do not mention the kills just put 1914 before battle's name and then mention that ''was ended with a [[decisive victory|decisive]] Serbian victory after a month of bloodshed'' --[[User:Captain Assassin!|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:Green;font-family:Trajan Pro;">'''''Captain Assassin!'''''</span>]] <sup><span style="color:Red;font-size:85%;">«[[User talk:Captain Assassin!|T]] ♦ [[Special:Contributions/Captain Assassin!|C]] ♦ [[User:Captain Assassin!/Guestbook|G]]»</span></sup> 17:43, 26 October 2014 (UTC) | ||
:::::* '''ALT2:''' ... that the 1914 '''[[Battle of Kolubara]]''' ended with a [[decisive victory|decisive]] Serbian victory after a month of bloodshed? [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) 23:28, 8 November 2014 (UTC) | :::::* '''ALT2:''' ... that the 1914 '''[[Battle of Kolubara]]''' ended with a [[decisive victory|decisive]] Serbian victory after a month of bloodshed? [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) 23:28, 8 November 2014 (UTC) | ||
| − | :* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Sorry for the delay, and it's good to go. --[[User:Captain Assassin!|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:Green;font-family:Trajan Pro;">'''''Captain Assassin!'''''</span>]] <sup><span style="color:Red;font-size:85%;">«[[User talk:Captain Assassin!|T]] ♦ [[Special:Contributions/Captain Assassin!|C]] ♦ [[User:Captain Assassin!/Guestbook|G]]»</span></sup> 15:44, 16 November 2014 (UTC) | + | :* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Sorry for the delay, and it's good to go. --[[User:Captain Assassin!|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:Green;font-family:Trajan Pro;">'''''Captain Assassin!'''''</span>]] <sup><span style="color:Red;font-size:85%;">«[[User talk:Captain Assassin!|T]] ♦ [[Special:Contributions/Captain Assassin!|C]] ♦ [[User:Captain Assassin!/Guestbook|G]]»</span></sup> 15:44, 16 November 2014 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> |
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Latest revision as of 19:29, 16 November 2014
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 19:29, 16 November 2014 (UTC)
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Battle of Kolubara
... that the Battle of Kolubara in late 1914 ended with a decisive Serbian victory?
- Reviewed: Not a self-nomination
Improved to Good Article status by 23 editor (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 21:22, 5 October 2014 (UTC).
Recently promoted to GA, all good. Just need to rephrase the hook and I'll accept it, which should be more interesting like "ended after a month with a decisive Serbian victory" or whatever you like. Just mention the duration of the battle because it is also an interesting thing that there were 22,000 killed in just a month of a battle, which is not a thing we hear daily. --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 14:48, 22 October 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review. ALT1 suggested below. Oceanh (talk) 08:00, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
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... that in the Battle of Kolubara in late 1914, which ended with a decisive Serbian victory, the Austro-Hungarians suffered about 30,000 killed, while the Serbs had 22,000 killed?
- No no no, firstly I don't like its wording and secondly it should be less than 200 characters, even more shorter is better. Hook needs to be rephrased, do not mention the kills just put 1914 before battle's name and then mention that was ended with a decisive Serbian victory after a month of bloodshed --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 17:43, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the 1914 Battle of Kolubara ended with a decisive Serbian victory after a month of bloodshed? Oceanh (talk) 23:28, 8 November 2014 (UTC)
- ALT1:
- Thank you for the review. ALT1 suggested below. Oceanh (talk) 08:00, 26 October 2014 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay, and it's good to go. --Captain Assassin! «T ♦ C ♦ G» 15:44, 16 November 2014 (UTC)