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| − | * ... that '''[[Bertha Park High School]]''' was the first new high school in [[Scotland]] for 20 years? <small>Source: "[https://www.dailyrecord.co.uk/news/local-news/very-special-start-term-bertha-18990405 Bertha Park High School, which is the first completely new secondary school in Scotland for 20 years.]"</small> | + | * <s>... that '''[[Bertha Park High School]]''' was the first new high school in [[Scotland]] for 20 years?</s> <small>Source: "[https://www.dailyrecord.co.uk/news/local-news/very-special-start-term-bertha-18990405 Bertha Park High School, which is the first completely new secondary school in Scotland for 20 years.]"</small> |
| − | ** '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Bertha Park High School]]''' was the first new high school in [[Scotland]] for 20 years, and the first in its [[Perth and Kinross|local area]] since 1972? | + | ** '''ALT1''':<s>... that '''[[Bertha Park High School]]''' was the first new high school in [[Scotland]] for 20 years, and the first in its [[Perth and Kinross|local area]] since 1972? </s> <small>Source: As ALT0 plus "[https://www.thecourier.co.uk/fp/news/local/perth-kinross/682690/perths-newest-secondary-bertha-park-high-school-ahead-of-schedule/ it will be the first secondary school to be built in Perth and Kinross since 1972.]"</small> |
| − | ** '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Bertha Park High School]]''' was the only school in the UK to be selected as one of [[Microsoft]]'s first Flagship Schools? <small>Source: [https://educationblog.microsoft.com/en-us/2018/09/transforming-education-microsoft-flagship-schools/ List of schools at this link.] </small> | + | ** '''ALT2''':<s>... that '''[[Bertha Park High School]]''' was the only school in the UK to be selected as one of [[Microsoft]]'s first Flagship Schools?</s> <small>Source: [https://educationblog.microsoft.com/en-us/2018/09/transforming-education-microsoft-flagship-schools/ List of schools at this link.] </small> |
** '''ALT3''':... that when '''[[Bertha Park High School]]''' opened all the pupils were provided with [[iPad]]s? <small>Source: "[https://futurescot.com/scotlands-newest-high-school-to-lock-down-pupils-phones-as-part-of-social-media-detox-plan/ each new pupil at the new-build school will be issued a brand new Apple iPad]" </small> | ** '''ALT3''':... that when '''[[Bertha Park High School]]''' opened all the pupils were provided with [[iPad]]s? <small>Source: "[https://futurescot.com/scotlands-newest-high-school-to-lock-down-pupils-phones-as-part-of-social-media-detox-plan/ each new pupil at the new-build school will be issued a brand new Apple iPad]" </small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, within policy. '''ALT3''' is the best and cited. QPQ exempted. Good to go. [[User:Vincent60030|<span style="color: orange">Vincent</span>]]<sup>[[User:Vincent60030/London Underground|<span style="color: red">LUFan</span>]]</sup> ([[User talk:Vincent60030|talk]]) <small>([[Special:Contributions/Vincent60030|Kenton!]])</small> 15:04, 23 August 2020 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, within policy. '''ALT3''' is the best and cited. QPQ exempted. Good to go. [[User:Vincent60030|<span style="color: orange">Vincent</span>]]<sup>[[User:Vincent60030/London Underground|<span style="color: red">LUFan</span>]]</sup> ([[User talk:Vincent60030|talk]]) <small>([[Special:Contributions/Vincent60030|Kenton!]])</small> 15:04, 23 August 2020 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote ALT3, but upon reviewing the source I see you have a much better hook in the fact that they confiscated students' phones and gave them different ones. Also, any reader who clicks on the article to find out more about ALT3 will not find out anything. You need to add more from the source to satisfy readers' interest in your hook fact. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 18:53, 5 September 2020 (UTC) | ||
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Bertha Park High School
... that Bertha Park High School was the first new high school in Scotland for 20 years?Source: "Bertha Park High School, which is the first completely new secondary school in Scotland for 20 years."- ALT1:
... that Bertha Park High School was the first new high school in Scotland for 20 years, and the first in its local area since 1972?Source: As ALT0 plus "it will be the first secondary school to be built in Perth and Kinross since 1972." - ALT2:
... that Bertha Park High School was the only school in the UK to be selected as one of Microsoft's first Flagship Schools?Source: List of schools at this link. - ALT3:... that when Bertha Park High School opened all the pupils were provided with iPads? Source: "each new pupil at the new-build school will be issued a brand new Apple iPad"
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- Comment: Not sure what best to put in a hook, hence the additional choices.
Moved to mainspace by CSJJ104 (talk). Self-nominated at 15:18, 22 August 2020 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, within policy. ALT3 is the best and cited. QPQ exempted. Good to go. VincentLUFan (talk) (Kenton!) 15:04, 23 August 2020 (UTC)
Hi, I came by to promote ALT3, but upon reviewing the source I see you have a much better hook in the fact that they confiscated students' phones and gave them different ones. Also, any reader who clicks on the article to find out more about ALT3 will not find out anything. You need to add more from the source to satisfy readers' interest in your hook fact. Yoninah (talk) 18:53, 5 September 2020 (UTC)