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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] This article is new enough and long enough. I see no evidence of close paraphrasing and the hook is appropriately sourced. An alternative, more interesting hook might be - [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 05:08, 26 June 2013 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] This article is new enough and long enough. I see no evidence of close paraphrasing and the hook is appropriately sourced. An alternative, more interesting hook might be - [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 05:08, 26 June 2013 (UTC) | ||
:*'''ALT1'''... that '''[[Bibi Amtus Salam]]''' once fasted with [[Mahatma Gandhi|Gandhi]] for 21 days? | :*'''ALT1'''... that '''[[Bibi Amtus Salam]]''' once fasted with [[Mahatma Gandhi|Gandhi]] for 21 days? | ||
| − | ::* I'd like to rework the original hook as '''ALT2''': ...that '''[[Bibi Amtus Salam]]''', an associate of [[MK Gandhi|Gandhi]]'s, played a role in popularising Jinnah's title of [[Quaid-e-Azam]]? - Less cryptic and sets a context. I'd personally prefer sticking to the Jinnah hook because it is unique; lots of people took up fasts with Gandhi at various points in his political career. [[User:Ashwin147|Ashwin147]] ([[User talk:Ashwin147|talk]]) 08:42, 26 June 2013 (UTC) | + | ::* I'd like to rework the original hook as '''ALT2''': ... that '''[[Bibi Amtus Salam]]''', an associate of [[MK Gandhi|Gandhi]]'s, played a role in popularising Jinnah's title of [[Quaid-e-Azam]]? - Less cryptic and sets a context. I'd personally prefer sticking to the Jinnah hook because it is unique; lots of people took up fasts with Gandhi at various points in his political career. [[User:Ashwin147|Ashwin147]] ([[User talk:Ashwin147|talk]]) 08:42, 26 June 2013 (UTC) |
:*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I am happy with any of the three hooks, the nominator would prefer to go with ALT2. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 09:14, 26 June 2013 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I am happy with any of the three hooks, the nominator would prefer to go with ALT2. [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 09:14, 26 June 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Bibi Amtus Salam
- ... that Bibi Amtus Salam played a role in popularising Quaid-e-Azam?
- Reviewed: Oyster ice cream
Created by Ashwin147 (talk). Self nominated at 04:57, 20 June 2013 (UTC).
- 16px This article is new enough and long enough. I see no evidence of close paraphrasing and the hook is appropriately sourced. An alternative, more interesting hook might be - Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:08, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1... that Bibi Amtus Salam once fasted with Gandhi for 21 days?
- I'd like to rework the original hook as ALT2: ... that Bibi Amtus Salam, an associate of Gandhi's, played a role in popularising Jinnah's title of Quaid-e-Azam? - Less cryptic and sets a context. I'd personally prefer sticking to the Jinnah hook because it is unique; lots of people took up fasts with Gandhi at various points in his political career. Ashwin147 (talk) 08:42, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
- 16px I am happy with any of the three hooks, the nominator would prefer to go with ALT2. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:14, 26 June 2013 (UTC)
