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<small>Created by [[User:Shemtov613|Shemtov613]] ([[User talk:Shemtov613|talk]]) and [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) at 15:12, 3 December 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Shemtov613|Shemtov613]] ([[User talk:Shemtov613|talk]]) and [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) at 15:12, 3 December 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
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Revision as of 01:41, 6 December 2019

Big Snow American Dream

  • ... that Big Snow American Dream in New Jersey is the first indoor ski park in either the U.S. or Canada? Source: NJ.com
    • ALT1:... that Big Snow American Dream in New Jersey, which opened in December 2019, is the first indoor ski park in either the U.S. or Canada? Source: NJ.com
    • ALT2:... that Big Snow American Dream in New Jersey became the first indoor ski park in either the U.S. or Canada when it opened in December 2019? Source: NJ.com
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/WXTV (Ohio)
  • Comment: I (Epicgenius) am nominating this now because of the 7-day deadline, as the article was created on November 28. If the ski complex doesn't open as planned on December 5, Thursday, I will have a new ALT hook ready. epicgenius (talk) 15:16, 3 December 2019 (UTC)

Created by Shemtov613 (talk) and Epicgenius (talk). Nominated by Epicgenius (talk) at 15:12, 3 December 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough and long enough, I changed one sentence that sounded a bit like an ad, otherwise great. I appreciate you want to get it in before the 7 days. However, it will probably run after 5 December, so I think it is good to hold off on putting it in the queue until Thursday so that we can settle on a hook before promoting it. Also be aware that the last paragraph needs to be rewritten to present tense when the park opens. I prefer ALT2, but maybe would change 'this month' to 'December 2019', as that way it's a bit more versatile. Achaea (talk) 18:56, 3 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Re Thanks for the review, I have changed the hooks accordingly. The complex is set to open in 2 days, and will be updated accordingly. epicgenius (talk) 19:09, 3 December 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Re The article is updated now, as the complex has opened. epicgenius (talk) 01:41, 6 December 2019 (UTC)