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:*Moved to article space on Nov 30, so new enough. More than sufficient size at 11,523 characters. Abundant inline sourcing. Could not detect any problems with POV or close paraphrasing, looks very good overall. Now for the hooks:
 
:*Moved to article space on Nov 30, so new enough. More than sufficient size at 11,523 characters. Abundant inline sourcing. Could not detect any problems with POV or close paraphrasing, looks very good overall. Now for the hooks:
::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] OK for the original hook and ALT4.
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::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] OK for the original hook.
 
::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] AGF for ALT2 and ALT5 (offline sources).
 
::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] AGF for ALT2 and ALT5 (offline sources).
::Problem with ALT1: how do we know it is the ''first'' video? Problem with ALT3: "soft vision" is apparently not a quote (it does not appear in the source), so I guess it's an informal name for an eyesight problem - maybe it should be rephrased? I like the original hook and ALT1, both are slightly "controversial", while the rest are only moderately interesting (still, my third choice would be ALT5). [[User:GregorB|GregorB]] ([[User talk:GregorB|talk]]) 19:52, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
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::Problem with ALT1: how do we know it is the ''first'' video? Problem with ALT3: "soft vision" is apparently not a quote (it does not appear in the source), so I guess it's an informal name for an eyesight problem - maybe it should be rephrased? Problem with ALT4: too long at 209 characters. I like the original hook and ALT1, both are slightly "controversial", while the rest are only moderately interesting (still, my third choice would be ALT5). [[User:GregorB|GregorB]] ([[User talk:GregorB|talk]]) 19:52, 13 December 2012 (UTC)
  
 
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Bill Whittle

Created/expanded by 72.74.208.97 (talk). Nominated by 72.74.218.249 (talk) at 17:31, 1 December 2012 (UTC)

  • Moved to article space on Nov 30, so new enough. More than sufficient size at 11,523 characters. Abundant inline sourcing. Could not detect any problems with POV or close paraphrasing, looks very good overall. Now for the hooks:
  • Symbol confirmed.svg OK for the original hook.
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg AGF for ALT2 and ALT5 (offline sources).
Problem with ALT1: how do we know it is the first video? Problem with ALT3: "soft vision" is apparently not a quote (it does not appear in the source), so I guess it's an informal name for an eyesight problem - maybe it should be rephrased? Problem with ALT4: too long at 209 characters. I like the original hook and ALT1, both are slightly "controversial", while the rest are only moderately interesting (still, my third choice would be ALT5). GregorB (talk) 19:52, 13 December 2012 (UTC)