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[[File:Turdus dissimilis male - Ang Khang.jpg|100x100px|Male Black-breasted Thrush]]
 
[[File:Turdus dissimilis male - Ang Khang.jpg|100x100px|Male Black-breasted Thrush]]
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* ... that the '''[[Black-breasted Thrush]]'''{{`s}} ''(male pictured)'' [[Bird#Breeding|breeding]] time differs depending on which country they are situated in?
 
* ... that the '''[[Black-breasted Thrush]]'''{{`s}} ''(male pictured)'' [[Bird#Breeding|breeding]] time differs depending on which country they are situated in?
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Luis Garcia (pitcher)]]
 
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:* ''Comment'': Featured picture – will make a nice lead hook.
 
:* ''Comment'': Featured picture – will make a nice lead hook.
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Bloom6132|Bloom6132]] ([[User talk:Bloom6132|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 00:46, 16 January 2014 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Bloom6132|Bloom6132]] ([[User talk:Bloom6132|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 00:46, 16 January 2014 (UTC)</small>.
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Bloom6132}} This is a nice article, a former stub expanded x5. The article is long enough and has been expanded recently enough, with sufficient referencing. The hook is interesting, but I'd cut off the end as it is a little confusing at the moment - i.e. remove the "even though they are concentrated..." bit. The image is encyclopedic, used in the article (an FP as well) - no obvious close paraphrasing. If you would be happy to change the hook per my suggestions, or explain why I'm wrong (which is highly probable), then I'd be more than happy to green-tick this! :) [[User:Acather96|Acather96]] ([[User talk:Acather96#top|click here to contact me]]) 19:21, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Bloom6132}} This is a nice article, a former stub expanded x5. The article is long enough and has been expanded recently enough, with sufficient referencing. The hook is interesting, but I'd cut off the end as it is a little confusing at the moment - i.e. remove the "even though they are concentrated..." bit. The image is encyclopedic, used in the article (an FP as well) - no obvious close paraphrasing. If you would be happy to change the hook per my suggestions, or explain why I'm wrong (which is highly probable), then I'd be more than happy to green-tick this! :) [[User:Acather96|Acather96]] ([[User talk:Acather96#top|click here to contact me]]) 19:21, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
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*''Note to promotor:'' POTD on January 23rd and 30th are images of pretty birds, too. It may be a good idea to use this DYK nom on another day. Thanks. --[[User:PFHLai|PFHLai]] ([[User talk:PFHLai|talk]]) 22:58, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
 
*''Note to promotor:'' POTD on January 23rd and 30th are images of pretty birds, too. It may be a good idea to use this DYK nom on another day. Thanks. --[[User:PFHLai|PFHLai]] ([[User talk:PFHLai|talk]]) 22:58, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
  
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Black-breasted Thrush

Male Black-breasted Thrush

5x expanded by Bloom6132 (talk). Self nominated at 00:46, 16 January 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping This is a nice article, a former stub expanded x5. The article is long enough and has been expanded recently enough, with sufficient referencing. The hook is interesting, but I'd cut off the end as it is a little confusing at the moment - i.e. remove the "even though they are concentrated..." bit. The image is encyclopedic, used in the article (an FP as well) - no obvious close paraphrasing. If you would be happy to change the hook per my suggestions, or explain why I'm wrong (which is highly probable), then I'd be more than happy to green-tick this! :) Acather96 (click here to contact me) 19:21, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Fixed. Thanks for pointing that out! —Bloom6132 (talk) 19:43, 16 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Note to promotor: POTD on January 23rd and 30th are images of pretty birds, too. It may be a good idea to use this DYK nom on another day. Thanks. --PFHLai (talk) 22:58, 18 January 2014 (UTC)