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:Thanks for the review. The original hook is actually cited in the first sentence of the main body. '''ALT1''' is stated in the lead, but I won't object if someone feels the need to duplicate it under Business. [[User:Fuebaey|Fuebaey]] ([[User talk:Fuebaey|talk]]) 19:56, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
 
:Thanks for the review. The original hook is actually cited in the first sentence of the main body. '''ALT1''' is stated in the lead, but I won't object if someone feels the need to duplicate it under Business. [[User:Fuebaey|Fuebaey]] ([[User talk:Fuebaey|talk]]) 19:56, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
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:: Ooohh, I confused the two hooks above (I hate it when I do that.) At any rate, whether a lead sentence is or isn't a hook, info in the lead should be a summation of some fact(s) offered in the main text. And I can't add the necessary change because I am the reviewer. Conflict of interest, you know.[[User:Georgejdorner|Georgejdorner]] ([[User talk:Georgejdorner|talk]]) 20:46, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
  
 
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Cereal Killer Cafe

Created by Fuebaey (talk). Self nominated at 19:43, 13 December 2014 (UTC).

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Thanks for the review. The original hook is actually cited in the first sentence of the main body. ALT1 is stated in the lead, but I won't object if someone feels the need to duplicate it under Business. Fuebaey (talk) 19:56, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
Ooohh, I confused the two hooks above (I hate it when I do that.) At any rate, whether a lead sentence is or isn't a hook, info in the lead should be a summation of some fact(s) offered in the main text. And I can't add the necessary change because I am the reviewer. Conflict of interest, you know.Georgejdorner (talk) 20:46, 14 December 2014 (UTC)