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:Thanks for the review. The original hook is actually cited in the first sentence of the main body. '''ALT1''' is stated in the lead, but I won't object if someone feels the need to duplicate it under Business. [[User:Fuebaey|Fuebaey]] ([[User talk:Fuebaey|talk]]) 19:56, 14 December 2014 (UTC) | :Thanks for the review. The original hook is actually cited in the first sentence of the main body. '''ALT1''' is stated in the lead, but I won't object if someone feels the need to duplicate it under Business. [[User:Fuebaey|Fuebaey]] ([[User talk:Fuebaey|talk]]) 19:56, 14 December 2014 (UTC) | ||
| + | :: Ooohh, I confused the two hooks above (I hate it when I do that.) At any rate, whether a lead sentence is or isn't a hook, info in the lead should be a summation of some fact(s) offered in the main text. And I can't add the necessary change because I am the reviewer. Conflict of interest, you know.[[User:Georgejdorner|Georgejdorner]] ([[User talk:Georgejdorner|talk]]) 20:46, 14 December 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Cereal Killer Cafe
- ... that the owners of Cereal Killer Cafe came up with the idea after being hungover?
- ALT1:... that the Cereal Killer Cafe is the first cereal themed cafe in the United Kingdom?
- Reviewed: Fourth nomination
Created by Fuebaey (talk). Self nominated at 19:43, 13 December 2014 (UTC).
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- Thanks for the review. The original hook is actually cited in the first sentence of the main body. ALT1 is stated in the lead, but I won't object if someone feels the need to duplicate it under Business. Fuebaey (talk) 19:56, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
- Ooohh, I confused the two hooks above (I hate it when I do that.) At any rate, whether a lead sentence is or isn't a hook, info in the lead should be a summation of some fact(s) offered in the main text. And I can't add the necessary change because I am the reviewer. Conflict of interest, you know.Georgejdorner (talk) 20:46, 14 December 2014 (UTC)