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* ... that the '''[[Challacombe scale]]''' assesses the severity of a [[xerostomia|dry mouth]]? | * ... that the '''[[Challacombe scale]]''' assesses the severity of a [[xerostomia|dry mouth]]? | ||
− | ** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[Challacombe scale]]''' measures CODS? | + | ** '''ALT1''':... that the '''[[Challacombe scale]]''' measures [[xerostomia|CODS]]? |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/A Clare Benediction|A Clare Benediction]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/A Clare Benediction|A Clare Benediction]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]), [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]), and [[User:Redrose64|Redrose64]] ([[User talk:Redrose64|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) at 17:49, 26 June 2019 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]), [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]), and [[User:Redrose64|Redrose64]] ([[User talk:Redrose64|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) at 17:49, 26 June 2019 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:::*Thank you for reviewing {{reply|Nizil Shah}}...amended hook ('''ALT0'''), but asking {{Ping|Philafrenzy}} to adjust image. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 06:01, 8 July 2019 (UTC) | :::*Thank you for reviewing {{reply|Nizil Shah}}...amended hook ('''ALT0'''), but asking {{Ping|Philafrenzy}} to adjust image. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 06:01, 8 July 2019 (UTC) | ||
:::::Cropped the image a little from the left. [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]) 09:13, 8 July 2019 (UTC) | :::::Cropped the image a little from the left. [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]) 09:13, 8 July 2019 (UTC) | ||
+ | ::::::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Image looks better. I would go for ALT0 hook but if promoter is fine with ALT1, I have no problem. Approving both hooks. Added link in CODS as well. Regards,-[[User:Nizil Shah|Nizil]] ([[User talk:Nizil Shah|talk]]) 14:03, 17 July 2019 (UTC) | ||
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Challacombe score
- ... that the Challacombe scale assesses the severity of a dry mouth?
- ALT1:... that the Challacombe scale measures CODS?
- Reviewed: A Clare Benediction
Created by Whispyhistory (talk), Philafrenzy (talk), and Redrose64 (talk). Nominated by Whispyhistory (talk) at 17:49, 26 June 2019 (UTC).
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New, long enough, cited, neutral, no copyvio, free image, QPQ done, short hook. I prefer ALT0. ALT1 using CODS would be very unclear for reader and may feel bad when he find out that it was just a clickbait. I think, in ALT0, dry mouth should be linked to Xerostomia. I think cropped image with tongue in the centre would be better suited for DYK. Everything else is OK.-Nizil (talk) 05:11, 8 July 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks Template:Reply the idea was serious first hook with the image, or quirky hook at the bottom without the image. Philafrenzy (talk) 09:03, 8 July 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing Template:Reply...amended hook (ALT0), but asking Template:Ping to adjust image. Whispyhistory (talk) 06:01, 8 July 2019 (UTC)
- Cropped the image a little from the left. Philafrenzy (talk) 09:13, 8 July 2019 (UTC)