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Revision as of 13:34, 6 December 2013

Charodeika-class monitor

5x expanded by Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Self nominated at 17:21, 5 December 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article length good, hook length good. Expansion start date and factor (more like 100x) verified. Hook fact book source can be accepted; hook interest is only okay, but offhand I don't see a better one. Neutrality okay, seems copyvio free. But "Kudriatsev" versus "Kudriavtsev" in the article text – which is the right spelling and does the hook have the right one? Also note there is a busted "convert" template showing in the text (third sentence of "Armament"). These should be fixed before it goes up on the main page. Wasted Time R (talk) 13:34, 6 December 2013 (UTC)