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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Created exactly 7 days before nomination, long enough. My concern about the content is that the [[WP:NOTABILITY|notability]] of the subject isn't established. According to [[WP:LEAD]], the lead should "explain why the topic is notable", but the lead right now is just one sentence describing the subject's occupation. The article body reads like a dry resume as well: this isn't a DYK criteria, but please consider improving it. As for the hook, I doubt that it would be interesting to a broad audience. I don't think general international readers can easily relate to [[E. T. A. Hoffmann]] or  [[Ludwigsburg Festival]]. Can you find a more suitable fact? QPQ is in order. [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]] ([[User talk:HaEr48|talk]]) 18:20, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Created exactly 7 days before nomination, long enough. My concern about the content is that the [[WP:NOTABILITY|notability]] of the subject isn't established. According to [[WP:LEAD]], the lead should "explain why the topic is notable", but the lead right now is just one sentence describing the subject's occupation. The article body reads like a dry resume as well: this isn't a DYK criteria, but please consider improving it. As for the hook, I doubt that it would be interesting to a broad audience. I don't think general international readers can easily relate to [[E. T. A. Hoffmann]] or  [[Ludwigsburg Festival]]. Can you find a more suitable fact? QPQ is in order. [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]] ([[User talk:HaEr48|talk]]) 18:20, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
 
::: Then patience, please. So far, I just translated. The typical German lead is one sentence ;) - Returning from a day out, I have many other things that need to be done. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:08, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
 
::: Then patience, please. So far, I just translated. The typical German lead is one sentence ;) - Returning from a day out, I have many other things that need to be done. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:08, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
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::: [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]], I expanded the lead. If reader know the writer ETA Hoffman only as the hero of [[Les contes d'Hoffmann]], this would be a good opportunity to learn that he also composed opera ;) - They also should rather look at [[Schloss Ludwigsburg]] for a change than the Gärtnerplatztheater again. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 07:26, 22 May 2018 (UTC)
 
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Christina Gerstberger

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 10:15, 26 April 2018 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg Created exactly 7 days before nomination, long enough. My concern about the content is that the notability of the subject isn't established. According to WP:LEAD, the lead should "explain why the topic is notable", but the lead right now is just one sentence describing the subject's occupation. The article body reads like a dry resume as well: this isn't a DYK criteria, but please consider improving it. As for the hook, I doubt that it would be interesting to a broad audience. I don't think general international readers can easily relate to E. T. A. Hoffmann or Ludwigsburg Festival. Can you find a more suitable fact? QPQ is in order. HaEr48 (talk) 18:20, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
Then patience, please. So far, I just translated. The typical German lead is one sentence ;) - Returning from a day out, I have many other things that need to be done. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:08, 17 May 2018 (UTC)
HaEr48, I expanded the lead. If reader know the writer ETA Hoffman only as the hero of Les contes d'Hoffmann, this would be a good opportunity to learn that he also composed opera ;) - They also should rather look at Schloss Ludwigsburg for a change than the Gärtnerplatztheater again. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:26, 22 May 2018 (UTC)