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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 06:16, 13 July 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
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* <s>... that '''[[Cynthia Cooke]]''' ''"did fail to perform the deep and graceful traditional curtsy due, thereby insulting the First Lord of the Admiralty"'', and was punished by being ducked underwater?</s>
 
* <s>... that '''[[Cynthia Cooke]]''' ''"did fail to perform the deep and graceful traditional curtsy due, thereby insulting the First Lord of the Admiralty"'', and was punished by being ducked underwater?</s>
  
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<small>5x expanded by [[User:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:45, 4 July 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:45, 4 July 2016 (UTC).</small>
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: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting bio, on few but good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hooks: I think the original is too incidental and does no justice to her achievements, the ALT too broad in scope. I suggest you mention [[Queen Alexandra's Royal Naval Nursing Service]] (hooky in a way) and something small and specific in addition (could be one of the two). Other questions: Why do you have the quotes italic? How do you feel about an infobox? Can you combine the one-sentence-para with another? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:38, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
 
: [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Interesting bio, on few but good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hooks: I think the original is too incidental and does no justice to her achievements, the ALT too broad in scope. I suggest you mention [[Queen Alexandra's Royal Naval Nursing Service]] (hooky in a way) and something small and specific in addition (could be one of the two). Other questions: Why do you have the quotes italic? How do you feel about an infobox? Can you combine the one-sentence-para with another? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:38, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
 
::I've added a new alt, should be better. I have the quotes in italic because... that's the way I learned to do it in University. No other reason really! I'll look into an infobox now and will try and sort out the paragraph. [[User:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Message me]]) 23:28, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
 
::I've added a new alt, should be better. I have the quotes in italic because... that's the way I learned to do it in University. No other reason really! I'll look into an infobox now and will try and sort out the paragraph. [[User:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry]] ([[User talk:Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry|Message me]]) 23:28, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
  
::: [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] ALT2, thank you! --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 07:02, 8 July 2016 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 06:16, 13 July 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:16, 13 July 2016 (UTC)

Cynthia Cooke

  • ... that Cynthia Cooke "did fail to perform the deep and graceful traditional curtsy due, thereby insulting the First Lord of the Admiralty", and was punished by being ducked underwater?

5x expanded by Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry (talk). Self-nominated at 14:45, 4 July 2016 (UTC).

Symbol question.svg Interesting bio, on few but good sources, offline sources accepted AGF. The hooks: I think the original is too incidental and does no justice to her achievements, the ALT too broad in scope. I suggest you mention Queen Alexandra's Royal Naval Nursing Service (hooky in a way) and something small and specific in addition (could be one of the two). Other questions: Why do you have the quotes italic? How do you feel about an infobox? Can you combine the one-sentence-para with another? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:38, 6 July 2016 (UTC)
I've added a new alt, should be better. I have the quotes in italic because... that's the way I learned to do it in University. No other reason really! I'll look into an infobox now and will try and sort out the paragraph. Chase me ladies, I'm the Cavalry (Message me) 23:28, 7 July 2016 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg ALT2, thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:02, 8 July 2016 (UTC)