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* ... that after returning from exile in Ivory Coast, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''' now has an official mandate to divide regions in [[Ghana]]?  <small>[see this [http://ghanamps.com/mps/details.php?id=121] and [this too [http://www.myjoyonline.com/politics/2017/January-11th/2nd-ministerial-list-out-akufo-addo-creates-new-ministries-re-aligns-old.php]</small>
 
* ... that after returning from exile in Ivory Coast, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''' now has an official mandate to divide regions in [[Ghana]]?  <small>[see this [http://ghanamps.com/mps/details.php?id=121] and [this too [http://www.myjoyonline.com/politics/2017/January-11th/2nd-ministerial-list-out-akufo-addo-creates-new-ministries-re-aligns-old.php]</small>
::*'''ALT1'''... that Ghanaian computer scientist, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', once went into exile after he was tagged as a trouble maker by the military regime?
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::*'''ALT1'''<s>... that Ghanaian computer scientist, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', once went into exile after he was tagged as a trouble maker by the military regime?</s>
::*'''ALT2'''... that '''[[Dan Botwe]]''' once contested to be flag bearer of the [[New Patriotic Party]] because he felt the presidency of Ghana was not a retirement package for the aged?
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::*'''ALT2'''... that '''[[Dan Botwe]]''' once contested to be flag bearer of the [[New Patriotic Party]] because he felt the presidency of Ghana was not a "retirement" package for the aged?
 
::::*'''ALT3'''...  that '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', a former political exile, has an aim to divide parts of [[Ghana]].
 
::::*'''ALT3'''...  that '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', a former political exile, has an aim to divide parts of [[Ghana]].
 
:::::*'''ALT4'''... that [[Ghanaian]] computer scientist, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', has been described as a heavy weight, hard hitter?
 
:::::*'''ALT4'''... that [[Ghanaian]] computer scientist, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', has been described as a heavy weight, hard hitter?
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:* I suggest an amalgamation — '''<font color="#da0000">[[User:Daß Wölf|Daß]]</font>'''<small>&thinsp;</small>'''<font color="#0044c3">[[User talk:Daß Wölf|Wölf]]</font>''' 23:26, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
 
:* I suggest an amalgamation — '''<font color="#da0000">[[User:Daß Wölf|Daß]]</font>'''<small>&thinsp;</small>'''<font color="#0044c3">[[User talk:Daß Wölf|Wölf]]</font>''' 23:26, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
 
::*'''ALT5'''... that [[Ghana]]ian computer scientist and former political exile, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', now has an official mandate to divide regions in his home country?
 
::*'''ALT5'''... that [[Ghana]]ian computer scientist and former political exile, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', now has an official mandate to divide regions in his home country?
 
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:::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. (There really was a lot of close paraphrasing in the article, but I edited it out.) QPQ done. Since this is a BLP, I struck ALT1. I do not see anything about dividing the country, as in ALT0, ALT3, and ALT5; perhaps this information was rewritten in the article. ALT2 is a little confusing for casual readers; why is the flag bearer position and the presidency conflated in the hook? ALT4 violates the close paraphrasing rule since it does not put the president's words in quotes. 
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:::*I suggest something along these lines:
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:::*'''ALT6''': ... that in 2017 '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', a former political exile, became a cabinet member and minister in Ghana's newly created [[Ministry of Regional Reorganization and Development]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:05, 30 July 2017 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 23:05, 30 July 2017

Dan Botwe

  • ... that after returning from exile in Ivory Coast, Dan Botwe now has an official mandate to divide regions in Ghana? [see this [1] and [this too [2]
  • ALT1... that Ghanaian computer scientist, Dan Botwe, once went into exile after he was tagged as a trouble maker by the military regime?
  • ALT2... that Dan Botwe once contested to be flag bearer of the New Patriotic Party because he felt the presidency of Ghana was not a "retirement" package for the aged?
  • ALT3... that Dan Botwe, a former political exile, has an aim to divide parts of Ghana.
  • ALT4... that Ghanaian computer scientist, Dan Botwe, has been described as a heavy weight, hard hitter?

Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 17:01, 22 June 2017 (UTC).

  • I suggest an amalgamation — DaßWölf 23:26, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
  • ALT5... that Ghanaian computer scientist and former political exile, Dan Botwe, now has an official mandate to divide regions in his home country?
  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. (There really was a lot of close paraphrasing in the article, but I edited it out.) QPQ done. Since this is a BLP, I struck ALT1. I do not see anything about dividing the country, as in ALT0, ALT3, and ALT5; perhaps this information was rewritten in the article. ALT2 is a little confusing for casual readers; why is the flag bearer position and the presidency conflated in the hook? ALT4 violates the close paraphrasing rule since it does not put the president's words in quotes.
  • I suggest something along these lines:
  • ALT6: ... that in 2017 Dan Botwe, a former political exile, became a cabinet member and minister in Ghana's newly created Ministry of Regional Reorganization and Development? Yoninah (talk) 23:05, 30 July 2017 (UTC)