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* ... that after returning from exile in Ivory Coast, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''' now has an official mandate to divide regions in [[Ghana]]? <small>[see this [http://ghanamps.com/mps/details.php?id=121] and [this too [http://www.myjoyonline.com/politics/2017/January-11th/2nd-ministerial-list-out-akufo-addo-creates-new-ministries-re-aligns-old.php]</small> | * ... that after returning from exile in Ivory Coast, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''' now has an official mandate to divide regions in [[Ghana]]? <small>[see this [http://ghanamps.com/mps/details.php?id=121] and [this too [http://www.myjoyonline.com/politics/2017/January-11th/2nd-ministerial-list-out-akufo-addo-creates-new-ministries-re-aligns-old.php]</small> | ||
| − | ::*'''ALT1'''... that Ghanaian computer scientist, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', once went into exile after he was tagged as a trouble maker by the military regime? | + | ::*'''ALT1'''<s>... that Ghanaian computer scientist, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', once went into exile after he was tagged as a trouble maker by the military regime?</s> |
| − | ::*'''ALT2'''... that | + | ::*'''ALT2'''... that '''[[Dan Botwe]]''' once contested to be flag bearer of the [[New Patriotic Party]] because he felt the presidency of Ghana was not a "retirement" package for the aged? |
::::*'''ALT3'''... that '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', a former political exile, has an aim to divide parts of [[Ghana]]. | ::::*'''ALT3'''... that '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', a former political exile, has an aim to divide parts of [[Ghana]]. | ||
:::::*'''ALT4'''... that [[Ghanaian]] computer scientist, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', has been described as a heavy weight, hard hitter? | :::::*'''ALT4'''... that [[Ghanaian]] computer scientist, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', has been described as a heavy weight, hard hitter? | ||
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:* I suggest an amalgamation — '''<font color="#da0000">[[User:Daß Wölf|Daß]]</font>'''<small> </small>'''<font color="#0044c3">[[User talk:Daß Wölf|Wölf]]</font>''' 23:26, 24 July 2017 (UTC) | :* I suggest an amalgamation — '''<font color="#da0000">[[User:Daß Wölf|Daß]]</font>'''<small> </small>'''<font color="#0044c3">[[User talk:Daß Wölf|Wölf]]</font>''' 23:26, 24 July 2017 (UTC) | ||
::*'''ALT5'''... that [[Ghana]]ian computer scientist and former political exile, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', now has an official mandate to divide regions in his home country? | ::*'''ALT5'''... that [[Ghana]]ian computer scientist and former political exile, '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', now has an official mandate to divide regions in his home country? | ||
| − | + | :::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. (There really was a lot of close paraphrasing in the article, but I edited it out.) QPQ done. Since this is a BLP, I struck ALT1. I do not see anything about dividing the country, as in ALT0, ALT3, and ALT5; perhaps this information was rewritten in the article. ALT2 is a little confusing for casual readers; why is the flag bearer position and the presidency conflated in the hook? ALT4 violates the close paraphrasing rule since it does not put the president's words in quotes. | |
| + | :::*I suggest something along these lines: | ||
| + | :::*'''ALT6''': ... that in 2017 '''[[Dan Botwe]]''', a former political exile, became a cabinet member and minister in Ghana's newly created [[Ministry of Regional Reorganization and Development]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:05, 30 July 2017 (UTC) | ||
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Dan Botwe
- ... that after returning from exile in Ivory Coast, Dan Botwe now has an official mandate to divide regions in Ghana? [see this [1] and [this too [2]
- ALT1
... that Ghanaian computer scientist, Dan Botwe, once went into exile after he was tagged as a trouble maker by the military regime? - ALT2... that Dan Botwe once contested to be flag bearer of the New Patriotic Party because he felt the presidency of Ghana was not a "retirement" package for the aged?
- ALT1
Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 17:01, 22 June 2017 (UTC).
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- ALT5... that Ghanaian computer scientist and former political exile, Dan Botwe, now has an official mandate to divide regions in his home country?
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. (There really was a lot of close paraphrasing in the article, but I edited it out.) QPQ done. Since this is a BLP, I struck ALT1. I do not see anything about dividing the country, as in ALT0, ALT3, and ALT5; perhaps this information was rewritten in the article. ALT2 is a little confusing for casual readers; why is the flag bearer position and the presidency conflated in the hook? ALT4 violates the close paraphrasing rule since it does not put the president's words in quotes.- I suggest something along these lines:
- ALT6: ... that in 2017 Dan Botwe, a former political exile, became a cabinet member and minister in Ghana's newly created Ministry of Regional Reorganization and Development? Yoninah (talk) 23:05, 30 July 2017 (UTC)