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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutral, cited. No copyvios/close paraphrasing detected, but you need to use quotation marks for "satirical fairy-tale" both in the article and the hook if that is a direct quote; it is very specific language. AGF on German sources. This hook is awkwardly worded mostly because there's so much going on here. In particular, the "called a satirical fairy-tale" phrase seems out-of-place and jarring. How do you feel about replacing that whole phrase with "a "satirical fairy-tale" by Ernst Krenek" and then letting the "two other short operas" explain the format of the piece? ~ [[User:BU Rob13|<b>Rob</b><small><sub>13</sub></small>]]<sup style="margin-left:-1.0ex;">[[User talk:BU Rob13|Talk]]</sup> 17:01, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutral, cited. No copyvios/close paraphrasing detected, but you need to use quotation marks for "satirical fairy-tale" both in the article and the hook if that is a direct quote; it is very specific language. AGF on German sources. This hook is awkwardly worded mostly because there's so much going on here. In particular, the "called a satirical fairy-tale" phrase seems out-of-place and jarring. How do you feel about replacing that whole phrase with "a "satirical fairy-tale" by Ernst Krenek" and then letting the "two other short operas" explain the format of the piece? ~ [[User:BU Rob13|<b>Rob</b><small><sub>13</sub></small>]]<sup style="margin-left:-1.0ex;">[[User talk:BU Rob13|Talk]]</sup> 17:01, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
 
::* Thank you for looking! Do you mean "one-act" is redundant to "short"?
 
::* Thank you for looking! Do you mean "one-act" is redundant to "short"?
::: '''ALT1''': ... that '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom'') by [[Ernst Krenek]] called a satirical fairy-tale, was premiered with two other short operas in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]?
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::: '''ALT1''': ... that '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom'') by [[Ernst Krenek]], called a satirical fairy-tale, was premiered with two other short operas in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]?
 
::: '''ALT2''': ... that the short satirical opera '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom'') by [[Ernst Krenek]] was premiered in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]? Need to go. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 17:21, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
 
::: '''ALT2''': ... that the short satirical opera '''''[[Das geheime Königreich]]''''' (''The Secret Kingdom'') by [[Ernst Krenek]] was premiered in [[Internationale Maifestspiele Wiesbaden|Wiesbaden in May 1928]]? Need to go. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 17:21, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
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::: The "quote": it's only the translation of a quote, - don't know how to clarify in a short hook. --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 18:00, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 18:00, 23 May 2017

Das geheime Königreich

  • Reviewed: Beatrice Alexander
  • Comment: it happened 6 May, - too late for that day, sorry, - the May Festival was called Maiwoche that year, the first festival after World War I, but too difficult to explain in a hook. I see that I will have to update the festival's article.

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 17:24, 6 May 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, neutral, cited. No copyvios/close paraphrasing detected, but you need to use quotation marks for "satirical fairy-tale" both in the article and the hook if that is a direct quote; it is very specific language. AGF on German sources. This hook is awkwardly worded mostly because there's so much going on here. In particular, the "called a satirical fairy-tale" phrase seems out-of-place and jarring. How do you feel about replacing that whole phrase with "a "satirical fairy-tale" by Ernst Krenek" and then letting the "two other short operas" explain the format of the piece? ~ Rob13Talk 17:01, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
  • Thank you for looking! Do you mean "one-act" is redundant to "short"?
ALT1: ... that Das geheime Königreich (The Secret Kingdom) by Ernst Krenek, called a satirical fairy-tale, was premiered with two other short operas in Wiesbaden in May 1928?
ALT2: ... that the short satirical opera Das geheime Königreich (The Secret Kingdom) by Ernst Krenek was premiered in Wiesbaden in May 1928? Need to go. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:21, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
The "quote": it's only the translation of a quote, - don't know how to clarify in a short hook. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 18:00, 23 May 2017 (UTC)